HP: Savior? No, It's Pleasure

The heroine was a Slytherin in her last life, and now she is a Gryffindor. The protagonist is quite strong, but the first echelon is still Lao Deng and Lao Fu. The character is more Slytherin, a bit humorous, and maybe occasionally more Snape due to his past life. The emotional line is all, a slight abuse of men? There are many single arrows, the female protagonist is a piece of wood, and currently it seems that the male protagonists have a little bit of a black mud tendency. Looking at the comments section, some people think it is OOC, and there are not many descriptions in the original novel about the parent generation. Personally, I think it is pretty good among 🍅fanfics. Overall it looks good! If you like All, don't miss [Blow Kiss] Off topic, campus bullying in HP is really serious, so I agree with what the heroine said [face covering] "Gryffindor is a piece of chocolatey shit." +1 "Slytherin is pure shit." +1

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh to to to to to to to to toto to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to tot or or for to write! ! ? ? ! The food is delicious, the writing is reasonable, the cp is fragrant (including the knife), the brushwork is beautiful, the writing style is vivid, the whole is full of youth, the emotions are real, the characters are not OOC, the heroine is delicious, the characterization is plump, the tone is vivid, the plot has hidden mysteries, the logic can pass the brain, and the brain can actually be taken with you Yes, the plot setting is complete, the metaphors are just right, the author's personal understanding is full marks, the plot lines are rich and colorful, sweet as honey, melting in the mouth like butter, sweet but not greasy, like traveling in the ocean, the knife is like glass, as sharp as a needle tip, spicy, making people cry, like a blade, presenting a dense texture like cappuccino, and an intoxicating base like a cocktail. The tune makes people indulge in it, forget about it, and be intoxicated, such as the beach under the moon, the snow-capped mountains in the afternoon, the early morning sun, and the aurora at night. The writing of love at first sight is a little green when I first read it, and I am already deeply involved in it when I read it again. At the last glance, I feel that I belong to it and enjoy it. The heroine is reborn, her personality is Slytherin + Gryffindor, the language art is funny, and she is The one who seduces people without knowing it is stupid. The male guest is proactive, possessive, self-defeating, contradictory, and double-standard. Of course, each one is delicious. The timeline is from the previous generation. The heroine is constantly striving for self-improvement. What seems like redemption is actually just for her own benefit. There is a Shura field. The heroine is highly intelligent and redeems each other... In short, it is very delicious😋👍

The greatest thing about this book is the extras for each character, which are simply written by the soul. It is said to be a heart-throb stock buying article, but in fact it is more like a group portrait. Whether it is the plot of the previous life or the changes brought about by the heroine in this life, they are all an analysis and interpretation of the character, which fits the character of the original character very well. Regardless of the protagonist, supporting role, or villain, each character has an independent soul and a complete story line. It is not only a heartthrob fanfic, but it also not only describes the main male characters, but the plots of the three sisters Lily and Blake, the original character Gray, and even the heroine's mother are all very well written. Family, friendship, love and even the transformation of conflicts between colleges are written in full detail. There is no deliberate whitewashing of the character, James' love shines as warmly as the sun, and every time he says I caught you again, it is like a beam of light shining on the heroine. Sirius' love is like a sudden wind mixed with wet rain. He was the first to fall in love with the heroine. Love at first sight in every life has no final result. In the previous life, you peeked at her love for Regulus like a puppy. In this life, you clearly became friends with her but still couldn't go any further. Remus's love is gentle and tolerant. Regulus's love in the previous life was a typical "for your own good" that deprived the heroine of her freedom of choice. You are the most special to the heroine. In this life, at the very beginning of the layout, she had thought of a way out for you, but she can no longer love you. Severus' love is like the dark night. What accompanies the North Star is not the stars around it, but the dark night. Little Barty's love is like a lunatic. I don't know where the love started and the hatred is nowhere to be found. The hatred comes and goes just because I hate that she doesn't love you. Although the heroine is reborn, she does not have a big golden finger. The peak of her combat power is still that of Voldemort and Dumbledore. The setting of the Snake House and the Lion House combines the shrewdness of Slytherin and the bravery of Gryffindor. She is an imperfect growth-oriented character, sober, independent and full of warmth. The author's writing style is very good, and many of the metaphors are used very delicately. The writing style is delicate and beautiful, but it does not seem like a "literary youth disease" whining for no reason. The story has a smooth structure, with the first half being lighthearted and funny, and the second half advancing the main plot. The extras are a bit sadistic but not too frustrating. Everyone understands their position, either to protect or to withdraw. In my opinion, the heroine may not necessarily like James the most, but James is indeed the most suitable for her. Lorna Weir, with her final disappearance, taught Severus Snape one last and most important thing: Never box yourself into other people's problems. The Dark Lord's ambition is the Dark Lord's problem, Potter's arrogance is Potter's problem, Lily's choice is Lily's problem, and even the complaints of these pure-blood friends in front of them are also their own problem. Always live only for yourself. Like her. Be responsible for your own choices and goals coldly, rationally, and absolutely.

