Hpi Became White Moonlight at Hogwarts

This book is very good, with a clear plot, especially the sentence "I seem to be raised by Potter, no matter what kind of Potter it is." This book is really good (personal opinion), but it is a bit regretful to be killed by Bellatrix. I hope I can return to the original generation. After all, this is one of the few novels I like to read, about taking James to play with the original generation [Thinking], Strongly Amway [Adore] [Adoration]

It's beautiful. Needless to say, it's all about the plot that I love. I love James so much now. Invincible and beautiful, I can only say it is a masterpiece. Tomato is lucky to have such a novel.

Love it! (Contains spoilers!) It's all random thoughts, saying what comes to mind: The timeline is clear, the explanations are complete, the logic is rigorous, and everyone's feelings and behaviors exist appropriately. In the early stage, James was clingy and sunny and loved to be coquettish, unruly Sirius, and Peter with low self-esteem, until James unswervingly traveled through time and started over, Riddle's money is the truth, dull Abu, and Sirius who suffered from the pain of his own generation. In the end, everyone is a stew of gloomy men. Petunia's memory really makes me cry. Will Petunia, who was once jealous of wizards and wanted to become a wizard, be glad that she is not a wizard because she can remember Noah? Are you glad that you can still keep some memories? Remus has always been a heart-wrenching character, a person who doesn't attract much attention, but the love he silently endures is also delicious. Remy being called a fat Scottish chicken is so cute! I really want to own one. The Weasleys are all well-cast! The difference between George and Fred is clearly set with great ingenuity. Bill is so exciting. Snape is too doting, Professor Snape, what is your bottom line? Mr. Cedric is so charming and worth having. There is also Noah's persistence in every life. Although amnesia and various pains torture Noah, but just like the Sorting Hat said, she has the courage to do it again. She is still the same Noah. Also the characters may have forgotten to mention that it doesn't mean I don't like them. (In addition, I want to watch the Lao Tang if line,,, on the fingers... I'm sorry in advance but I really want to watch it) At present, the child generation Riddle has not appeared yet. It seems that Charles may have met Noah first and then told Riddle.

It's very interesting to read, and the story is attractive. It's not a plot that's particularly ups and downs and sets up brain-burning foreshadowing, but it doesn't have a straight-forward sense of running down the story. Even if you can guess the subsequent development, the plot and description can easily capture people's hearts. The heroine is a little sun-type setting. I feel like the sunshine in May, between spring and summer, green plum blossoms, warm wind and long days. The heroine's character is not too hot and annoying, and is a rare warmth in the continuous plum rain. Not only the characters in the story love and cherish the heroine, but as a reader, I also love and cherish this May sunshine. (The above only represents my personal feelings. I don't like books that have too much foreshadowing, I don't have the patience, and I don't like books that are too white and brainless. This book is just right for me)

The writing is good, the setting is good, and the world view is good. Because the content I write often arouses my emotions, and then I either scream crazily on the bed or drop small pearls. All in all, it is very novel and very beautiful.

This king will give himself a five-star rating.

The author's writing style is very good and the characters are well portrayed. I really like the relationship between the parents. James is really the existence of Bai Yueguang. There is a little abuse in the middle but the daily life is very relaxed at the end. It is very sweet. I especially like Sandwich and the puppy. Come on! I want to watch the extra [blowing kiss][laughing]

Super pretty! This is the best-written James I have seen recently. It is a little different and does not feel too abrupt. The usually carefree and a bit arrogant person became careful and cautious because of Noah, and became obsessive and super charming. James and Noah should always be together. No matter what era it is, Noah without James is so heartbreaking, just like losing his own support. James is a father, a brother, a friend and a lover to Noah. The bond between them even makes me sigh when I see Harry. Certain emotions are continued between their father and son. Tom is also super emotional. Tom is like Noah's shadow, half of her body. To be honest, I think the three of them can live a good life because of Noah's chain. As long as Noah is good, they will be fine. There is also Sirius who is very handsome at all times, Remus who is sensitive, Lily who is like a sister, Gemini, and Tsai. . . . I hope to see more of their stories in the future. James and Tom's writing is so good at the moment that others can't get on the table at all hahahahaha

It looks so good! It looks so good! Awesome, high production and high quality, Wang's writing style is great! Noah in Dawang's novel is very cute, and the interactions between the characters are very loving. It's really good-looking and can be played! Also, don't you feel a pang in your conscience if you say the character is OOC? The fan you are reading doesn't know OOC. If you want to avoid OOC, then write it yourself! Or if you read the original article, the original article does not contain OOC, and you may not be able to write it yourself. Just read the article carefully, and you are still making irresponsible remarks here. If you read other articles, you may not be able to write something like the king. You have to be pure and honest.

