In the New Life, the Eldest Lady Wants to Change Her Destiny Against the Will of Heaven

From the current point of view, what the anchor writes is still relatively in line with the structure of the Tomato Shuang article. There are almost no loopholes in the logic, but there are still a few minor problems. For example, the heroine, Ren Yi, feels to me like a cute girl who has never been polished by the world. Even if she was a eldest lady in her previous life, she will definitely grow after experiencing Liu Yang's betrayal. Of course, everyone will have a growth process, so I look forward to Ren Yi's next experience. The feeling the male protagonist gave me, hiss... As for Long Yitian, judging from his performance, I think he belongs to the category of doting on his wife and loyal dog. According to the general routine of rebirth stories, the male protagonist will be a little restrained at this time, but the male protagonist written by the anchor is very interesting, and he also directly communicates with the female protagonist. Then I feel that the male protagonist should have almost discovered that Ren Yi has been reborn at this time. After all, he is very smart. Ren Yi's different attitude from his previous life has already given him clues. There is still room for improvement in the writing, for example, it is all dialogue with almost no movements or expressions. As an anchor, you can master it by writing hundreds of thousands of words. There are stages to this. Although the host said that there is no outline, I believe that you must have an idea in your mind. You can read more other articles of the same type as a reference to see how other articles write about relationships between men and women, because I heard that writing emotional lines relies on talent, and it has nothing to do with whether you are in love or not, but you will always make progress if you read more.