[Lily + Tie Tie + daily life of cultivating immortals + unusual system]
[Chapter 6 opens the post directly] [No writing] [The pace is slow] [The micro main line reposts] [The number of posts decreases when the main line is pushed]
[The protagonist is not brainless and strong in the early stage! ! It will be a little deflated when it doesn't grow up in the early stage!
Chi Le came to the western alchemy world due to an accident, and was persuaded to leave the sect at the beginning.
The domineering master directly responded: She is my protector, what does it have to do with you!
I thought it was very smart for the system to let you choose your path to immortality.
As a result, I was told that it was the explosive elixir holy body.
What?
You told me that the original owner was in the alchemy cultivation sect but couldn't refine the elixir?
Lin Qingxue: Disciple, if you come to my room alone at night, I have a solution
Chi Le: My master is Lily. What should I do? I'm waiting online. It's very urgent.
After a lot of hard work, I turned on the system.
Chi Le: Is your system really a serious system? Why is it still incomplete after opening...
What do I need you for, to let you watch the fun?
Just play and play, make trouble and make trouble.
After all, he is his son, so he should be favored or favored.
As time goes by, memories are lost, the trajectory of fate is changed, and another reborn person of unknown origin...
Dense pressure shrouded Chi Le's heart, even reaching the point where it could crush her.
Chi Le: Destroy it! It was a mistake for me to be here
At the same time, the inconspicuous little secret pulled Master Lin Qingxue into the water, putting her in crisis...
Behind this relatively peaceful scene, there are also people secretly planning something...
Reader comments
The narrative speed in the early stage is slow, and the plot is just one line. I hope the author can pay attention to this issue in the future.
Starting from Chapter 56 when the resurrection is described, the writing becomes more normal. From the time after the resurrection until Chapter 103, there was no progress in the third branch mission, and the main plot was also extremely slow. It was all about the ambiguous daily life of Chi Le and Lin Qingxue. I hope that the author can focus on the ambiguity and the main plot in the future, and the branch plots will be advanced at the same time.
I feel that this book is still suitable for people who like a slow pace. From the beginning, I can tell that I am a novice, but after reading it, I feel that the narrative is okay.
All I can say is, keep working hard [Thinking]
It is true that the writing at the end is better than the first, but I feel that the foreshadowing is a bit slow to withdraw. It was only in Chapter 67 that it was explained why the master wanted to stick to the heroine. Now that I have explained it, I hope there will be more scenes of stickers in the future [Love]
I just read Chapter 84, it's amazing... The materials produced by the small workshop are so fierce...
The narrative speed in the early stage is slow, and the plot is just one line. I hope the author can pay attention to this issue in the future. Starting from Chapter 56 when the resurrection is described, the writing becomes more normal. From the time after the resurrection until Chapter 103, there was no progress in the third branch mission, and the main plot was also extremely slow. It was all about the ambiguous daily life of Chi Le and Lin Qingxue. I hope that the author can focus on the ambiguity and the main plot in the future, and the branch plots will be advanced at the same time.
I feel that this book is still suitable for people who like a slow pace. From the beginning, I can tell that I am a novice, but after reading it, I feel that the narrative is okay. All I can say is, keep working hard [Thinking] It is true that the writing at the end is better than the first, but I feel that the foreshadowing is a bit slow to withdraw. It was only in Chapter 67 that it was explained why the master wanted to stick to the heroine. Now that I have explained it, I hope there will be more scenes of stickers in the future [Love] I just read Chapter 84, it's amazing... The materials produced by the small workshop are so fierce...
Good-looking and good-looking.