Help, Master Is Too Controlling.

I know why so many reviews give low scores. Is it toxic? Now the male protagonist's fiancée has secretly made a secret promise to the original male protagonist Lin Fanfang, and according to the original setting of the novel, the male protagonist's junior sister will die in order to avenge the male protagonist, so the master goes crazy and becomes the original male protagonist's cauldron. This is a cool positioning, there must always be a few main palaces who are devoted to the male protagonist in the original plot, and the untainted white moonlight, the master becomes the furnace cauldron. It's outrageous, a bit dissuading, and the male protagonist is too soft on the protagonist of the original novel. The first thing he wants to do is to avoid conflict with the original male protagonist, so that the fiancée should use the information she has to fight for resources. Women don't have to, but they have to dismantle the CP in order to destroy the male protagonist. How can the fiancée be the daughter of the clan leader and let the original male protagonist have such power? The male protagonist who is afraid of retreating is very poor in impression, but to be honest, as an old bookworm, I feel that the plot and writing are not bad, and I can watch it.

Very good, the plot is very rich, please keep updating, (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* The Master's experience is a bit poisonous and makes people feel alienated, but it is still five stars. I hope I can explain it later.

I think it's okay. It's just a normal time-travel and slap-in-the-face, fate-changing content. The pace is slower, there are fewer fighting scenes, and it's more focused on daily life. There are occasionally some funny plots, and the protagonist still has a little bit of the Virgin's heart (I think this is quite normal. , Since you started remembering, after awakening the memory of the past life, you have not been in poverty, you have not been backstabbed by anyone, and you have not suffered any catastrophes. It is difficult to be cold-blooded and ruthless, and you were just an ordinary person in your previous life). You have seen too many killings and decisive killings for a change [laughs]

It's okay, it's considered rigorous, a little bit of poison doesn't bother me, but this one is so weird, I always feel like I'm reading a cuckold novel [laughing and crying] for fear of thunder.

Such a beautiful book must be read by everyone. How can I only poison myself?

There is no system, but the dual-cultivation style harem novels have their own merits in the writing style of each female character. For example, Zhou Nuonuo, who has grown up with the protagonist, the role of the younger sister's child bride, is said to be a child bride or the master Aojiao said it, but in terms of relationship development, this is indeed the case, and there is no dual-cultivation person so far. , The progress of dual cultivation is much slower than other characters, but in terms of emotions, it can be said that the author is very attentive. The introduction related to Nono is but straight to the heart. In addition to the love of a sister, Nono's feelings are also long-term companionship, so when Nono really confesses to the protagonist, the few sentences are very meaningful. Because of this, it can be seen that the author is somewhat of a lolicon and a girl-controller (bushi). The title of the book can say that the master deceived the two cultivators, but from the beginning to the present, it can be seen that the relationship between the two is just like a new love. There are too many times when the master is arrogant, jealous and wronged, and he seriously doubts whether the master has a tendency to be a philanderer. Several times, he pushed the master into the arms of other women [face covering]. After reading the book, the shortcomings have become obvious, that is, it has completely fallen into male-oriented pile driving. To be more straightforward, there are too many female characters mixed with events and too many characters, which leads to unfocused descriptions and obvious signs of shrinkage. At the same time, the scene where the male protagonist transforms into a pile driver makes the smell of boiled water more obvious. The more descriptions of female characters and the text will be diluted, the more pale the text will be. The final conclusion is that there are too many harems, and the second brother is doing the thinking for the brain.

It can only be seen that An is a woman who wants and wants her. She not only secretly promises others her love, but also has some intimate interactions with the male protagonist. It is hard to say whether the male protagonist is sincere, but he will definitely not give her away. However, purely from the perspective of the male protagonist, I am afraid that he does not know that An likes others. In the relatively peaceful world of immortality, there are no deep grudges and killings are mostly a daily occurrence.

Overall it looks very nice! Especially the storyline, and the heroine was very well written, with her own storyline and vivid images, but it felt a bit off in the second half, because it felt like it ended too quickly! Moreover, there are several female protagonists who do not write emotional follow-ups, which is a pity! I hope the author can make some extra stories! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It should be that some people read too much innovative novels and feel that this kind of novel is not very good, but this is not much different from reality, and it is similar to the traditional cultivation literature at the beginning. Cruelty is true, cunning is true, and scum or transference are also true. This is the real cultivation literature.

