Baisi Little Loli, You Call This the God-Killing Sword Princess

Overall, it is a satisfying novel above the pass level. The rhythm of the revenge line in the early and middle stages is very good, which makes it a lot of fun. The emotional line is okay except for the little rich woman. After talking about the advantages, the next step is the disadvantages. The problem is mainly concentrated in the revenge line. I personally feel that the protagonist's thoughts are a bit too extreme. Not being a virgin does not mean that he is inhumane. It is very reasonable to care about his family. However, the people the protagonist knows in the organization do not mean that they are not good to him. There is also someone important to him. As a result, it is a bit difficult for him to take a spaceship directly to protect himself. Moreover, the overall rhythm in the later period is a bit too depressing. Even if you kill the black dragon, you don't feel very happy. There is only a laborious feeling of fighting an elite monster for a long time. If the protagonist can change his mentality and look away a little after the revenge is taken, this can make the protagonist's character more positive and full, and the rhythm will be less depressing. I hope the author can keep up the good work! Come on! [Code hold]

The book is quite regular, similar to ordinary cool articles, but the writing style is still relatively good, and the author is also very attentive. All in all, the book is a good book, but you have to decide whether it suits you. If it is just to disparage the author by posting a rating, I don't think it is necessary. The author is also working very hard on writing, so keep up the good work, I will definitely get better and better as you write [laughs]

This book can still attract me. The Sword Princess who appears in the article can give me a sense of normality and human beings. In many Tomato novels, characters like the heroine mostly serve as a foil to the male protagonist's power and power and become the male protagonist's harem. In this novel, at least I saw that the heroine looks like a person rather than an object. The shortcoming is that it is a bit formulaic. Basically, Sword Princess saved her when she was at her lowest. But for Shuang's novel, it actually makes sense. The theme of Dao Ji really attracted me, and there was no strong collapse of combat power. In fact, I can see a bit of Dragon Clan in the writing style, and I don't necessarily have to pursue Jiangnan's writing style that can surprise people at first glance. The most important thing for a novel is actually to attract the audience to continue reading and create more fascinating scenes. I also wish the author to write better and better.

It's a very good book. It improves the world view, the melee, and the characterization of the characters are all very good. But I want to ask, my origami teacher. I seemed to have forgotten this person in the later period, but it is still very interesting.

It's a harem-themed book. It's very good. I don't know why the rating is low, but it's good to avoid being banned [Thoughts]

Well written. Tomato's rare sword girl essay. Personally, I still think the writing is quite nice. Give it five stars. I've finished reading! I'm still not satisfied! The amount of updates you've made is not enough for me! It's so wonderfully written, can you... [Please update] a little more? [Sending my heart]

It looks good, but I feel like the extras are not finished. There are some things that are hard to come to terms with, but I've put them at the end to prevent those who don't want to see spoilers from reading them. The love line is blurred, a good choice. In the battle series, the love line will seem cumbersome. Although it is like the "anchor" Shen said, it always feels a bit uninteresting, maybe it is not perfect enough (no criticism intended) Fighting is fun! This is super pretty There are too many protagonists, Su Qianxing (who appears later in this one) and Zhang Yuzhi (who disappears directly in this later part, I don't know if it's because I didn't pay attention), they don't feel very good, and they could use some extras. Finally, it's difficult to calm down: Tuoba Hong (this is actually okay) Lu Yi (a little uncomfortable) and Yuantong Mo Xuanye Good night, have a good rest, and be happy in the next life

I highly recommend book lovers to read this book. It can be said to be a great combination of combat themes, multiple weapons, harem, delicate emotions and expanded world view! The character descriptions and characters of the Dao Ji are very lovable, and the author's control of the rhythm is also very good. The setting of Dao Ji is very novel, and the plot's bright and dark lines are well arranged. I especially like Tao Tao. The coolness of Tai Sword, the cute character, the ever-escalating sense of development, and the gradual relationship with the protagonist are very natural; As a sword, Jun Han combines ice and sword, which inexplicably feels like the three friends of Sui Han. In addition to coldness and sharpness, Qian Qian Junzi has a large-scale thought. It seems full of contrast. Combined with the pretentious vest of the protagonist Ice Emperor, it is very interesting; Reaching for the Stars is a spear that combines Liuhe marksmanship. The author is really good at writing and very serious. The fighting scenes really test the author's literary skills. The author is very dedicated to writing like this. 8.8 Is definitely low, at least he has a level and attitude of 9.1. In addition, the breakthrough method of topping must be combined with the power of the stars, and only the male protagonist can control it. The setting of longing for a hearty battle, very well binds her to the male protagonist, and strings together the two lines of Hongyi and the reshaped sister. It is very ingenious! Su Yu doesn't make many appearances, and the image of the female imp hasn't been fully established yet. It remains to be seen, but I believe the author can do a good job~ At present, there is no clue about the foreshadowing of the invasion of black dragon consciousness. It may be related to expanding the world view or tracing the origin of these swords in super ancient civilization; the male protagonist is still lurking in Hongyi; the sister's emotional line is actually very good and warm, but it is difficult to realize on the platform, which is a pity [laughing] All in all, it was very smooth to read in one go, without any sense of fragmentation or poisonous points. As long as you can accept multiple female protagonists, it's no problem. It only takes two chapters and it will definitely attract readers! Keep up the good work, author!

