Absolute Zone Zero: Miss Ya's Rich Fox Lady

Most of the early chapters have been revised. Although there are still some gaps, it is much better than before, where there was not a single punctuation mark on the page [face covering] The plot arrangement is quite reasonable, and there are no particularly serious OOCs for the time being.

When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the green bamboo slips will be named, and they will still be fragrant after thousands of years. Sigh! Nine out of 100 difficulties, the disadvantage lies in the later stage; but by waving the key like rain, it can stop the crowd's beaks May your ink be like a long river, so that the starry night will have no regrets, and readers will forget to eat and sleep. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫

It's okay, the OOC of Renjiya is a bit serious, and the combat power is a bit low (personal feeling). If the protagonist and Beng Tie were two independent universes, the protagonist's combat power would be enough, but in the Beng Tie universe, it would be a bit insufficient. If the aftermath of a fight between two star gods would cause death, the planet would be gone [smile][smile],

It's good to watch, no need to say more, but the plot seems to be a little too much, but it's okay.

Well, the content is good, but the author could use more breaks. It's a bit uncomfortable because they are all long sentences.

The writing is clear and the author has great literary talent. I was a little nervous reading Baihe for the first time.

Hehehe, my favorite two heroines!

It's so good-looking. As someone who likes Ya, I've read a lot of fanfics about Ya. This one makes me think it's uniquely good-looking.

The author responds positively to readers and is very obedient. He doesn't have a knife at the moment, so he can eat it with confidence.

It's beautiful and sweet. Can I use a knife or even no knife in the future? [Sending my heart]

It looks good, maybe part of the reason is that I like this genre or I recommend it because it's all about animal ears. Naturally, I like it too.

Author, write quickly. We need more excellent writers like you. The stories you write are very exciting. Please write more good stories like this and continue to write the stories of this book.

Recommended to put on the shelf, it is a good book

It's really pretty

Not bad, it seems to be Baihewen

My friend, are you Fuli [laughing and crying]

Very unconventional, nice looking

It is recommended to have a little fox with a little fox

It's pretty good, but it's hard to read without the comma😔

(The author must not use the knife later) Ah, it's very interesting. I just hope to write more plots outside the main plot.

Super, super good-looking. Highly recommended. Highly recommended.

It's well written, but it's too short. Come on! Author, I've already followed you [blowing kiss]

Very good! ! ! Highly recommended The author is suspected of being a memory star god (Do not give face to the Star God)

Dear author, let's change the sentences and add more punctuation marks. It's so uncomfortable to listen to the book [I'm about to cry]

The protagonist is the envoy of the Order of Abundance, can't he purify the void directly? [Think]

Incredibly good-looking

After more than ten chapters, it has developed into Lily. I can only say

That's right, no knives! [Punch hard]

Very good, it's my favorite lily

Please use more punctuation marks. Use commas more frequently. There are so many long and difficult sentences in front of you. [Face covering] Keep up the good work! Come on, author!