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Already tied, very, very beautiful! [Like] I hope both the protagonist and Snape can successfully lift their imprisonment! They all deserve a bright future! Since the protagonist has no cp, I hope Snape also has no cp. The relationship between family members and teachers and students is also very beautiful for a lifetime! There are common topics and thoughts on the same frequency! I don't want Snape to give up his life for Lily or Harry! I don't want the protagonist to pay too much attention to Harry, who has been with him for many years. I hope Snape pays more attention to the protagonist and asks the author not to abuse him. The two of them have been very miserable in the past. Let them go smoothly in the future. [Love] The article is really good. There are no misunderstandings or temptations. It is a relationship that really considers each other! Of course, I am also really curious about how Snape would react if he discovered the caged bird.

It's really good. I recommend everyone to watch it. It allows you to jump out of the Iron Triangle plot and see the life of a student at Hogwarts College. Compared with plots such as the Sorcerer's Stone and the Basilisk in the Chamber of Secrets that can be skipped with eyes closed, this kind of original plot attracts me more. The writing is very good and the character descriptions are great. It's better than those high-scoring HP invincible novels. Oh, I'm so happy that I don't have to watch a time traveler in his 30s act out an ambiguous love story with an 11.2-Year-old girl with a blushing face and a heartbeat.

Saw Chapter 34. A wonderful stage play that deserves a five-star rating. Chapter 200 The main character is indecisive. His character is that he has been on the battlefield of Konoha for several years. He has been tortured by a caged bird for 16 years. He knows how restrictive the curse seal is. But when he was looking for the solution of the caged bird, he knew that someone could control the caged bird, but he still didn't use ruthless methods.

This is a real fanfic. It fits my imagination of magic spells and potions. The protagonist is also very smart. The book about magic spells and potions is also very detailed, and the author writes it very delicately. Different from other cool novels, this one should be slowly upgraded. The protagonist's mind and thinking are also relatively mature, and there won't be any embarrassing situations. After reading the previous ones, they were quite heart-warming and made me feel relaxed. It's not like other cool books that are too open-minded or too cliche (I don't mean to criticize ordinary cool books, it's just that I personally don't like to read them). It's not easy to find such a book in Tomato. ヾ(*´ー`*)ノ′′Author Jiang I love you＾3＾. I just don't understand why the rating is so low, so I give it a five-star rating. (✧∇✧)★★★★★ It's tied, here's another five-star rating, the author's writing is really good! Delicate and not verbose, the protagonist Jiang and Si Jiao are so cute! ! ! A lot of lovely professors, classmates and other people all have distinct personalities, and the descriptions of magic (such as spells, potions, magic texts, etc.) Are very detailed and accurate. At first glance, it seems that they have carefully reviewed the materials (*￣3￣)╭♡ It makes people truly understand the magic of magic. The author's writing style is very good! ! Looking forward to the next story! PS: I hope the author will make this book a long one, I really can't get enough of it! (People*)

I have read this article over and over again since I discovered it and finished it. It is my favorite article on Tomato about Sri Lanka teaching without cp. The relationship between master and disciple is very important! The relationship between Jielai and Si Jiao developed completely step by step. There was no bloodshed or misunderstanding. They could only rely on each other and grow together. Jelaire is the most important person in the long life of the Bennes Cult. He is a family member who will never leave, a master and apprentice who learn and grow together, a confidant who is unguarded against each other, and the only one he absolutely loves. I was really teary-eyed, but I had tears streaming down my face several times while watching it. The author's writing style and plot conception are really good. It can be seen that he is very good at writing emotional scenes and plot lines. Except for the plot of resolving the caged bird in the early stage, which I felt was a little bit tortured for the climax of the plot, everything else is very good. This small flaw does not affect anything. Follow Jerell's perspective and experience the joys, sorrows and joys of Sri Lanka, the joy of taking on a new apprentice, the anger and sorrow of Jerell's caged bird crisis, the determination to keep the apprentice away from everything, the touch of having a birthday cake together, because of the blurted out "Father", the only two Snapes promised, the shocking and delicious love. , Has nothing to do with romance, it is a blend of all emotions. For Si Jiao, it is such a perfect dream... To borrow the author's original text, the relationship that Si Jiao wants is unique. Lily cannot satisfy it because she has a big and small Potter, and the twin sons cannot be satisfied because they have their own families. Only Jelaire can perfectly satisfy everything. "He hopes for the kind of emotion that will remain unchanged even after thousands of years. No matter what the type, no matter the day or night, it doesn't need to be so intense, but it will always be there." "Then, did he get it?" "Got it" Could there be a better ending for Stirling? Finally, I would like to express my gratitude for the wonderful story brought by the author. I look forward to watching the movie. I hope that every Sri Lankan religion can have a Jelel!

