Naruto: After Time Travel, My Fans All over the World Turned Negative

So far so good. For me, the main attraction is that the heroine is an ordinary person without chakra. Many novels give the protagonist a lot of control over the system, the boundaries of blood inheritance, etc. After reading too much, it is just like that, but I especially like to see the cruel world of ninjas from the perspective of ordinary people. How did the protagonist solve those things? How did the bond between ordinary people and ninjas come about due to the huge power gap between ordinary people and ninjas? Naruto's perspective is from a ninja's perspective, but now it's different when viewed from an ordinary person's perspective. They are very powerful but very fragile, and each of them leads to various inexplicable tragedies because of the collision of this power. What will the heroine bring? This also tests the author's writing skills and his control over the original characters. I am very curious about the next story!

Goddess... The goddess who has no meal replacement in the entire internet... Currently, the original Naruto girl is top 1 in my mind (tied with the author's other novel). She has made a bold but logical fan creation of the original plot. It is just that the update is a bit slow, but it doesn't matter. I will sit back and wait for the meal (

I accidentally discovered the teacher's new work. The previous one was so beautiful that I didn't know what the universe was. It was so beautiful. It is really the most delicate and profound Naruto otome novel. I love it so much. This book is also very stable. The heroine's baby is also very cute and very cute. It feels like the previous CP focused on the younger generation, while this one focuses on the older generation. Just want them all! I hope it will have an open ending with multiple branches. I don't know if the heroine's baby will become stronger in the future. Don't be cruel www...

It's very interesting. The heroine is already working very hard to save others, but what is revealed between the lines is that the imminent tragic fate is so oppressive. I am so anxious to know when the heroine will have real decisive power. It still feels a bit opportunistic at the moment. In addition, I somewhat understand why everyone likes her. She is free and easy, aloof, and has firm beliefs. To children, she is mature and reliable. To adults, she is precocious, stubborn, and endearing. Everyone loves her [Admiration]

I like it so much, I like it so much! ! I caught up with this one from the last one. The two books have different flavors but similar delicacies. It's so enjoyable to read. Teacher, you must write Huoyi for the rest of your life. I will follow the teacher for the rest of my life. [Crying] [Crying] If you want a bad woman, you must be a bad woman. Compared with Chaolu, who has been cheating since birth, and has made rapid progress in combat power, Xi Really, as an ordinary person with rebirth skills, he is trying his best to fight against the world. In fact, Xi is already very strong mentally. In the cruel world of ninjas, he has died so many times in all kinds of strange ways without going crazy. The self-protection mechanism of amnesia is also very reasonable! At this point, Xi can still maintain her own bottom line and feel guilty for hurting others... She is really a very kind bad woman (?) Come on, Xi, the goal is to make a hundred of those hatefully powerful men cry! Selfishly, I really want to see Minato Namikaze cry (Hey), the character of Minato written by the author, who seems to be cute and bright on the surface, but is actually very deep and unable to see through his true heart, is really, really delicious... Teacher, you must write about Fire Yi for the rest of your life! ! (Again)

Watch it well, watch it well, teacher, can you have more Minato scenes? This kind of rational character who looks bright and cheerful but is actually deep and cold is portrayed so well by the teacher! I really want to see him fall for love... I almost spoiled the early Minato scenes! Want to see calm people lose control (˵¯͒¯͒˵) Can Minato have more scenes, sir! The Minato created by the teacher really has a strong connection with Yu. In the early stage, the two people also get along with each other with mature souls that are far beyond their immature bodies. They are very good at fighting each other. In the later stage, they are entangled when they are on opposite sides. They know that they cannot be moved but they still care about the person who can stand by her side. They are all very good at talking about the deep and unspeakable thoughts. I really want to see him lose control! The jealousy and selfishness of people who seem to be bright and graceful are the best! She has the bluest and clearest eyes, which are reminiscent of the endless sky. White doves fly across the sky, and their white wing feathers bring down a bright glow. And when that beautiful blue is stained with a hint of darkness, the color that makes people relax and trust will change into the depth before the storm is about to come. What a good product, teacher!

