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The author suggests adding the Noble Phantasm Liberation Language

The character of the protagonist is very well portrayed, gentle and sunny, and you can feel the gentleness of the protagonist from the text. The character of the protagonist in many novels is like a slut, and many authors cannot write this feeling. The storylines of Xia Na, Yun Ying, and Bai Ling are all great and eye-catching. Especially when I saw the moment of breaking up, I thought this book was different (,,վ㉨վ,,), but when one, two and three were all girls, I felt that this book seemed familiar. When everyone talked about the protagonist, I had already confirmed the routine of this book. The time of showing off and slapping people in the face is over. Too many scenes of being insulted will give people a sense of fatigue. In addition, many novels nowadays contain such scenes, which will make this fatigue even greater. The characterizations and the stories related to the characters are very vivid and appealing, but the subsequent plots are very different. If you, the author, want to write about the crisis of the human race or something, conquering the land and conquering the universe, it is best not to do this. Novels like this have the same plot, and there may be some changes in it, but overall it is the same. This book has to reach a different realm. For example, you can lead the team to develop for a few years, and then at the end, while the enemy is still preparing to discuss attacking the earth, directly attack their lair and destroy them all. There is no need for enemies to send you one by one to gain experience. Of course, the above is purely my personal opinion. If you have better ideas, don't be influenced by me and keep writing😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜

It looks good, I love reading it, cheers for the author

Looks good, just a way to kill time

Recommend a good book, but the update is too slow, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.

Come on, it looks good, I love watching it

Single girl or harem? I prefer single women

Come on, author, I hope it lasts for a long time [face covering]

I still find it attractive when I see it. .

The writing is pretty good, but why hasn't it been updated yet? No more writing?

There are not many books of this type. Please support them.

Come on, it looks good, keep up the good work, I'm curious how those unrecognizable heroic spirits can make permanent contracts

Come on author, very good

It's okay, maybe I like the look and feel of Fate a little better