It's good to watch, not too many flaws. The teacher-student relationship is not a teacher-student relationship. I love it so much. Now Severus is a tsundere old professor who knows how to love and loves (crossed out). What do you say about the protagonist? There was a bit of glass slag mixed with sugar in the early stage, but after solving the mark problem, it will be fine. The friendship between Mugawara and Uzumaki Tomoeizumi is super, super, Tomozumi: I will find a way for my friend to let him be free. (Separation mark) Eagle: I will try my best to improve my strength to let him live (genocide incident) The interaction between the master and the disciple, and the trust are really at their peak. Although the process of hiding each other's secrets is different, the ending is simply different paths to the same destination [face covering]

The first part is really good, especially the teacher-student relationship. When Lupine appears, I can endure it and reconcile in the end. Well, I feel like there is a lump in my throat at this point. In the latest part, The Godfather of Dogs, Harry understands the past and present. After reading it, I feel a little depressed and a little bitter. Because I have been bullied before, so I am completely opposed to this kind of thing. The bully committed a crime when he was young, and then repented and changed his mind. For the victim, it is completely impossible to forgive the bully, especially the dog godfather, who still has snot in his mouth, and does not feel stupid at all that he is wrong. I feel that the final direction will be a happy ending of making dumplings, shaking hands and making peace with the former enemies? ? In short, the author's writing is good, the writing style is very good, and he is friendly to the four members of the Jie Dao. It's just me who can't let go and hates them to death. Ps: Being friendly to both the Sect and the Jie Dao Group is my highlight.

HP wrote a story about Snape that was at the ceiling level. I actually abandoned it once at the beginning because I saw the caged bird and didn't like the idea of ​​having to put a prisoner on the protagonist. Later, I read the book again, and it was really good. The protagonist's gold finger was quite open, and he knew the plot, but the process was very smooth, and the emotions were handled very well. The ending of Severus in this book is one of the most satisfying I have ever seen. He has family, friendship, and learned reconciliation. He still protects Harry Potter, but he will not fail to cherish his own life. He desires honor and power, and really writes the ambition of a Slytherin. I think Jelaire's image creation is very successful. He is not perfect and has suffered a lot, but he unexpectedly fits in with Severus. He is loyal, strong, and very delicate. The two of them are redeemed in both directions. The relationship between Jelaire and Severus is that they are both teachers and friends, and they can both sacrifice their lives for each other. Severus could put down his body to plead with Grindelwald for Jelaire, break the master-disciple contract in order to protect him, and Jelaire could risk his life and death for Severus. When they met, Severus was still young, and Jelaire's company prevented him from completely turning into the Professor Snape in the original book. He was still vicious and mean, but he was respected and trusted by many people. He was honored and surrounded by friends, relatives, teachers and apprentices, and he truly became a real person with flesh and blood. The supporting characters in this article, including Dumbledore, Grindelwald, Harry Potter, and Draco, are all very three-dimensional. They have a selfish side and a kind side. It cannot be said that they are whitewashed, but you will not hate them at all, and Grindelwald and Dumbledore will also have a good ending. I am very grateful to the author for bringing such a story, which makes me seem to have a glimpse of a corner of the parallel world. I hope everyone can be happy.

After reading the first volume, I feel very good. What makes me most satisfied is that the protagonist has his own life and opinions, and does not deviate from the introduction of the article. It is said that the relationship between teachers and students is the relationship between teachers and students, and there is no falsehood. Some articles and introductions say that writing about Sri Lanka has great results. A lot of pages are devoted to pleasing Harry Potter and many Gryffindors, and they even participate in various blood packs of favorite characters in those adventures. This is not to say that it is not good to intervene, but what is the difference between those articles and the original works when they delete the protagonists? Some characters are even extremely OOC. The interactions with other famous characters in HP are also just right, neither seeming flattering nor too purposeful. Although He Sijiao wanted to learn potions to cure his seal at the beginning, he didn't seem to be very flattering or particularly purposeful. Later, the relationship with Sijiao was also gradual, and the bond became deeper and deeper. Moreover, the character's personality is still very full, and he is not OOC. At least he wrote the Sijiao in my mind. I love him so much.

