Making the Battle of Jinling, Players Cried and Charged at the Same Time

The subject matter is quite good, but the author's writing needs to be improved. I feel that there is a very small flaw. Don't criticize me. It's a personal feeling. I don't mean to insult. It is that every time the protagonist persuades others, he has to bring up a list of the sufferings suffered by the people. It is written too much and feels a bit stiff, but it is still very touching. It feels very good. It just feels that the protagonist shines a bit too much. He does not have the intelligence and game sense of other players. I recommend it. It is good to watch.

Wow, it's full of real feelings, the text is very good, and it can arouse the readers' emotions very well.

I feel that this type is suitable for group portrait writing. You can write from the perspective of each front. The protagonist is just the creator and relies on the players. Of course, the author writes from the perspective of the protagonist, which is also very good.

How can I put it... If this is a historical time travel novel, then it is a pretty good novel. The characters are vivid and the story plot is very visual, and the words between the lines are very easy for readers to empathize with. But when viewed as a game production article, the problem is huge. Including but not limited to: the gameplay seems to have many flaws, the script kills the host personally, the planner and producer stares at the NPC he designed with a ferocious face, and other operations. If this weren't a game, none of the above would be a problem. In short, after reading more than ten chapters, this book gave me the feeling that it was a sports car running on the wrong track, with amazing momentum but in the wrong position. Those who come here for game production can go, and those who are interested in combat can have a look.

The writing is very good, really very good, but I suggest you not to write too much around the protagonist. If the book is another kind of continuation, then everyone in the book should have his or her own brilliance. It can be done without the protagonist, and there is no need to deliberately create a god.

I'll write an objective review for this novel. I've never written a review before, so I'm trying to write a little bit. I've read more than 2,000 pages on my phone. Overall, it's pretty good, quite exciting, positive energy, and the subject matter is also very good. The previous part is tear-jerking and can arouse the readers' emotions. They can't stop and are always holding back their energy. But in the middle part, I personally felt that it was not handled smoothly. I think it was mostly touching for the sake of being touching, and it was a bit overdone and made me feel tired. Therefore, I started to skip and read. All good stories should have ups and downs, various contradictions, and a process that makes people calm down and welcome the next climax. Instead of blindly using one emotion to permeate the article, thinking will be paralyzed. No matter how touching or advancing, it will not be effective. As a bookworm for more than 20 years, I am optimistic about the author who is capable, emotional, good in logical thinking, and has a distinctive personality in the group portrait. Hope to see more exciting works in the future.

Give it a good review, it's quite touching, but the protagonist has too many roles, and it feels like it's a one-man show. So many players can't compare to one protagonist. But the writing is very touching, so I'll give it five stars.

It's not a cool article, it's very sad, and it's more like a small character in the history of Jinling, and every "player" tries his best to save it. It's hard to judge the military aspect. The characters and emotions are written with great detail. Basically, my eyes will turn red once every two chapters, and I will shed tears once every three chapters. I watched part of it earlier and skipped it in the middle because it was too sadistic and too brutal. It feels like running towards a future without victory, a group of people working hard to achieve success. It's not like a game planning game, but rather like the moment when the protagonist led a group of ordinary people to travel to the history of Jinling. It's just that you can exit halfway, and you can't come back after death. Basically, there are no cheats. The only highlight of the protagonist is the detailed description of the entire Jinling characters. But fortunately, the current updated position has reached the point where official military leaders are taking command. In the end, we can win. I'll wait until this battle is won before reading the previous chapters. Otherwise, the whole article is full of knives, and the tone is too heavy. I couldn't bear it at all, my eyes were almost swollen from crying.

The writing is great, the details of the characters are very well written, and it writes about many ordinary people, which makes us realize the horror of war more. It feels much better than history books. The main reason is that just a few words in history books cannot make us remember it so deeply. The score is high, the score is over 90, which is too little.

The sentiment of the article is there, and the stance is good, but when I started reading the first two thousand words, I was deeply moved and moved me to tears. But when I saw more than 4,000 in one breath, I felt tired and had a headache. The whole text keeps people emotionally high from beginning to end. The plot is good, the writing is good, but the details are not good.

As long as the red theme is not too substandard, the score will not be very low. The author is very careful to write it in detail, but detail has its own advantages. The author focuses on describing the hearts and experiences of many characters, and it is very touching when I read it. However, if it is too detailed, it will feel that the progress of the novel is very slow. This is a novel after all. I wrote more than 100 chapters for a game, and I don't know how many more I will write. I also hope that this novel can play a role in popularizing science and let me know more about some of the deeds of the year. After all, I have been hovering on the edge of passing the history since I was a child. I can still read it in the novel. It is not required to remember a lot. If you can remember a few, it is a good novel. The protagonist has very little reality. I hope this can be maintained. This is just my personal opinion.

The descriptions are very realistic and the writing is very good. It really seems like I have gone back in time. My face gets wet just looking at it... I want to treat them as NPCs, just characters in some novels, but I can't help but substitute them...

This book is very real. The author uses a game to perfectly restore the disasters and pains that our predecessors suffered. The writing is brilliant and the sense of immersion is strong. Many book friends feel that there are too many sensational dramas in the later period. I think so, but this is normal. Anyone who looks up those materials, sees those evidences, videos, and photos will go crazy, not to mention that the protagonist in the book is truly substituted in the form of a holographic image. No one can bear it.

It is different from other anti-war game novels that set a template. It does not only emphasize how many players die, nor does every war be ignored like a child's play. There is no hydrology, and there is no excessive description of women. Thank you to the author for letting me see an excellent war game article.