It is rare to write about the era of Naruto. I followed it from the previous one. The author's writing style is as smooth as ever, and the emotional line is also very good. I hope the heroine will not live so hard in the future. Do you dare the author to suddenly update and scare me? It's so cute. Baby Kato Yui can just take down Kushina Minato, Nawaki Kagami Ryuu and the others like this, okay?

It is very, very, very beautiful. It is a masterpiece among tomatoes and a masterpiece among Naruto fans. It has a different flavor from the author's previous book Morning Dew Baby, but the same deliciousness. After reading it in one breath, I felt the author's writing style, the real world of Naruto that she portrayed, the realistic picture of how an ordinary person without chakra struggled to survive in the world of Naruto without knowing the plot, is destined to be cruel, powerless, and suffering in all kinds of ways. After the constant death ending, the heroine's "blackening" (actually I don't think so, but Xi thinks she is dark, but she is still a very cute baby) is natural. I saw someone commenting that the author or the heroine loves to preach. I think this is wrong. Many times, the heroine is not just talking. Those are her real experiences, her views on the world of Naruto, and her accusation against the unfair law of the jungle. Instead of simply scolding, Xi is like a mature psychiatrist whose heart is riddled with holes but is still gentle. She comforts Naoki and Kushina's unwilling engagement, and guides the awkward psychology of the two Hyuga brothers. Her heart is extremely powerful. But Xi's charm is far more than that. She is not willing to be an ordinary person, so she changes time and time again. With careful logic, smart strategies, and quick reactions, she is not afraid of her own life and death, but saves the lives of others time and time again. She does not waste on fame and fortune, and has a long-term vision. She is also very interesting in getting along with others. Although she knows the plot, she is also a person who pays attention to details and is good at perceiving people's hearts. She always has corresponding ways of getting along with different people in different situations. She is a brother and sister with Jue, and she is a brother-in-law with Minato. The plot has not yet fully unfolded, but I have already seen the infinite possibilities in Xi. She will succeed. Her success is reasonable, deserved and worthy. Very much looking forward to the follow-up! Finally, I still want to express my gratitude to my wife. Chaolu is a very wonderful daughter, and so is Xi. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.

After thinking about it, I decided to go a little higher. It actually looks good, but it takes a long time to write about men and women. It feels a bit preachy. . . Everything else is very beautiful(ㅇㅅㅇ❀)

It's super good-looking, and the overall feeling is better than the one next door, because the heroine Xi has no Sharingan plug-in like Chaolu, and it's not easy to get to where she is now step by step! And I really like the characters in it. The small characters who were not very important in Naruto in the past have become flesh and blood in this book. To be honest, I actually like Black Zetsu now. I feel stupid and easy to deceive [laughing and crying] I look forward to the follow-up development~~ Waiting for completion... Because I don't like to follow chapter by chapter, so I chose to read it from the beginning after finishing it.

I have always liked the teacher's writings, and I was even more surprised to read this book after reading Succubus. The teacher's stories are becoming more and more proficient in writing. I support the teacher, and I am eating hard. (Kneading the bones of Kato brother and sister)

A very, very delicious second-person Naruto Otome! Different from some other invincible or fourth natural disasters, it is a very real journey of survival. The inner struggle is also well written, and the sense of immersion is also very good. I will always follow it! The plot is good and the ideas are novel. It's just that the didactic flavor is a bit heavy at the end, and in some places it even takes up almost a chapter. I hope the boss can control it. After all, I want to relax by reading novels, but bringing up such topics can easily ruin the atmosphere. Overall, it's worth tasting.