Finished reading it in one sitting. It's a very intuitive feeling. I have read a lot of HP fanfics, but I still feel that there is something missing about the description of the personal trainer. But this book made me feel that Su Jiao is a real person, a character with flesh and blood. The author really brought it to life. It is a story in which the protagonist and the personal trainer redeem each other, grow up with each other, and move toward a brighter future. The relationship between master and apprentice is really touching, they understand each other and care about each other. Make them have a tacit understanding. This is one of the fanfics that I am quite satisfied with recently. There is some Naruto content in it, which is about the background story of the protagonist's first time travel. Although I don't understand it, I can still accept it. This is the first book review I have done in a long time. Overall, I am very satisfied with this book. Still highly recommended. The author will make you feel that the characters in it are all alive, making you feel that you are really in a magical world, rather than the feeling of a world separated by a wall like a paper man.

"Never Forget Your Original Intention" is really well written, and I really want to see it presented in the form of a stage play. The author's writing style is very good and I highly recommend it. Although it is not finished, it still retains its original intention. This article is really good and beautiful.

To be honest, this is my favorite non-CP HP fanfic. Both the character creation and the description of the plot are very, very, very deep in my heart. The relationship between Jellel and Professor Snape really transformed very naturally. The part where Professor Snape's inner thoughts change and the Patronus changes is my favorite part. I feel that if the professor can really figure it out, it should be like this. It can be seen that the author really likes the characters he created (except for the pink toad and Fudge)

Like it so much. . . Even if Jerel and Professor Snape are not in love, the relationship between them as teachers and friends is stronger and more touching than love. Moreover, the large-scale writing makes me feel very comfortable reading it, and it doesn't make me feel uneasy like other fans. You are so good at writing! ! Whether it is friendship, teacher-student relationship or love, it is all written very well. . . [Send heart] And the characters are very three-dimensional, I like them very much ヾ(*ΦωΦ)ツ I went, looked at it, scrolled down, and saw a reminder button, bur, why did it tie up so quickly, wow! ! Good Jelaire, good teacher S, everyone is good (except for some noseless and Death Eaters). Every time I am amazed by the emotions described in such a long and flowing way, it is very comfortable to watch, and everyone's image is very vivid and three-dimensional. The key is that the relationship between Jelair and the characters in the original work is handled very well! There won't be any highlight grabbing, but you will have your own unique highlight, which is great! (But I think Jelaire's setting of popping veins around the eyes in the early stage is really delicious, it's so refreshing... It feels like a grandma [shy])

This is a rare and unsystematic article. It is written with great care, and there are few typos or incorrect sentences that affect reading. It's a story that combines Naruto and HP, but there are very few ninjutsu elements. Although I practice it every day, I only threw a fireball once when I was in trouble. It's like an uncommon setting added for Byakugan and Caged Bird.

I really like this book. This is my favorite fanfic in HP that I have read so far. The family relationship between our Jiajie and the professor is very touching. I have read it four times so far. I really don't think every plot is interesting at all. I have read every interaction between them hundreds of times. I feel that they get along really well and naturally. If the professor really has someone who has a particularly good relationship with him, it will definitely be like this. The character of the protagonist is really unique. The relationship between the professor and Jie is like a teacher-student relationship, a family relationship, and a relationship between friends. It is a very deep emotion. In short, it is very beautiful. There is no heroine recommendation! ! ! ≽^⚈⩊⚈^≼