After reading most of it, you feel like your flaws are not covered up? The overall plot and plot development are good. The character description in the second half has changed. Is it because the author is busy in reality? Or is the plot in the final chapter more compact? And the reason why there is no outline? What was the character arc that led to the Black Dragon plot? Describe? Profile? Almost none. The description of the new Sword Princess (Su (Jiang) Yu, Jing Ting) in the middle and late stages is almost non-existent. She has become a weapon, not the Sword Princess. She is left there to beat and chop. There is much less interaction than the Sword Princess in the early and middle stages, and it is a bit fragmented. But my sister is very nice, and I don't mind the interaction with her in it (isn't this a bit off topic later on?). But I skipped a bit and read a little bit later, and when I returned to my daily life, I had a corresponding portrayal of the Sword Princess, and it was pretty good. So overall it's pretty good. I hope the next version will be more balanced. Cheers, author. I just read Chapter 400 (I was not told that it will be super expanded later)

It's a very good book. Although the plot is a bit cliche in the early stage of revenge, in the middle stage, you become the public enemy of mankind, in the later stage, you cooperate with the Human Alliance to resist the Abyss for your sister, and finally become the savior. However, the content is very interesting and the plot is also good. It is just that I was a little upset when Lao Mo died. Although it is a necessary sacrifice to move from the old era to the new era, it is still a bit uncomfortable. It is a good book worth reading.

After reading it for a while, I feel that this style is still very old-fashioned, but the author's writing style is very good, and it doesn't look like it will make people unable to stand it. The descriptions are very good in all aspects, and the author will continue to work hard.

It's a wonderful novel. I was attracted by the theme of swords at first, but I didn't expect that the battle would be so brilliant and make people excited. It can be seen that the author's writing style is not weak. I just hope that the author will not give up and hope to have a beginning and an end.

I have read Chapter 320 so far, and the plot is pretty good, and the character portrayal of each prop is quite delicate. However, in the end, it may be due to energy issues that the Sword Girl who appears later has a lot less interaction than in the early stage, and it becomes purely a weapon. And the title says there are 18 kinds of weapons, but in the end, there are not 18 kinds, maybe only six kinds at most, and there are some slight anchor points, but the problem is not big. So it can be regarded as a relatively recommended novel.

Not bad, not bad. It's just that the protagonist feels a bit immature.

It's really good-looking. She doesn't care about numbers, doesn't hold back, and doesn't act stupid when it comes to relationships.

The author's character description is okay. The protagonist's efforts for revenge in the early stage, the challenge to the abyss in the middle, and the direct affairs of the protagonist's friends in the later stage are all well portrayed. Although there are knives in daily life in the later stage, it is okay to see😁

The plot development is remarkable, and the delicate and passionate battle scenes are a plus. But the emotional line in the early and middle stages was the support. Xiao Chunan was so full of taste that he stepped back and stopped. But fortunately, he is a qualified master-chasing counter-disciple, and Feicun's is still normal.

It looks good, the fighting is well described, and the dual identity of the protagonist makes the whole plot smoother. The author can use this feature to provide multiple explanations, and it is not easy to overturn. Madness is the right thing. The protagonist's obvious identity requires madness, otherwise there is no way to get more information. I have read too much pure love recently, and the stallion story is also good. Finally, the author said, is there someone above you? [Think]

It kind of borrows from the plot of Ji Niang Xingchen, I feel pretty good

The title is very novel and the plot is very smooth. The main character does not have a virgin plot and knows what he should do. He cares about his family (but I feel it is a bit unfinished. 1. The book starts with 18 weapons and only has 5 at the end. 2. Why is there no marriage plot with the teacher? 3. At the end, there is only the sister and no other Sword Princess or teacher. Is the sister not accepting them yet?

Hahaha, many of them are book friends from the era of the girl next door [smirking], the snail noodle king has a bit of a shadow of the durian king next door. Sure enough, the penguin (roasted goose) is the bond, and New Zealand will die generation after generation [face covering]

The thinking is more careful, although there are some small loopholes, but it does not affect it, the content is also a bit refreshing, I really like to read it

Look good, is there a heroine? Little Putao [blowing kiss]

I gave it 5 stars before half a chapter, and 3 stars after half a chapter. The overall evaluation is 4 stars. The content before Abyss is very good, the emotions are delicately written, and the writing is also refreshing. After half a chapter, the author doesn't know what to write and starts to get confused. He can treat the first half of the chapter as one book and the second half as two books. The first half of the chapter can also be regarded as an ending. In short, if you pay attention to the delicateness of the emotional line and take into account the coolness of the text, it is completely readable. Worth reading.

It's very interesting, and the foreshadowing can be taken back in time, and it also provides the author with an idea. The Seven Swords is because he is completely loyal to the protagonist. The protagonist never fought the boss, so he used his last strength to leave this trial ground. After the opening paragraph, the protagonist fulfilled the wishes of his predecessor.

Full marks, this is a very good book after My Girls Are World Class

The first part of this book is quite satisfactory, but the author's wording and sentence making in the latter part are very good. The latter part depicts the characters very well, the emotions are very deep, and the environment is described more delicately. However, in the latter part of the article, the author may have used the professional vocabulary he learned in the article. I can actually see the word "yield limit" in the latter part of the article. The whole novel is very good, there are no major pitfalls, and the logic is smooth.

Although there are many similar scenes, there are also many details that have not been handled well, but I am a local dog and I like to watch it. I will give five stars first. The author, you'd better write the daily life better. The battle aspect is also difficult to describe. I hope the author can continue to learn from experience and grow.

It's so pretty. It's very good to use. It's very comfortable to wear. The milky aroma is very rich and it doesn't cause balls. It tastes crunchy.

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