Xi's character is very interesting! Compared to the character of the author's main character, Chaolu, I feel more sympathetic to him. Based on the current plot development and my personal selfishness, in those few moments when the dark and moist barrier established with the outside world breaks open, the brilliance blooms is extremely beautiful, I really, really like it! (But at the same time, I also have some dark thoughts (whisper: I want to see Xi desperately walking all the way to the dark side, losing her mind and going crazy for the sake of strength))

It's rare to see a female Naruto. There are fewer battle details but the character is more delicate. The setting of Jiraiya, who flirts here and there but hates picking things up everywhere, is also very fresh. It turns out that in the eyes of the writer's wife, Jiraiya is a romantic and heroic person. It's also interesting to see the old character from a new perspective. It's cute to use the second person to describe the protagonist's carefulness to make readers voluntarily become accomplices, but after realizing this trap, it will be difficult to take on the role of the protagonist, which is a pity. Book friends who are looking forward to a more exciting and exciting battle, please be kind. It's not that the book is bad, it's just not suitable for you. If you can read it, you will find that this is a female Naruto fan telling you about her fantasy Naruto harem. Reading on this premise is as fun as listening to a female buddy bragging at the dinner table. I can find this kind of girl who is a genius, speaks well, and watches Naruto without spending any money [laughs evilly]

A fanfic that exceeded my expectations. I couldn't help but leave a long review after reading chapter 58. The author has done a good job in shaping the heroine and various characters that were not emphasized in the original Naruto manga. At the same time, he also mentioned some obvious pedantic things in the Naruto worldview... It is perfectly integrated into the plot. It is not a pure love story or a cool novel that can be summarized simply as a group pet or a savior - in short, it is very layered. For example, Kato Dan's portrayal is very three-dimensional. He is not simply a "girly girl", nor is he simply portrayed as a "patriarchal". When he discovered that his innocent sister actually "cheated other people's money to buy scrolls", his first reaction was pain and questioning about his missing companionship. The author mentioned a few words in the article: "Adults may appear to be bluffing, but on the inside many adults are still no different from children." "It's just that you are trapped in a child's body. For a long time, you have only been able to look up at the world from a child's perspective, and gradually you have become accustomed to treating the other person as an adult." To be able to think of such a thing, Xi must not be an idiot, and in fact she is not either, she is a bird that is not bound by her body or fate. I think the author who created a soul like Chu Xi is the same. I always believe in one thing: words summarize the author's soul. Therefore, people who can write such words must also be people with ideas, and words written by people with ideas seriously will not be memorable. There are many similar words and phrases like examples, so I won't waste space in listing them. I just want to say that this author knows how to grasp the weight of words. There are such meaningful words, as well as funny clips that triggered dozens of comments, thus constructing a well-paced plot development... Ah, although I really want to continue to say something, I really can't help but want to continue to watch the next development. Whether it is knives or daily life, I am looking forward to it. So this review ends here. I have to go back and continue reading - leave the comment section for now. Ah yes, one more thing, the heroine has never lost her thinking as an adult because of her child's body! The protagonists of many stories about rebirth and time travel will return to their original behavior and psychology after becoming children. Only at plot points will they suddenly remember their adult souls, and then make decisions suddenly and succeed lightly, giving people a sense of the protagonist's aura of "because he is the protagonist, so it must be right." However, the protagonist of this article is more like "because what he did is right, so it is right" - a bit of a stream of consciousness? But that's probably what it means.