Super pretty! Jelair and Severus are both teachers and friends. They are each other's relatives. Jelair regards Severus as his father, and Severus also regards Jelel as his son. It was Jelaire's love that gave Severus the courage to return to the Prince family. Similarly, Severus' love for Jelaire also allowed Jelaire, the wandering "wandering soul", to find an anchor called "home" in a different world. In the past, I mostly read CP stories with dual male protagonists or with original female protagonists, but most of what I saw was how much he/she loves Si Jiao, and what I saw was his/her story. I don't know why, but there was always a feeling that Si Jiao was just a foil. They only said that Si Jiao was responding to his/her love. But I can't actually see the changes and growth of Sri Lankan religion from inside. Some will also write about the patron saint of Sijiao. I think it is normal that Sijiao's patron saint has not changed since he had CP. It is not just because he loves Lily, but it also includes his beliefs and the responsibilities he believes he should bear. But I don't think his patron saint will change after he has CP. He will not change himself because others love him. The change of his patron saint can only be due to his own change, his growth, his deeper understanding of responsibility, and his profound analysis of his own heart. He doesn't need other people's love to replace Lily, he just needs enough love to recognize his heart and give love back to others naturally. Severus gave Jellel the anchor of "home", and it was also Jellel who allowed the Sect to find another anchor of its own existence. He not only lives for Harry, but also lives for Lily's revenge, lives for the continuation of the Prince family, lives for glory, lives for his apprentice, his son... Finished punching in! (Sahua٩(๑^o^๑)۶) Personally, you feel that the ending is a bit bland? But it's also understandable. This book is probably the longest among all the HP fics I've read. It can be completed smoothly and there will be a sweet extra chapter. For me, I want to kneel down and thank the author! I have reread it several times and still am still not satisfied. This book is at least the only one among all the Bishops' novels I have read that is purely about teacher-student love. It is also the top one among all the Bishops' novels I have read on Tomato! I personally feel that compared to how much other people love him, what is more important is his own growth and his own glory! I would rather he stand on the top of the mountain overlooking everyone, instead of being trapped in other people's love and blurring himself. I want to see His glory, to see a dazzling star blooming in the night, not a dazzling star hidden under the brighter day! Slytherin is a Slytherin. Even if he is surrounded and restricted by love, he will never give up his pursuit of power and glory. This is a Slytherin's pursuit of ambition.

The protagonist has no system and no big hangups. He has the Byakugan and Chakra Ninjutsu of the Naruto world. Every day is fulfilling and I keep learning. He is very talented in potions, and because of his white eyes, he is very good at making potions. I studied potions with Snape and became his apprentice. Anyway, the relationship between master and apprentice makes me soft. The protagonist is not aggrieved, not cowardly, does not forgive when faced with provocation, takes revenge, and strikes decisively. Um. . The caged bird plot in the middle is a bit toxic. One or two little cannon fodder that the protagonist picks up on the road suddenly masters the control of the caged bird and can control the protagonist's villain, which makes the protagonist very weak. Then, the villain who could have been killed instantly, the protagonist has to say a lot, and then is forced to suppress it, which is very youthful pain literature. Later, the protagonist told Snape that he had read the Harry Potter book, which may have been a surprise to some people.

It's good-looking. This is the meaning of fan fiction. Sev finally understood everything in the past [crying][crying][crying][crying] The main character is Ravenclaw, and there is no such thing as Lionheart in the Snake House. Moreover, after Harry got the Sorcerer's Stone, Dumbledore didn't let the Lion House win the championship (this has always been something I have always been very, very uncomfortable with). It's good-looking, and people who haven't watched Naruto can basically read it without any difficulty.

The writing style, emotion, impact, and sense of immersion are all a very strong type of author. The feeling I feel after reading this novel is that it is sincerity under reason. The protagonist's emotional expression is actually very straightforward and sincere. I feel that the relationship between him and Snape is a teacher-student relationship that overflows into family and friendship (the author's extra love story is not abrupt, and the article has emotional foreshadowing). The content and details are still exquisite, and it is better to write this kind of novel. The author himself is also very good. It can be seen that he has researched a lot of information and put in a lot of effort. The three views are also very good and the world view is huge. I have also spent a lot of time on Harry Potter fan fiction. I have not read a few and set my sights on writing plots in lands other than the West, because this will test the author's ability to connect plots and writing skills. But after all, it is the running-in of people from two different worlds, which is inherently difficult to handle. There was a little bit of drama that made me feel that it was a bit dramatic, but some of the sentences in the world of Byakugan are also quite interesting. The performance in Harry's story is the highlight, which is quite funny. Isn't the novel meant to be read in a relaxed way, so don't be too harsh. To sum up, the novel and the author are worth learning from [Blow Kiss]

This book is very interesting. I just hope that the author can write about the love story between the professor and Jelaire in the extra chapter (a small personal suggestion, it doesn't matter if the author writes it or not)

Woohoo, wow, it's really beautiful! ! The timeline is that Professor Snape met the protagonist not long after he became a professor, and when his heart was as hard as death. The interaction between these two masters and apprentices is really great. Warm, funny and humorous They helped each other during school, and the four major colleges developed towards friendly coexistence. It was really great that some Ravenclaw students after graduation were able to form an information network. Children in later generations are very good at growing up and can distinguish right from wrong. I don't see who is being targeted in the entire article. Even if it is written that Professor Snape is the master, it will not be particularly biased. It is also very well said. It is already a bad debt and it is difficult to clarify. Anyway, I personally feel that everyone's relationship has improved a lot in the future, and it has made up for a lot of regrets. This kind of development is not bad.