Well written [crying] [crying] I really love James' enthusiasm and straight shots. Rey is still the one who makes people feel heartache. I am so relieved that Sirius can hit straight shots hahahahaha. In short, I would like to express my gratitude to the author! ! ! !

The writing is super good. It is one of the best among all the HPs I have read. I like the line in Gray's chapter "Two people died that day, a standing body and a kneeling soul". The characters are also well created and you can see the depth. People who don't click on it to see it will suffer a big loss.

It's a really nice book. It's very, very attractive. Maybe when I read the first few chapters, I was a little bit bored, but if you insist on reading, it's really great, it's really beautiful and beautiful, [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], it's really attractive and beautiful [] Kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss], I hope you will keep updating and add more updates. One chapter when sleeping, one chapter when eating, and one chapter when resting. Be sure to update well and don't take a good rest [shy][shy][shy][shy]

What the author wrote is really interesting and very funny. And it also contains a guide to James. You must know that there are very few articles about dismantling Zhan Li's CP [top post] (I finally found this article that suits my preferences [almost crying])

The IQs of all the members are online, the characters fit the image and have their own characteristics! The plot of Gray is really unexpected. It is not abrupt at all but adds a deeper understanding of the college's prejudice. Slytherin's regret and self-blame are very deep. The nobles are pure blood but they are also human beings. Even if they are influenced by the environment, they still retain the original emotions that a person should have. The "lack of bravery" shown by Gryffindor is also very realistic. Jamie is the sun but not only shines, Sirius is free and arrogant but does not prevent him from facing his own heart, Lemmy is afraid of hating his werewolf identity, but in this book he can face his fear, Sev will not just keep asking for love because he lacks love and does not understand love, Rael's physical and mental constraints will naturally follow his original intention, and It's not that the heroine forcibly changed the character. The character of Little Barty is easy to write and hard to write. His labels seem to have been fixed to that, that, that, that, that. But these labels are indeed present in this book, but it adds a different flavor. Not only does Gryffindor deserve the warmest friendship, but Slytherin also deserves valuable friendship. The heroine baby is the most unexpected one!! She has cheats but it does not affect the overall reading experience. She has brains and flaws. She is not the traditional perfect heroine. She has her own personality and pursues eternal and only love but it does not exist. Without the male character, it becomes blank. No wonder it is the North Star. .. Not only love, but also friendship and family affection are well written! Even though there is very little description of mother and father, it is profound. This book really gives the character of Peter a different image, which is very shocking. The light called Redemption also shines on his final ending. Ah!! How can it be so beautiful? I will wait forever to read this book no matter how many times I will never get tired of it!! It is really novel!! I hope all the babies who like the original generation can discover this big book!! I also hope that the big book can be liked by more people!! More people can like the big book!! (I have revised it almost 20 times, and I don't know why I can't pass it, but just because I have revised it almost 20 times and haven't given up, I know that I really, really like this book!)

The writing is too captivating. I have been affected by the joy, anger, sorrow and joy in the story for the past two days. When I woke up before six o'clock in the morning, the first thing I did was to read the unfinished part of the story~ The most touching thing is that it is real and vivid, and the heroine is very charming. She is reborn, but she did not predict the plot. She is a real character. Although she did not see the finale, it did not affect her ending at all. It's so damn charming~ It's so fragrant, all the characters are not OOC, Mary is even more strong and moving now, Sirius is also crazy and sober, and stubbornly wants to find Lorna~ Severus's fall is natural. Rael doesn't appear much but is very real. His charm is not inferior to that of James. Sunshine's interior has a unique dark shadow, but it makes Sunshine more real, selfish and energetic. Hehe~ Even little Barty's crazy sincerity is heart-warming (he confesses that he helped Voldemort but does not regret it, his personal beliefs and love are fully revealed, and he also bluntly said that Lorna will kill her if she dares to turn albino)~ There is also the friendship between the four girls that makes people cry and laugh, Li There is no doubt about Li's bravery and charm, and the unique cuteness of Marlene and Mary. Seeing now, I believe that there must be such a world, where there are beautiful friendships that are briefly separated due to darkness but can definitely be reunited. The friendship between girls will never weaken. It is really touching~ I'm very glad that I found this story. I hope I won't be in a hurry and write more, so that everyone can have a bright future. Hehe, it must be beautiful. Bald noses will always fall. This battle will be long and winding. I believe in Lorna's charm. Hehe, she will have many believers, whether it is love or worship, regardless of gender. Hehe, it smells so good. I look forward to the follow-up [shy][shy][shy]

It's really, really beautiful. I feel like this is not only a fanfic, but also an in-depth interpretation of each character in the book! You can feel the soul of every character here including the supporting actors! And the writing is great! Highly recommended! ! !

