Lingli

It feels like a two-dimensional thing. It's very imaginative and interesting. Here's an excerpt for everyone's experience: He pushed his palms forward, and a rapidly rotating, deep purple vortex appeared out of thin air, sucking and swallowing the terrifying purple light beam like a black hole! The energy of the light beam was crazily compressed and twisted, condensing into an extremely unstable purple energy ball that was only the size of a fist in the center of the vortex, but exuded heart-stopping fluctuations! Electric snakes dance wildly on the surface of the sphere, as if they are about to explode at any moment! The pace is very fast, suitable for those born in 2000. Good reviews ((*^∀^))👍🏻

The writing is okay, but several times I thought they were the same Bengsan people (Otto, Cecilia, Black Abyss White Flower, Theresa, etc.) [Face covering]

The author has been working hard on writing. Thank you for your support and criticism.

It's okay, there is a certain connection between modern history and fantasy. This book is a product of the author's love for power generation. It combines the author's secondary school and fantasy in his youth. Therefore, the narrative structure of the article and some scenes and stories will be similar to the popular narratives at that time. If you can't accept it, don't read it. If you can accept it, you can read it.

It can be seen that the world view of this book is very grand, and the author wants to tell a deep and heavy story. When reading this book, it is obvious that you need to use your brain and analyze it bit by bit and think bit by bit. I have been digging holes since the beginning. I have only read part of it so far. I hope the author can fill in all the holes in the future and look forward to the prequel [Top post][Top post][Top post]

The characterization and description of the environment are very delicate, but after watching it for a long time, it will easily feel cumbersome; the plot insertion is a little abrupt but innocuous; the world view is large, and you need to use your brain to read it, otherwise it will be easy to remember. If you are a keen reader and like a slow pace, you can read this

It's good. It would be nice if the paragraphs could be separated more. My eyes are dazzled.

It's so awesome. The writing style is very good in Tomato, and the world view is also very big.

I have read the first few chapters so far. The advantage is that the writing is very good. The disadvantage is that there are not enough contradictions and conflicts. It is recommended to start from the heroine escaping the pursuit and entering the hero's house. In addition, the writing style is too serious and there are not enough laughs. However, the new author is still good. Five stars for support.

Five stars, but the world view is a bit big. In Tomato, it is better for the author to give an explanation diagram, which is more intuitive.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the worldview writing is quite good, but when you write a novel, you have to create a living character. In my opinion, the psychological activities of the protagonist should be richer and more contradictory. To write a vivid story, there can also be some humor and jokes. It is too serious and makes people lose the desire to read. It feels very dry. Overall, I'm very optimistic about the author. I mainly read it because of the protagonist's water and gun. Come on, author.

Just for the amount of updates from the author, I would like to give you a five-star review [making a face] Of course, I personally think it looks pretty good [thinking] I hope the author will not starve to death [face covering]

Not bad, keep working hard

It has a very strong smell of the second dimension, and the feeling of the second dimension is very well grasped. It is particularly refreshing to look at and gives a sense of immersion.

Author, who is the heroine?

I can't understand it but I think it's well written

Not bad, looking forward to the performance

Ok ok ok

Very good, the world view is very grand

Looks good, support it

Just sitting here with the spirit of rewriting, I also gave these five stars.

I have never seen such a hard-working author. He deserves 5 stars. Is it generating electricity for love?

It's pretty good but I recommend reading it, not listening to it.

Very busy, come on

Very pretty, very durable.