Western Fantasy: I Became Everyone’s Darling After Rewriting My Death Script

Monica is very cute, and the author's writing is not bad, but why is it this traditional male protagonist's redemption style? . . . . . . I guess Lott is the male protagonist, and he doesn't like the heroine's attitude towards Lott. Very baffling. Even if the heroine originally had good thoughts about Lot in order to survive, why is there a plot about an adopted son? [What] A slave suddenly becomes the heir of the Duke's Palace, which only requires a trace of kindness from the heroine. . Forehead. It just changes. In the eyes of outsiders, this adopted son is actually more awesome than his biological daughter 😄 I don't understand why one would think that an adopted son of Lot would have the right to inherit even over the duke's only daughter, who was favored by her parents. Just like I don't think anyone would think that Molina, the illegitimate daughter, would have the right to inherit Pania. My conspiracy theory: If the Duke's new adopted child is a daughter, will anyone still feel that Monica is not taken seriously? [What] The task given by the system to the female protagonist is to defeat the four original male protagonists. But I only see the male protagonist who is constantly exaggerated with great magical talent. Apart from the golden finger that can cultivate immortality, I don't see anything special about the female protagonist. 👍 And in the battle between the female protagonist and the male protagonist, what is also expressed is the powerful magical talent of the male protagonist. . The Queen, a woman immersed in power, actually believed that her adopted son had greater inheritance rights than her biological daughter. She even directly believed that the male protagonist was the heir to the Duke's Palace and had a very average attitude towards the female protagonist. . Even knowing that the heroine is loved by her parents 😂 The heroine will be very, very good to the hero because he is a beautiful, well-behaved and suffered a lot of pain, but she will have a cold relationship with her parents because of their neglect when she was a child. She only feels that it is to exaggerate the difference between the heroine and the hero. . Even if the heroine's parents treat her well, I don't see how much she loves her parents, but she directly considers the male protagonist who they haven't been with for a long time to be a family member. Moreover, when I was a child, my parents only lacked companionship and were not negligent in terms of material things. The heroine, an adult who is not living a good life in modern times and now has good material conditions, would actually blame her parents for lack of love from her parents when she was a child? [What] Moreover, the male protagonist had an inexplicable magical riot very easily, and the female protagonist actually thought that it was because of herself that the male protagonist's life was hanging by a thread, and that she had brought misfortune and suffering to the male protagonist. But doesn't the male protagonist get enough from the female protagonist? . . If it weren't for the female protagonist, the male protagonist would now be a tortured and cold-shouldered slave. Um... Later the heroine even damaged her body in order to save the hero. . [OK] Thunder in the sky, all I can say is that the female protagonist should run away. They are all very cute children, but I can't accept that a heroine with such a high status can still be looked down upon.

Generally speaking, it is not even good-looking. The biggest highlight is that the heroine persuades the twins of the original spouse to be nice to the illegitimate children. The father and mistress are hateful, and the illegitimate children (regardless of their character) are also a kind of harm to the original spouse and children. Although the children are innocent, illegitimate children carry original sin from birth. The author also describes the protagonist. Don't persuade others to be good without others' suffering. You can have a good impression of him yourself, but you cannot and should not let his first wife also have a good impression of the illegitimate daughter. This is very disgusting. Moreover, the heroine's focus is too much on the male protagonists. It feels that she does not pay attention to her family and her own story. The main heroine can only be said to be a different person and a wise person.

Lightning protection. I can't accept the heroine's generosity to others and persuade the legitimate children to treat their illegitimate children well. Why did she say that the original heroine was a little white flower before, but now it's her turn and she is no longer, and "everyone is equal"😓The comment section also said how innocent the little girl is, so I hope you can also treat your illegitimate children well, share the property equally, and love each other as a family 🤮

Is there a poisonous point in Chapter 15? The heroine tells the twins to treat their father's illegitimate daughter well. However, the twins in front are not very polite to the heroine, maybe they want to be hostile to them? (But it's a bit different, personal opinion, for reference only.)

Everything was fine up front, but it was a bit vicious when I saw the third daughter brought home and asked her brothers to be nice to her. You can say don't bully her, what the hell is it to be nice to her, let yourself face the child of your parents' mistress, it's fine if you don't bully her, and you want to pay special attention to it? I hate all mistresses and their children

The only thing I think is bad is that the female protagonist permanently harms her own interests for the male protagonist.

It's... It's hard to comment. I originally liked the setting and plot of this book, but after reading about ten chapters, the heroine was very uncomfortable when she advised her to get married and have children and treat the illegitimate child properly. I originally thought that this would be the end of it, and I could endure it and read it, but then the heroine showed up. I can't stand the idea of giving a child out of wedlock to an illegitimate child. When I saw this, I felt that there would be a lot of plots like this in the future. It's a pity that the plot and setting are very good, but because of this, it directly ruined the viewing experience and made people have no desire to watch it. I still hope the author can change these things, it really disappoints the impression.

This world is essentially a world that favors boys over girls, and this kind of discrimination goes far beyond blood. No matter how powerful the heroine is, she is just a marriage tool in the eyes of others.

It's hard to comment... I think I quite liked it at first, but after reading it, I really... This article is a love story for men🙄 (You can scroll down and read the comments for the reason for this, they said everything I wanted to say, I am really shocked, you can feel free to)

The younger sister is so cute and has the air of a serious kitten, which makes people want to tease her. Although she calls herself an old mother, she is still a child. Karin is a cold-faced maid, always expressionless (except to the lady) and has a lady-like attitude. The Duke is also a man of contrasts. He is very childish when facing his sister, and the two of them seem to have reversed their identities. But he is very dignified when facing others. Lotnis is a black sesame glutinous rice dumpling. She looks pitiful when facing her younger sister, has a low self-esteem, and is quite indifferent in front of others. Looking forward to more male guests