This is the most unforgettable HP novel I have ever read. Every time after watching a little bit, I thought, I can't watch it anymore! ! ! If I keep reading, I won't be able to control my mind from thinking about this book at other times! With just a few touches, the King of Buttons can make me jump up and down and never forget this book! ! ! The author really writes everyone's feelings very well! I don't want the cute Noah to come to the end with the article, but I also want to see Noah's happy ending [I'm about to cry]. This book is really great and beautiful, my HP number one!

The plot is rich, a bit funny, the main plot is good, there are a lot of foreshadowings, and there are quite a lot of knives. I feel that the best written one is the pro era. There are a little less words about the ancestor era. I feel that the pro era is the best to watch. As for the child era, I was looking forward to it, but there are a few emotional lines in it. Most of them are plot lines, and Draco's emotional lines are really few. Every time I write about him, I feel like a Slytherin and grudge. The sense of separation in Llanffindor, ah, is quite disappointing, because the heroine has very little interaction with Slytherin, but is quite good with Gryffindor and other houses. As for the plot line, I feel good, and I also like the character of the heroine. James and the heroine feel that they are the best couple. James really loves him. To be honest, James alone can surpass everyone else. There are really few emotional lines among other people, but James has the most. The character descriptions are detailed. Well, even the character of Peter Pettigrew feels a bit different to me. There are very few emotional lines among other people. I don't know why, but James has the most interaction with the heroine anyway. But I still think that the emotional lines of other people are also good, but there are few and there are few chapters. The author of the main story did not describe it in too much detail. He simply summarized it and skipped it. I am a bit uncomfortable.

Very delicious, the plot is compact and attractive. The heroine has a very nice and gentle personality but is not unprincipled. The emotional scenes are very delicate and not obtrusive, and some small details are handled very well. My favorite is the part with Tom in the orphanage. The style is so novel and it is the first time I have seen it. It describes Tom's yandere, wet and ghostly nature very well. The writing is very good. It is no exaggeration to say that this is one of the most naturally written emotional scenes in HP fics I have ever seen. I like it very much and highly recommend it to everyone!

Nice! Noah and James are so sweet! Sirius also has a strong feeling, and Penny's character feels very cute.

It's so beautiful. James gave up everything for Noah. He will definitely find Noah in the long river of time. Tom's pursuit of eternal life is to see Noah again. His business map is all over the world and he has not moved to wait for Noah to come back. Peter betrayed and killed Bella in order to get close to the Death Eaters. Sirius blamed himself and spent year after year guarding the unnamed tomb and Pensieve. The presence of ancestors and relatives is too strong, so it really makes sense that they can't compete...

It smells so good. I eat it. Jamie is a boy, and Bill is a boy. I eat it hard.

WCWC is so good, I can't stand it. I stayed up late to watch it. It's so positive and beautiful. The heroine is so gentle and so good. Falling in love with her is as easy as breathing, but there are too few of them. Why are you letting me meet you now? I haven't seen enough. I can't find such an alternative. Who has such an alternative? I can't stand it. This is my favorite one I have ever seen. Hp, I didn't watch The Age of Pros before, but I watched this one and fell in love with it. I can't help it. It's such a gentle writing style, and it's not boring. It's very interesting. I just like to watch more ambiguous and romantic dramas. But I think Da Da is very good now. It's so good. I love it to death. The heroine is really vivid and three-dimensional. It's very good. Help, I really haven't seen enough.

This is one of my favorite HP fanfics. The author's writing style is very good, and the emotional lines are very delicate and not too sudden. The author is also very humorous and some of the metaphors are really funny. The author also added some personal settings, which wouldn't be unusual, but I personally feel it's pretty good. The author's portrayal of the characters will not completely whitewash anyone. After all, everyone has bad qualities and it is impossible for everyone to be the Virgin Mary. The storyline is also very good and logical, not as nonsensical as others. But what I like most is the author's heartfelt words written in large letters. Really, everyone pokes my XP, and the corner of my mouth never drops [Sending Hearts] Little Sun heroine VS White and Black Jamie/Tsundere Sirius/Shaggy Lupine/Paranoid Peter/Eccentric Severus/Golden Regulus/Ghost Tom/Red-haired Dog Weasley, etc. We look forward to everyone voting for the male guest of your choice to increase his interaction with the heroine. Our little cakes are very popular [Blow kiss]

It's very, very delicious. I read it in one sitting. The descriptions are really delicate and there is no sense of disconnection in each era. I really love... James really. I really enjoyed reading it. I couldn't stand it thousands of times. I love this book so much.