Nice! Love watching! I think it's really the ceiling that I've read, and the author's last book was also good! There are only three of my favorite foreign persimmon books, and the two books by the author rank first and second! It's novel, not embarrassing, and doesn't have any perverted cheats. In fact, many books have big cheats. It doesn't feel like you are really fighting in a cruel world. The author's book is really yyds. I hope Mei Bao can have an all-round happy ending [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Author, please update it soon. The kid is crying. I read the previous chapters over and over again [crying] [crying]. Can you please have two chapters a day or stabilize the update time? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]. I hope it can be longer. It's best to include everyone [shy], including Kushina. Of course, writing about Kushina can and is not limited to "love". Maybe I am relatively indifferent to homosexuality haha. I don't mind the heroine having a harem, but I prefer to write separate endings like the author's last book so that it feels [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] Then I watched Xi go from being cold and sensitive at the beginning to choosing to be peaceful and gentle. Instead of giving up on herself, she actively planned for the future and saved her companions. I really felt that Xi was healed by the love and companionship of the people around her. It was really heartwarming! ! Hey, looking at Xi, I always feel a sense of satisfaction like watching my daughter grow up [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's very interesting to watch. The setting and the abilities used by the heroine are more interesting, but overall it's a bit slow in the beginning. The main reason is that there are too many rescue characters. Just watching the rescue is a bit boring, but from Chapter 49 when the heroine wants Orochimaru to marry, it starts to be interesting. The plot is amazing. Kai, deceived Hei Ze into believing that the heroine is his sister, used Hei Ze to imprison her brother to protect him, etc. The heroine's super-level thinking is also very powerful, deconstructing the forced engagement of the rope tree who was forced to marry, thinking about strength and weakness, etc. It's very interesting and very suspenseful.

It's OK. The great writing style is still online. I love it so much. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha "I became a heartthrob after losing my memory and forgetting about Uchiha"

The author's Naruto fanfics have never let me down. I came here from the previous one. This book unfolds the story from a new perspective and a group of characters who don't play much roles in common Naruto fan fiction. Not cloying at all. I am used to reading fanfics about Sasuke, Naruto and other popular characters. This book allowed me to discover the unique shining points of those unpopular characters. It looks at the world of Naruto from a more special angle, and you will really be moved by the author's unique vision. The writing style is mastered in that the early stage is suppressed without losing laughter, and the foreshadowing is also handled just right. I have enjoyed reading dozens of chapters so far. I really couldn't help it, so I gave it a five-star rating first.

It has a familiar style, the same content that made me unable to put it down at the corner of my mouth, the same ups and downs but unexpected plot direction, and the same extremely detailed description of each character... I really can't, I will worship my wife for the rest of my life. As I read, I even unconsciously doubted that the author had really worn it and written it with his true feelings. I really couldn't help it [I almost cried] Moreover, Zhaolu and Xi, the protagonists of the two books, their names, ages, personality settings and relationships with the characters are really wonderful. The two seem to be completely different, but in fact they have similarities in the depth of their souls. The plot is awesome at first glance, but in fact it is even more delicious if you taste it carefully [crying] Does anyone understand? I know there must be some.

Full marks [Adoration] The heroine and Hinata have a great camaraderie with each other. She has a camaraderie with everyone. Let's bring them all into the harem [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Traditional fan fiction 😯 is just a copy of the original work and sprinkled with sugar 👓 so cliche 😫 so boring 😩 while the fairy fic 🤓☝ It's like new flesh and blood is growing in the bones of the original 🤭 It's so shocking 🥰💥💥💥 It's about to explode💥💥💥Fantasy 🎶Soul crit💘Fantasy 🎶Fireworks in the skull🎇! !

The teacher is so good at manipulating people's hearts, especially he manipulates me very hard, and puts out some food to catch me every day, so that I don't get too worried and want to stop, but I still think about it deeply, and even turn on the update reminder to taste it as soon as possible [KISS][KISS] Finished spreading flowers [KISS][KISS]

The emotional relationships and emotional lines in this book are very smooth. The characters have no OOC at all and actually wrote a deformed love bushi [adoration] in a healthy way. It's so beautiful. The protagonist is an ordinary person but he saves people so many times. It's inexplicably igniting. You must be happy.

I like this book very much. It's really good. I like the pain of her death over and over again, her escape from family affection, her playful ways of playing tricks in her diary in her numb life, her cunning ways, her unknowing attachment to warmth, her desire to protect her family, her desire to become stronger by any means necessary, and her anger and rebellion against the world. It's so cute (˶ᵔᵕᵔ˶) Hehehe, come and like Xiao Xi. I feel that the author's articles are very good at the beginning but then go downhill. Both articles need to be promoted in the later stages: traveling through time and space to meet new characters + showing the old characters to be loyal to the protagonist. The new characters are frightened and then something happens and they fall in love with the protagonist, and then repeat the cycle several times. If you can't think of a plot to make the character fall in love with the protagonist, then find some reason to use the old character's memories and emotions to transfer to the new character. Or just give your memories to the characters you want to conquer. It's too easy. The main reason is that this trick has to be repeated several times in one book, and it has to be repeated several times in the second book. It is really a bit weak.

