Reborn in 1988: I Became the Son of a Coal Magnate

The writing style is quite good and it is a novel worth collecting. Of course, I have only read 60 chapters. As an old bookworm, I would like to give you some suggestions. The emotional line of the family is very warm and tear-jerking and worth pondering. This line is very well written and feels like you are like an old writer. Personal emotions The feeling line is a bit redundant. I wrote about my classmates too tenderly and it's not easy to let go. The eldest sister who is a sibling is almost 10 years apart. The cross-server is a bit big. It gives me the feeling of eating what's in the bowl and thinking about what's in the pot. It's too greedy. Of course, if you have multiple heroines, just pretend I didn't say it [laughs awkwardly]

Grass jelly, edible. The author's writing skills are top-notch, and the short family relationship between parents is written with flesh and blood. From the current point of view, it may be that the follow-up has not been written yet, so the emotional scene has some minor flaws, and the female classmate feels superfluous that cannot be explained in the length of the story. Miaoke's portrayal is a bit too cliche and bland. The biggest problem is the setting of the protagonist's character. I understand that the author wants to express his hope that his parents will be able to sleep peacefully on their own, but the lazy look after opening the Internet cafe is really unpleasant. Combined with the opening of the pedestrian street and other small plots that show the decisiveness and maturity of the protagonist, I personally feel that it is a bit abrupt and has a split personality. The above are all personal opinions. Generally speaking, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. I hope the author will write more! There are only a few chapters every day. Who can read them? A few more chapters, preferably one per person!

It's pretty good, very comfortable to watch. The only thing that makes people feel uncomfortable is the problem of the female protagonist. First of all, I must admit that in the real world, many boys will basically fall into the situation of two boats, white moonlight and cinnabar mole. But the cinnabar mole in this book is a bit too much. We are here to read a book. This kind of love entanglement is a bit too much, and it is not a female channel. Either you want them all, or you want just one.

I think the overall score is about 8.5 To 9.0. I was really a bit licky when it came to the close friend, but the author wrote very well about social situations and entrepreneurship, so I still gave it five stars. After reading it for a while, to be honest, I admire the author's writing style. I have only seen two books with such good writing style. The whole book is a bit toxic based on my own feelings, but most of it is emotional. I really don't understand it at this point. The author's depiction of worldly feelings, social situations, family colors, and even the small characters made me deeply moved, but ~ yes! I'll be honest about the coin's emotional line. If I couldn't bear to watch it, I would have given it two stars. Just those three women, Lin Qiaoqiao, not to mention anything else, the scene when they first met shocked me, wasn't it a buddy? After two lifetimes, you are still so pretentious when you reach forty? Zhou Miaoke, she turned into a bitch for poor Weihao. Although she didn't know it, she just felt an unknown anger in me. Let's talk about Li Qian, it's obvious that she likes you, but you neither refuse nor do anything about it. Those who know think you don't want to fall in love prematurely, and those who don't know think you're not good enough. If the author had just put the reader in when he first started writing the outline, and nothing else, this book would definitely have an 8.5 Score today. If there is a more reasonable way to deal with it later, I can still accept it. To be honest, I have never written such a long rating for a novel in the past few years. Because I saw the potential of this book, I used my own methods to understand, analyze and improve from my perspective. I still say the same thing, this book was half ruined because of the three women.

Although in the early stage, it is quite satisfactory and has no particularly outstanding points, the more I read the later, the more I can see that the author has become more and more skilled in writing. Although the writing style is ordinary, it can still make people feel excited. I hope the author can draw a happy ending to this novel with watercolor pens, but also point out the infinite possibilities of ellipsis.

Alas, when I saw that Chapter 195 showed signs of a harem, I accidentally jumped in if I didn't like it. I was a little confused when I saw this. I really don't like harems. Generally speaking, the author's writing is super good, and the plot is very rich. There is no forced rhythm, and the plot is also very fulfilling, ugh~

I was surprised to see a rebirth article of this quality on Tomato. The rating of 8.1 Is too low. 9 Points is no problem at all. The author's pacing is good and there are many details. Highly recommended.

A very good book, sometimes like a real literary work, but the feeling of pleasure is still there. But the author, I advise you to be kind. This is an online article after all. Don't stab anyone 🥺 🥺 🥺 [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

I've read 80% of the book and I'm a little tired, so I want to change my taste. I'll leave a review before I leave. It's a great book. The plot and everything are as realistic as possible, but there are some poisonous points in the early stage, and then there are some irrelevant women in the emotional line. I understand what the author is thinking. He just wants to write about the choices the protagonist makes when being pursued by many people, and wants to write about the kind of tangled and complicated emotions, but it is not written well. OK, almost done, author, come on

Full marks, a very well written novel