I really like the heroine's character, and her portrayal of the characters in the original work is great! It's really easy to relate to Gray's story when I read it. The writing style is not exaggerated, but it feels unique and beautiful. However, the joy in the passage made me feel like I was living with them in Hogwarts. It's great!

Only after reading ten chapters did I feel that the story was particularly interesting. Before, I didn't feel the very delicate emotions. Then suddenly I felt that the plot had entered a good state. Whether it was sneaking into the house through the window in the afternoon and hitting the two teenagers, no matter what he was in the future, he would take risks as much as he wanted. Or maybe someone in the train was suddenly offended and helped out. Especially picturesque! The emotions are so delicate and bold, and I can feel these emerging in front of my eyes. I have read twenty chapters so far, and there are still many chapters that I have not read yet, if the author can guarantee this quality. I want to pursue the author for the rest of my life! Look, look, keep looking. I highly recommend everyone to read it, it's a good book :3

Preface: It's so sweet, especially in the later part, it's so sweet that it's so sweet to my heart that even an indifferent woman can't help but laugh after seeing it. (Afterwords need to be considered. Emotional love is greater than rational analysis. It is like a moment of blankness in the brain when the heart beats for the first time. It is also like swallowing delicious food when hungry. Happiness is poured into the lungs. Every breath is like cheering. The pain in the stomach coexists with the satisfaction of the taste buds. For the first time, I truly experience the feeling of Cupid's arrow hitting the heart.)

It's good to watch, it's really good to watch, and it's more three-dimensional than those brainless Shuangshuang Shuangshuang. You must know that many HP fanfics are written according to the original plot meticulously. The protagonist is like a marionette who has to accompany the protagonist group to follow the script. It's not that it doesn't look good, but it's all the same. But I can definitely say that this article is really written in my own style, neither deliberately sloppy nor too unclear. Especially when I saw Gray, I felt that the baby girl was like an exquisite black and white doll in the window, finally breaking the glass in front of her and running towards the gorgeous world outside.

It looks good, but why does the whole process end in 1v1? James is so lucky, he is very happy both in his previous life and in this life. I really want to watch the Slytherin allif line [crying]

NB, what I wrote is about growing up step by step. Everyone has a sunny side and a dark side. No one is perfect. The complexity of the characters highlights their reality, and it's like seeing the real them. I feel sorry for the heroine, but I understand her. The heroine is very powerful. She fought hard to find a third way between the two camps, and it was the victory of the third way. Is there emotion here? It is Sirius letting go, Remus's protection, James' enthusiasm, and Barty's retreat... Does it count as be? [Laughing and crying] [almost crying]

It's super, super good-looking. The main thing is that it contains James. There are very few articles about James [crying] [laughing] and his content is very, very good, without any glitches [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's great. I've read dozens of Harry Potter fanfics, and this one ranks among the best. It's a book with a great sense of humor. It's about people from the same generation. It doesn't have the same old plots found in other fanfics (it's really boring if you read too many of them). The heroine is also very lovable, but some of the jokes in it are a bit more modern and may make people a little bit uncomfortable.

It's really beautiful. I hope I can update more every day! ! ! The writing style is humorous and delicate, and all the emotional lines are smooth and natural. It is not abrupt at all and will not make people confused. I will always wisdom you! ! ! Author! ! !

The author is very good at describing the interactions between characters without deviating too much from the original novel. Even if some funny jokes are mixed in, they are not too abrupt and allow us to see the energetic group portraits and the most sincere emotions. What I hate most is that mixing in a lot of jokes for the sake of comedy will make me laugh out loud. The author has a good grasp of this degree. As expected, I have a good eye, and the writing will never hinder me in serious moments. The description of the inner conflicts and pain of the characters also makes me truly empathize with the characters. Tomatoes are like gold, and they are as delicious as those who have eaten shit. I hope the author will publish more good books in the future [Love]

I can say out loud that I cried while reading the book... Come to think of it, My Generation is truly a complete tragedy The emotions are very natural, and the heroine has a rare sobriety. Perhaps because she has been deeply immersed in darkness, she maintains unprecedented sobriety. The name Polaris is really suitable! Even I fell in love with this heartthrob! Praise Lorna! Praise to the author's wife!

It's so beautiful, so beautiful. I have never seen such a beautiful article. It's more about the interpretation of the characters. I feel that every character has its own charm. I especially like Rael. This book is really well written and his characters are vividly written.