This book... Those who thought it was Little Green, don't think about it. From the moment the protagonist traveled through the past, it has changed. It is equivalent to a new novel, not the original villain Little Green... Sister Xiaoman... Well, as expected, it is normal for life to be unsatisfactory nine times out of ten... It's still a bit poisonous

It's very interesting. This is one of the most interesting fairy tales I've read in the past five years. Everyone has their own likes and dislikes. Don't criticize me. The author has made every character come alive. Whether they are the protagonist or the supporting characters, they are all written very wonderfully. Come on, the author, I will update it a hundred times a day. I still feel that it is not enough.

It's a little bit poisonous, because after all, the book is called this name, and it also tells about what happened to Master in his previous life... He even repeatedly whipped the corpse to emphasize it... But overall it's good, but the progress there is a bit slow. As long as the author keeps writing, I will keep reading. I started reading it in November last year and have been accompanying it for half a year without realizing it. When I first read it, I had just entered college. Now that the second semester is more than half over, this book is about to come to an end, and I feel that time has flown by in vain. I really like the daily interactions between the protagonist and several heroines, especially the master, in this book. The book is also relatively relaxed and enjoyable overall. Reading a few chapters in my spare time and immersing myself in such a world is a small relief from the busy life in reality. Come on, author, and wish you write better works in the future [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Such a beautiful thing can only poison me. Everyone is welcome to join in

Although the ending is a little rushed, everything that needs to be explained is explained, and it is not a bad ending. The beginning of any book is easy to write, but the ending is difficult to wrap up. Let me introduce to friends who are reading the comments that this is a novel in which villains upgrade. The first few heroines are well portrayed, but the latter ones fall into the common problem and become stallions [laughing], and the villains in the later stages are not well portrayed. In short, I look forward to the author's new book

They all say that their so-called "toxic points" are just plots that they don't like to watch. When writing novels, you should write about what you like. You don't need to pay too much attention to their so-called "toxic points" [Like]≡ω≡

It's a very good book. I don't know why the rating is so low. Good luck to the author.

Come on, author. I like to read this kind of light-hearted and everyday articles. The writing style is also quite humorous and the characters are very vivid.

When there was a shortage of books, I caught up to now. This is a day-to-day fairy tale. After watching too many fantasy routines, it would be nice to suddenly try some daily series. Why is the pace suddenly so fast now? Is it about to end?

It is difficult for a person to enjoy youth when he is young. It's hard to know it's good when you're experiencing something good. So a person's life is full of regrets. Sometimes, the order of appearance is really important. If many people met at another time, the ending of the story might be completely different. Life is not at the right time, love is not with the right person, wherever you go, it is destiny!

Overall, it's a very good book that's hard to read.

There are currently 53 chapters. It's very interesting. It's very interesting. Why is the score so low? It's much better than some 8.5 Chapters. What happened next? Alas, the poisonous point is too bad. The author should revise it.

The writing is excellent, it is rare to rely on writing to attract people, the plot arrangement is good, and the characters are also likeable.

It's been a long time since I've encountered a book that's so appealing to my appetite. Big boost to the author, don't give up! ! The writing is very delicate, and each heroine has a distinct personality. It is a rare good article on Tomato. I hope the author will not be affected by some diodes.

Is Shopkeeper Dong in it also one of the female protagonists? It would be a pity if not

Sure enough, what kind of book can a person write and what kind of person is the author? The "villain" who gets the advantage and still sells well belongs to "referring to the author of the book."

It's quite interesting, but why are so many people criticizing it for having such a low rating? Do you have to read cool articles?

The plot is very good, but I still want to say something about Dong Xiaoman. If it is a female supporting role, I hope the author can arrange a good ending for her.

The book is not bad and very interesting. Highly recommended! ! !

Apart from anything else, the plot of this novel is very informative. If you jump too early, you probably won't know the plot anymore [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] The rest depends on personal preference. I think it's okay at the moment.

I have read more than a dozen chapters. The storyline is rhythmic and the character descriptions are good. I have given it a four-star rating for the time being. I will keep it in my collection.