It's a very good book. Although the label is not good, the content made me cry. The sun, moon, mountains and rivers will always be there, the motherland will always be there

The writing is delicate and it's so foul! Wow! Cry me to death [Cry] Don't take advantage of my comrades-in-arms and self-sacrifice for others. Like other comments, this is equivalent to wearing the skin of the game and allowing players to travel back to that time! The players did not fail, the matched characters were random and 100% sensory. The protagonist was also involved in the planning of the game. He is also an ordinary person. He only simulated it dozens of times in advance in his mind (all failed) and got a lot of information. He became a commander recognized by all players. Even so, this book is undoubtedly a group portrait article. Everyone regards this game as the real world. The way the author describes it is really like going back to Jinling a hundred years ago, walking on thin ice along the way. It is not a cool article, and everyone has put in all their efforts. I'm already looking forward to the final climax of this battle. What a pity that I discovered this book only after chapter 70! ! It's totally not enough! ! Judging from this situation, after completing the first game, I will definitely need to update about 50 chapters.

Whether it is the writing or the tear-jerking part, this book has the top-notch writing style in today's online literature. The story of the protagonist and various supporting characters is vividly described. The rating is still too low, at least 9.5 Or above. As long as it doesn't end well, I will always praise you [laughter] Brothers don't have any knives when they push it up. It's quite beautiful. Brothers push it up together [laughing]

I look at it from the perspective of a novel, not just from the content. The overall writing style of this novel is pretty good, and the descriptions are very realistic. After reading more than 40 chapters of this novel, I feel that the main plot is not much pushed, but there are many lyrical short stories, and many of the materials are exactly the same as the author's previous book. There is a feeling of being lyrical for the sake of being lyrical For example, in one place, in order to persuade an officer, he just told a lyrical story. He had already persuaded an officer, and then he wrote another lyrical story. I didn't push much of the main plot, half of the pen and ink was used to write lyrical stories. There is a fear that you won't be able to emotionally invest in watching the movie, so I force you to use lyrical stories to make you emotionally invested. This is very similar to a situation in the game, where you have to walk slowly behind an NPC, forcing you to sink into the game plot.

I thought I was just writing about game development and had no intention of doing it, but I found out that he was a big guy. It's absolutely fine if the plot doesn't break the mood.

I have read Chapter 111, mainly listening to the book. The plot is quite reasonable and there are no big holes. But... If you have watched anime, you must have seen that when someone in the protagonist team is about to die, he first makes a revolving door, then gives a decent speech, then goes on a revolving door, and then makes a heroic sacrifice. The plot of this call involves the sacrifice of one of his comrades. Then cut off one in a second, recalling the parents and relatives at home, the past life, and then the sacrifice. Then I went around with a comrade. It was okay at first, but I watched too much. . . It always feels like an Indian movie. The dancing feels okay at first, but then it dances after two sentences, then dances after two sentences, and then dances after two sentences. . .

I have never seen such a wonderful anti-war article, the most realistic scene I can't bear to write more than 180 chapters for one plot

It's a group portrait, right? Very well written and touching. They are all knives! The tears never stopped. What games are said to be is actually a historical record wrapped in a game skin. [Cry]

It's really good and makes me want to cry. As long as it can change, even if it's a game, I pay tribute to the martyrs [crying]

Sorry author, I actually want to give it five stars, but I'm afraid that if the rating is high, I won't be able to see it in a few days, so I can only give it four stars. The book is really good, I must be a bookworm for many years

It's okay, the plot is pretty good, but the description can't use words like "spitting out a breath of turbidity" and "hoarse voice" again and again. Only by combining online and offline can we break through the siege and find a way to save Jinling. Otherwise, it is really hellishly difficult. The protagonist has nothing but relevant information on the map. He is just a player with some intelligence. If you don't like this, you can quit. Also, there are a lot of people in the comment area asking for the protagonist to be deleted. This kind of comment affects the viewing experience too much. The immersive feeling itself can be rated as eight points, but when I open the comment area, I feel that there are only six points left. If it continues like this, I will really not be able to watch it.

I turned it on when I was taking a walk tonight. It was unexpectedly beautiful and made me cry. The beginning is a holographic game, simulating the defense of Nanjing. After the fall of Nanjing, there was a massacre. Is there any way to save the lives of 300,000 people a hundred years later? There are no cheats for the players who enter, some are civilians, some are soldiers, some are non-commissioned officers, nurses and even reporters. Being suddenly thrown into an extremely cruel world, the NPCs around them slowly died due to various reasons, and the players gradually became themselves, sincerely wanting to save these 300,000 people even in the virtual world. Every time I write about sacrifice or dedication or death, I can't help but cry. But when you think about it, the real world is probably crueler and more terrifying. The protagonist simulated 36 times in the virtual world, and failed every time. Therefore, this time he appeared to be particularly ruthless and cold-blooded when he acted with others. Occasionally, there will be a little bit of moral cold in peacetime, but considering that the protagonist saw a city being massacred 36 times in 36 helpless efforts, there is really no need for cheap morality. The most important thing is to be able to defend the city and save people. Anyway so good so far. The author is good at writing group portraits, whether they are from a hundred years ago or a hundred years later, each one is well written!

It's so beautiful, I cried while watching it, don't forget the national humiliation

When history and games are perfectly integrated, it brings not only charming charm but also guidance on right, wrong, good and evil for people today. The combination of the tragic situation of history and the fourth natural disaster brings a torch of hope and a perfect interpretation of justice. The characters in this novel are vividly and delicately depicted, and the popular values ​​are integrated into every sentence, sublimating the characters and the patriotic theme together, and making people moved by the deeds of devotion to each of the characters.

To be honest, I had tears in my eyes when I read this book. The author's descriptions are very delicate and the language is very red. I give this five stars.

I don't think the title of the book is attractive, but it's rich in content and worth reading.