The best Naruto Otome story, the whole text is not dedicated to paving the way for love, the love line is just a modifier (but it is really easy to knock off), you can even get married for your own career (the heroine has a choice, not just anyone) Like it 👍 Personally, I don't really like stories that can travel through the past timeline. I always feel like I'm playing with time, especially if the protagonist is hanging around, which is even more disgusting. Moreover, if you change the past and return to the present, it will always become a mess, which is annoying to watch. But this book is different. There are countless parallel time and spaces, and the protagonist is only in a certain time and space, so what the protagonist changes is not the past, but the present, and the future will become better. And this is not a complete redemption novel. The heroine is not specifically trying to save someone. She is just working hard to create the world she wants, collecting various people who are beneficial to her career, and conveniently helping people in other time and space. Some of the plots are a bit awkward, but I can ignore them personally. Overall, it's a good article.

If you want to read Naruto stories, show me. Oh my god, the author is a genius. How can he write Naruto stories so well? Well, I won't sleep today. I have to finish it. It's so good. It's not OOC at all. I love reading it. I've read the author's Naruto novel before, and it's already very good. I didn't expect that after a year, the author could still write a better Naruto story [crying]. I thank myself for resisting not clicking in when the author first opened the pit, so I specially saved it until today to read it in one sitting [laughing]. Five stars is not the limit, I give ten stars [blowing kiss].

Shockingly delicious! ! The setting of Xi without chakra is very novel and difficult to write, but the author can create such a tough and powerful protagonist. It is really amazing. Her step-by-step efforts, bit by bit rise, and the process of psychological games with others are very vivid. In the aspect of growth, it is really amazing. I think the emotional lines between Xi and each character are very good! Tobirama's mature male type with low self-esteem, Minato's gentle and sinister type, and Broken Bones' dark and pulling type... Each one makes my heart go crazy, and sometimes the tip of my heart is infected with sourness, it's so touching. Moreover, Xi has a strong sense of her own subjectivity, and she especially likes this kind of self-centered heroine (praise) who will not adapt to other people's ideas, but often does what she believes in. There is also a change in her attitude towards the male ninja guests. After realizing that ninjas subconsciously like to be ordered, Xi has become a master-like existence. It feels so good to see me. Morning dew and evening are both super touching! ! Big, great!

I stayed up all night to watch this, it's very good The logic is online, the plot flow, and the emotional line are also natural. I have to say that the food cooked by the author is so delicious. I don't read orthopedics, but I just like the heroine and brother in this book, because the heroine's soul has gone through countless time and space to reach this era, and the brother is a gentle, kind, meticulous, patient and tolerant person. No matter what the heroine does, No matter what happens, I will only reflect on whether I have not protected and taken good care of my sister, and then treat the heroine even more. This kind of person should be a special bond for the heroine who is already an adult, so the two people are particularly entangled with each other because they want to protect each other. Anyway, I like it here. There are too many male protagonists, including the Third Mizukage, Minato, the Hyuga twin brothers, Nezuki, Kagami, White Fang, the Second Hokage, the Third Kazekage, and there should be many more to come. None of these people have been on the table yet [laughing] It's rare to see someone write about the protagonist's previous generation. The approach is very novel. Come on, author, keep cooking.

It's very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful, the emotional description is delicate, and the mental journey is well described [Like] The emotional line is not abrupt at all [face covering] [face covering] This kind of behind-the-scenes hero plot that the world doesn't know is really cool [like] [like] I personally think this book is the pinnacle of female pornography like the previous one [like] [like] If you like reading these two books about female pornography, you must not miss it [like] [like] [send heartfelt]