After Rebirth, I Went from Being a Second-Generation Coal Worker to Becoming an Investment Godfather.

The writing style is quite good and it is a novel worth collecting. Of course, I have only read 60 chapters. As an old bookworm, I would like to give you some suggestions. The emotional line of the family is very warm and tear-jerking and worth pondering. This line is very well written and feels like you are like an old writer. Personal emotions The feeling line is a bit redundant. I wrote about my classmates too tenderly and it's not easy to let go. The eldest sister who is a sibling is almost 10 years apart. The cross-server is a bit big. It gives me the feeling of eating what's in the bowl and thinking about what's in the pot. It's too greedy. Of course, if you have multiple heroines, just pretend I didn't say it [laughs awkwardly]

Grass jelly, edible. The author's writing skills are top-notch, and the short family relationship between parents is written with flesh and blood. From the current point of view, it may be that the follow-up has not been written yet, so the emotional scene has some minor flaws, and the female classmate feels superfluous that cannot be explained in the length of the story. Miaoke's portrayal is a bit too cliche and bland. The biggest problem is the setting of the protagonist's character. I understand that the author wants to express his hope that his parents will be able to sleep peacefully on their own, but the lazy look after opening the Internet cafe is really unpleasant. Combined with the opening of the pedestrian street and other small plots that show the decisiveness and maturity of the protagonist, I personally feel that it is a bit abrupt and has a split personality. The above are all personal opinions. Generally speaking, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. I hope the author will write more! There are only a few chapters every day. Who can read them? A few more chapters, preferably one per person!

It's pretty good, very comfortable to watch. The only thing that makes people feel uncomfortable is the problem of the female protagonist. First of all, I must admit that in the real world, many boys will basically fall into the situation of two boats, white moonlight and cinnabar mole. But the cinnabar mole in this book is a bit too much. We are here to read a book. This kind of love entanglement is a bit too much, and it is not a female channel. Either you want them all, or you want just one.

I think the overall score is about 8.5 To 9.0. I was really a bit licky when it came to the close friend, but the author wrote very well about social situations and entrepreneurship, so I still gave it five stars. After reading it for a while, to be honest, I admire the author's writing style. I have only seen two books with such good writing style. The whole book is a bit toxic based on my own feelings, but most of it is emotional. I really don't understand it at this point. The author's depiction of worldly feelings, social situations, family colors, and even the small characters made me deeply moved, but ~ yes! I'll be honest about the coin's emotional line. If I couldn't bear to watch it, I would have given it two stars. Just those three women, Lin Qiaoqiao, not to mention anything else, the scene when they first met shocked me, wasn't it a buddy? After two lifetimes, you are still so pretentious when you reach forty? Zhou Miaoke, she turned into a bitch for poor Weihao. Although she didn't know it, she just felt an unknown anger in me. Let's talk about Li Qian, it's obvious that she likes you, but you neither refuse nor do anything about it. Those who know think you don't want to fall in love prematurely, and those who don't know think you're not good enough. If the author had just put the reader in when he first started writing the outline, and nothing else, this book would definitely have an 8.5 Score today. If there is a more reasonable way to deal with it later, I can still accept it. To be honest, I have never written such a long rating for a novel in the past few years. Because I saw the potential of this book, I used my own methods to understand, analyze and improve from my perspective. I still say the same thing, this book was half ruined because of the three women.

Although in the early stage, it is quite satisfactory and has no particularly outstanding points, the more I read the later, the more I can see that the author has become more and more skilled in writing. Although the writing style is ordinary, it can still make people feel excited. I hope the author can draw a happy ending to this novel with watercolor pens, but also point out the infinite possibilities of ellipsis.

Alas, when I saw that Chapter 195 showed signs of a harem, I accidentally jumped in if I didn't like it. I was a little confused when I saw this. I really don't like harems. Generally speaking, the author's writing is super good, and the plot is very rich. There is no forced rhythm, and the plot is also very fulfilling, ugh~

A very good book, sometimes like a real literary work, but the feeling of pleasure is still there. But the author, I advise you to be kind. This is an online article after all. Don't stab anyone [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

I was surprised to see a rebirth article of this quality on Tomato. The rating of 8.1 Is too low. 9 Points is no problem at all. The author's pacing is good and there are many details. Highly recommended.

I've read 80% of the book and I'm a little tired, so I want to change my taste. I'll leave a review before I leave. It's a great book. The plot and everything are as realistic as possible, but there are some poisonous points in the early stage, and then there are some irrelevant women in the emotional line. I understand what the author is thinking. He just wants to write about the choices the protagonist makes when being pursued by many people, and wants to write about the kind of tangled and complicated emotions, but it is not written well. OK, almost done, author, come on

Full marks, a very well written novel

The 6,000-word third update is quite good, but the heroine Lin Xiaoqiao is not very likable, so I stopped reading it.

The author's writing style is very good and very delicate. In fact, I still like the single heroine, which is closer to real life. My sister Zhou Miao is a good match, but she is not compatible with the little dancer at all. They are more like a brother's feelings for his sister. The identity gap is too big. Secondly, the living world is different, and the future identity is even different. Is it the same as saying that there is no common language now?

