When the Aura of Popular Female Heartthrob Disappears

The one I recommend is suspenseful love, but the text layout is not very good and the paragraphs are too dense. I suggest rectification. The heroine's character is a gentle water type with stable emotions. She was unintentionally bound to the system in the original world. She had a heartthrob aura and attracted high-quality male protagonists. However, those male protagonists quickly updated the system and left the heroine after the aura disappeared. They were also chasing their wives in the crematorium. In order to save the life of the heroine's mother, I quickly traveled through the small world. To be honest, the writing in the small world is pretty good, especially the Republic of China chapter. Loving the heroine does not affect the hero's career. But the style of writing is quite new and novice, and overall it seems to be going through the plot quickly and telling a story. There are a few details in the Republic of China that are not very good, and in order to increase the sparkle and memory of the male supporting characters, it feels like the presence of the male protagonist is weakened. Is the author a screenwriter? There are many descriptions of characters and scenes, but it is like writing a biography of a character, not like writing a fast-travel world. Although the Republic of China is fast-paced, the bond between the three male supporting actors and the female protagonist who have appeared now is really too little. It just happened to be offline after three chapters. It feels like the overall plot is fast-forwarding again⏩️ Or to put it bluntly, it's a bit like writing a graduation thesis outline. The story outline is blah blah blah, but actually reading the novel, the psychological activities after falling in love at first sight, the heartwarming events when two people get along in private, even if it is just the attitude of the heroine when seeing the heroine, the hero, and the male supporting character get along with each other from the mouth of a peripheral character is also very important, otherwise how to write about love.

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