It's so cool, so good at writing, and it's so good that I took a look at it. Is it really the kind of writing that can be seen on this platform? But why is it still being serialized? Can the author make more updates? I will read it even if you open a new pit.

Oh my god, this is definitely the author with the best writing skills I have ever seen in the pro era [blowing kiss]

Family members who like to read HP articles should check it out! This article is very, very good to read. Really, I have read various types of HP, and I prefer to read HP articles that are more popular. How can I say this article? It is different from other articles. I personally think it is very good. It may be OOC in some parts, but! ! I even think that what the author wrote is very suitable for the situation at that time. The school bullying and Tang's blood theory, which were very objectionable to me in the original article, have made the conflicts less sharp in the author's writing. Even some other adaptations, such as communicators, etc., I think it is super good. I cried and laughed while reading this article, and some of the words and phrases in the article are very touching. Some of the adaptations make the characters look more flesh-and-blood. I personally feel that this HP article is a very rare article, and I like it very much! I stress again, very nice! Show them all to me! (Makes a high-pitched blast) Finally, I hope the author will update soon! ! ! The best is 800 chapters a day! I sincerely wish the author a better and better future!

This is simply the best HP fanfic I have ever seen! Love it! ! ! Time and time again, the heroine redeemed everyone! The Dark Lord has become a dark and damp capitalist, and all tragedies have never happened again. Neville and Harry have complete families, and no one has died. The author's writing is very good, and it is exactly the happy and complete magical world I imagined! The heroine is the sickly and charming Bai Yueguang, the little cousin of the Weasley family, no different from her biological sister James' image is created very well! Searching in time and space again and again, saving more than 10,000 times, falling asleep again and again! Just to see her again in her youthful form And Bill, Harry's if line, is also great!

I almost finished reading it in one go. The heroine is really the heartthrob of many people and she has a lot of fans (especially Jamie Riddleslep). , Tom turned out to be a financial bully in the end and laughed me to death) [lick screen][lick screen] In the early and middle stages, I was not in good health, but it was good to return to the descendants. In the middle and later stages, it was a bit cruel because the heroine would die in different timelines (I peed when I looked at my eyes at night). I feel that Zhan Li handled this line very well, and there were no butterflies in Harry. The heroine is in the parent generation. It also solved the knot between Lily and her sister Petunia (really very delicate and I really like it). Later, the aunt was nice to Harry and the cousin was still fat but treated Harry very normally (and made an ugly birthday cake). Time travel made up for a lot of regrets. I hope the heroine's mother can travel back to the real world and continue to live a happy life [Love]

It's so pretty, it makes me roll around on the bed

Noah is really a good baby, a firm, gentle and energetic baby. My sister can also be naive, but her childishness will dispel all your haze. No one dislikes warmth. My sister is gentle and delicate, and she never skimps on her kindness. It's natural for them to like their younger sister, and the author handles the details very well. King 666 King 666 King 666

After reading through the HP novels, this one is not embarrassing, brainless, or slutty. The male protagonists are really nice to the female protagonist, and the younger sister is also cute and lovable. Especially the opening scenes and Xiong Jing in the later stages are so fragrant [Adoration]

The text is finished. Four stars plus one for encouragement. The heroine is a heartthrob. She has a cute, gentle and cheerful personality and occasionally looks like a Gryffindor! There are a lot of single-arrow female protagonists, and the author is still writing if~ The main shortcoming is that the follow-up is a bit flat, and a little uninspiring, but I can still support it~

It's super beautiful, the writing is good, and the plot is also exciting. Many of the regrets in the original book are very satisfactory here. I don't like to write book reviews, but this book is really good. I highly recommend it.

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that there is no extra story about Riddle. It's so pitiful, Riddle [almost crying] I'm really popular with Riddle. It's a pity that there is no extra story about him. It's good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking.

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