This book is really very beautiful, and the emotions are particularly good. Recently, I have read a lot of books with the protagonist Yu Sijiao. Because most of the protagonists are time-travelers who understand the plot, I have seen a lot of them. For some inexplicable reason, they save everyone regardless of the life and death of others, or they are illogical and arrogant, almost pretending to be the creator of the world. Although this book is also about redemption, his emotional development is reasonable and very nice, about family love and mutual redemption. The protagonist didn't tell Shijiao about his life because he was moved (after all, the protagonist is Naruto's background in World War II), which seems very reasonable to me (personal judgment), and in the later period, after Shijiao became the protagonist's most trusted person, that kind of Konoha-style emotion was so right. As long as you are the person I value most, anything you say is right, and I will firmly believe you no matter what others say. So familiar. So delicious! I watched the end of the second volume in one go. The only pity now is why it's not finished yet? Ah, I wrote it wrong, it's the end of the first volume.

It's very interesting, the plot has nothing sinister, and the protagonist is not censored like many books. The result is ambiguous with others. There are personal settings but they don't conflict with the original work. The arrangement is very reasonable. The author is also very diligent in updating. It is not superficial and the writing is not bad.

Personally, I like this kind of brave and resourceful protagonist, who follows the family line and won't casually form a cp. Hehe [I understand] Although I also like to read Shuangwen, I also like this kind of Zhigao online. Anyway, it's good to read, and I recommend it.

It looks good, the logic is smooth, and the writing is good I feel a little uncomfortable after seeing it, especially about giving birth to a child. And I have a vague feeling that the author loves Nan a little bit. I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, it's uncomfortable to watch. But the plot alone is quite enjoyable.

I first read this book when it was about 80 chapters, and then I watched the score increase little by little. At one point, when it was over 200 chapters, it was still at 7. Some points. I was even more anxious than the author [face covering]. I really liked this book. The characters are very good and vivid. Even if you haven't read Naruto, it doesn't affect your reading of this book. It's very good. It's been over 800 years since I last saw you, and it's not over yet! [Shocked] Although it is slow, the author is very rhythmic and progresses the plot steadily [Smirking] OK, this author is so delicious that I can watch it😋

It's very interesting to watch. The family relationship between Jelel and Sijiao is very good. Seeing the two redeeming each other and achieving each other's achievements, I really couldn't hold back my tears. I hope the author will make more movies, preferably with movie-watching extras. I'm very much looking forward to it [Love][Love][Love]

It's a five-star review, and this is not a dual male protagonist, he is Chun Chun's teacher and student. This kind of emotional description is very good. It allowed me to clearly see the emotional change of Severus, which made him change from the atonement mentality to the hope that he would live, and then gave the protagonist a solid backer. Moreover, I feel that Severus' change of mentality towards the protagonist is very natural, because he regarded the protagonist as his own salvation from the beginning, because the protagonist and Severus have the same life experience and suffered the same fate. The only difference probably is that Severus does not have a parent who loves him. The subsequent change in mentality is probably to regard the protagonist and himself as equals. It's not a pure novel, because the protagonist has a caged bird, and the part where he solves the caged bird actually feels a little rough to me, but it's still pretty good. The rough part is that the protagonist's encounter process is not handled very appropriately, and the transition is not very good, but Severus's emotional description is still okay, and it can make people feel that he is showing his true feelings. Well, the author should try more and practice these emotional descriptions. Overall, this book is still very good.

It's really good to watch. The master-disciple relationship between the protagonist and Severus is really touching [laughing][laughing][laughing] The protagonist is a bit sinister, a white-on-black kind of person, scheming but a bit immature, a growth-oriented protagonist, and super good-looking.

It's good to watch. The teacher-student relationship between the protagonist and the professor is well written. The protagonist has no censorship or ambiguity. It can be watched by straight men. The student days were more everyday, and the interactions between the protagonist and his classmates and professors warmed my heart. At first, the professor treats the protagonist as his former self, and the protagonist is also using what he knows to help him, helping the professor to untie his knot, and the two achieve mutual success. So, will the author write a side story about the encounter between the protagonist and Tomoeizumi and a side story about Narcissus? It took me so long to remember that I didn't write a review. It's a shame.