The author's writing style is really good. The heroine Lorna is very sober and egoistic, and she is also very flirtatious. She tolerates everyone but does not belong to anyone. I haven't finished it yet, but I feel that it may be a bit tricky at the end, but the daily life of the Lion Court in the front is really sweet and interesting, and everyone is growing up. The male protagonist really likes Jamie who is hot and fiery. He plays straight and you are the only special one. He really loves it. Sirius, Rey and Lorna are also very good together. Who doesn't love the deer-dog sandwich! Strong recommendation, strong recommendation, please update the extra chapter soon. I also wish the author success for the third time and happiness every day! [Laughing][shy][blowing kiss]

It is undoubtedly a good book, and it is HP's favorite book among all the platforms so far. Feelings are like hot gold, but sometimes they are also like silent and cold moonlight. This book made me begin to understand many characters I don't like, like Wormtail, Bella, and those Slytherins who call themselves pure-blood supremacy. . . In this book, I saw a new perspective, or one that I had before but was unaware of. Give me a new, strange and shocking experience. The ending is well written. Of course, this is essentially a heart-throb article. But it made me feel for the first time that I can choose anyone. After all, the paranoia and stupidity did not completely block the original light. And this is more like a real story that happened in the real world. None of them are gods. They are people. It's the shock in my chest that really exists at this moment.

As a seven-year-old Tomato bookworm, I would say that this book is really good. It has humorous and joyful parts, but also sad parts. The writing style is also very good. I think there are many sentences that can be used as Peking Opera. And this book is one of the few books that I have taken crazy screenshots. I also took a lot of screenshots, and each chapter is considered detailed. If you read it carefully, you won't find it like other books where you jump to chapters crazily and read very fast. This book is a book that I read very slowly. I will even go back and read the plot again. Now that I see the relationship between the heroine and Rael in the previous life, it makes me cry. I keep crying and can't stop. You will almost never have an expressionless face when reading this book because you are either laughing or crying.

Nice! ! ! The thoughts, emotions, and growth of each character in the article are all described very well [Like] Throughout the entire Harry Potter novel, the conflict between Snape, James, and Sirius is revealed (no longer to give in to the heroine, but openly! [Like]) [Like] This is great [Like] [Like] This is the only fanfic I have ever read! ! ! The heroine also changed herself, completed herself, and sublimated her soul while getting along with them. It can be said that they redeem each other and change each other [top post]

It's so good. I can't help it. I will always support you, author. Don't abandon the article and don't stop updating. The author added plots that have nothing to do with the original work. It's very good. It's not boring. It's very touching. The characters do have OOC, but it feels like nothing. The first half This section made me laugh to death. I don't think it's a big deal if there are modern memes. It's not that bad. Why would anyone care about this and give it a low score? Overall, it's pretty good. The second half is the main story. There were some tears. It's really touching. The writing is good. I clicked in and finished it. It's super good.

I really can't do it anymore. What a wonderful article this is! Good looking! ! ! The minor private matters of the supporting characters are all written with great detail! I particularly like writing about the family relationship between Bella Sisi and her three sisters! Every character is portrayed very well! ! ! I don't know how to describe the writing style, God! ! ! After reading so many books, this is the only one I didn't feel uncomfortable reading. HP is like a heartthrob type. I even really like to read it, read it, read it, read it! ! ! It's so exciting that I can't bear to skip a chapter! ! ! This is my first book review that I didn't choose to use AI to generate. I really recommend it! ! ! Boss, I'm going to set off 800 firecrackers for you to cheer you up! ! ! 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨 🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨

The writing, characters, and plot are all perfect. The first half is light and funny, and the second half is a bit heavy, but it's okay. After all, I skipped most of the heavy parts. I actually like all the male guests, but I like James and Sirius the most. Sirius's emotional ending was too little, and I don't think he would be willing to let go. The love between two lives, falling in love at first sight, and finally letting go and consummating it, is too overwhelming. The last extra episode of All to IF felt too unreal, but like a broken dream. James, fate really favors him, and he can get whatever he wants. Although he is jealous of him and envies him, who would not prefer the sun. Such a person is rarely mentioned in the original work. As a reader who has only read a few Jamie fanfics, I will fall in love with him in the author's writing. In fact, I always think that the ending of the three of them together is the most perfect. Without each one, it feels like fate is missing a corner. After all, the time spent by the trio is the happiest in this article. It's hard to calm down. The extras and ending rarely describe the psychology of the heroine, but only describe the male characters. They each found their own position. Only James broke through. Did the heroine really not find Sirius? Obviously he is always the first! She, well, in short, I can't get over it! Let's go crazy and roll around, please ask the author to write a threesome story~

After reading it, the author wrote it very well, every character is very delicate, the heroine's baby is also very good, and there are some funny plots in the article, which is not so boring. Although it is all, it can be seen that the main male protagonist should be James. It can be said that James' love can always be obtained!