The author's writing style is good, with a touch of literary youth. But I want too much in terms of plot, and I have to play behind the scenes or in the growth flow, which is difficult for me to accept logically. I can only say that it's not to my taste, but the novel is good

Meow is so beautiful that I finished watching it in one night

This is one of the best novels I have ever read, not to mention the content, but the author has the best writing style. Those rhetorical sentences are not something ordinary people can write. Come on, focus on you [Like] [Like] [Like]

It's very interesting. Don't listen to other low-scoring reviews. Everyone has different values. This novel is suitable for reading. Don't pay too much attention to other people's comments. Just trust your own feelings. Otherwise, you will miss a good novel in vain. Come on! (Update quickly!)

A good book should not be 8.0, But should at least start with a 9.0. It is not like those urban rebirth novels that are based on the same mold. The writing is fresh and fresh. It not only involves parents and one's career, but also the follow-up from the founding of Penguin, as well as hazy emotions. Unlike other books, rebirth means being a stallion. Compared with those refreshing urban novels that only have fun, this book has more motivation to attract people to read. It's such a good book that makes people's mouths twitch after reading it [Sending Hearts] You have to control the rhythm well, it's best to write about him in two million words [Adoration]

The writing has entered my heart. I have read the novel for so many years. It is really the same as what I imagined myself writing, including the starting point of rebirth, the infancy, and the details of starting a business. It is more realistic and easy to interpret. In terms of emotions, I suggest that in fact, rich people will be a little bit. Not every woman has to be responsible, including Teacher Mi. There are many women in reality, and not everyone needs to marry or be responsible. The emotional description is very sweet but not deep enough. There is also this update. Please speed me up, this is my novel [Blow Kiss]

The writing is quite good. It can be seen that the author looked up the information (perhaps he knew it himself) when writing it. It is in line with the characteristics of the era and is not a brainless novel. The only thing is that in his last life, he was the Emperor Yu. In this life, his emotions were constantly being cut off and messed up. There is a tendency to have a harem.

The writing is good, one of the best among the rebirth novels I have read, but there are occasionally some poisonous points that I skipped over. The rhythm is pretty good. The conclusion is that the score is indeed a bit low. I have seen many 9-point books that are like shit. This one's score of 9 or above is more reasonable.

It's rare to see a novel that can be read chapter by chapter. I hope I can stick to it and keep it from ending.

At first glance, I felt that this book was not that awesome, and I felt uncomfortable after reading it. Later, I discovered that the author did not simply follow the route of cool writing. The characters are very full, and everyone has their own story. The rich and three-dimensional characters make this book outstanding.

Nice! Written from the beginning of rebirth, the pace is very good. It not only contains the warm and ordinary daily life, but also the development of the protagonist's career line. The professional knowledge in the book is also very solid, not violent, and very comfortable.

I didn't expect that this rating was actually okay. I finished reading it in two days. It's a little bit toxic. Lin is moderately toxic. Without Lin, I would give it full marks. Xia Chunqiu's writing is really good. The author's writing style is very good when writing this part. The ending is a bit abrupt, but overall it is quite good-looking. Looking forward to the author's next work, give it a try before reading it

Okay, but in the early stage of fast-food articles such as Tomato, the underage transition was too slow, and most importantly, if the post of pursuing white moonlight in Stinky Tomatoes was destined to be half-denial, it would be very polarizing. Anyway, I like the author very much and I will update it as soon as possible. I haven't seen this type of work on Tomato for a long time! ! !

This book is one of the better ones I've heard about rebirth, but the author is too slow to update. Let's read the book for a month and wait until there are more chapters.

(True review) There are not many poisonous points, the writing is good, there is nothing offensive, and there are quite a lot of refreshing points. The main complaint is that the author doesn't seem to be good at writing emotional paragraphs. After the protagonist's two girlfriends hit Shura, they both wanted to leave the hero for a while [laughing] Hahaha It should be acceptable at Tomato level, right? Why are there so many malicious negative comments in the comment section? Other novels are all praised by humans and machines. It's so strange. The author saw this and explained it. Didn't you buy the good reviews?

, I thought this book has been sublimated, only to find that this book has been sublimated. The score is about seven points. I don't know if anyone understands. This book is full of passion, slow pace, and mess. If you understand regret, you will know that the book is full of passion. It turns out that no matter whether they can get along with each other in the end, that period of time is the best gift for you and others, whether it is friendship, feelings, or family affection.

The rating is a bit low, it should be around 9.0. The book is good. The writing felt a bit jerky at the beginning, but it got better and better later on. I accidentally finished reading it in one day. Everything else is fine. It's just that the emotional line needs to be handled. It depends on how the author writes. The emotional line has been handled well, and I don't think there are any big problems in other aspects.

I can barely watch it, and I can only say it's a bit toxic, but as long as it's not too special, it's still watchable for me. But after all, it is a cool article, so it doesn't require so much. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]