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The writing is pretty good, and the protagonist has a lot of brains. I stayed up late to catch up on the latest chapter, and here are a few small comments: 1. The behind-the-scenes flow has always been difficult to control, and the room for performance is endless, but it is often difficult to write like this. 2. What attracts me most about this work is the similar temperament to "Lan Ke Qi Yuan", that is, the solemn and ethereal "fairy spirit" and the "chivalrous spirit" of exorcising demons. This kind of refreshing feeling is unique and pleasant. I hope the author can explore and consolidate it more and give full play to his strengths in this area. 3. The protagonist's strength in Roland Curry is also in a process of improvement. Although this book also limits the strength by unlocking props, it seems that the protagonist is already invincible and lacks opponents and a sense of urgency to improve his strength, which will reduce the appeal to readers. But this involves the core setting of this article - low martial arts, it is difficult for the protagonist to find an opponent, and the thought of this can't help but make people feel uninterested. 4. The protagonist wants to subdue the demon first and then eliminate the demon, but the monster inevitably hurts mortals. This seems to be a flaw, does not match the protagonist's image of a true fairy, and makes people feel a bit poisonous. In addition, the author also needs to consider whether the protagonist is a loser inside and a fairy outside, or whether he is the same inside and outside. After all, this is different from other behind-the-scenes characters. If it is the former, readers will feel very uncomfortable. But in the latter case, it is impossible to let the monster do evil. How to choose between these is indeed difficult to weigh. 5. The Mahayaksha section is too delayed, it should be shortened by at least half. If it is a follow-up update, this section will probably lose a lot of readers. I hope it can improve the rhythm and make the contradictions denser. 6. The current world view of North Fernando Road is not rich, even boring (because no one can beat the protagonist). I hope that more world views will be gradually revealed in the follow-up, and the best ones are dark and subversive. For example, there are gods and Buddhas in this world, and the protagonist's words come true. Maybe the author doesn't have to insist on a low-level martial arts setting, so that there can be more conflict points, and it is logical for the protagonist to want to improve his strength. 7. The main character should release the monster once or twice at most, otherwise it will be boring if you keep repeating this routine. How to replace this practice, the author needs to consider. But without demons, there would be no basic points of conflict. It would be difficult to arrange the plot. After all, the manifestation of the true immortal is the core interesting aspect. But this core conflict point is actually very fragile. After all, the author can release the demon if he wants to, which is subjective. 8. What are the advantages of Lanke? The author needs to think carefully about it. In addition, this book is a behind-the-scenes flow, which can also open up other more interesting points. I'm usually too lazy to type when reading a book, so I've been looking for this one on Tomato for a long time, so I commented on it.

Finished reading it in one sitting! So far, the logic is smooth and the characters are vivid. The protagonist has a brain and knows how to plan, and Shuangwen's mood improved hahaha. In the early stage, in order to get the end of the game, the protagonist sent flying yakshas to do evil, causing many innocent people and the officers and soldiers who came to catch the monsters to be injured or even beaten. I almost couldn't watch it anymore, thinking that the protagonist was careless about human life, treating people in this world as NPCs, and people who would do anything to achieve their goals. But the author's writing is good, and I liked the subject matter very much, so I endured and read another paragraph. Unexpectedly, the circle will come back soon. In order to make the identity of the god more real, the protagonist changes his vest and goes into battle. After "killing" Yaksha, a golden rain falls, which recovers the injured and resurrects the former common people. Miao Miao Miao! Later, in order to collect more faith, more vests should appear. I hope the theme will not change. To collect faith and incense, the core of the protagonist must be kind. Update soon! Come on come on! !

Seeing that the logic is still smooth and the writing is very good, I would like to give some suggestions to readers from the perspective of readers! It may be due to the current situation of the protagonist. In fact, it is still a bit impatient for the arrival of the true king and the appearance of the demon. From the perspective of onlookers, they may not doubt the connection between the true king and the demon. They may not doubt the power of the gods and demons, but they will doubt the true position of the gods and demons. After all, the ancients also had brains, so if possible, they can go to something similar to the current situation. " "The gods and demons are playing a big game of chess" to hint at the supporting characters. Of course, the author I mentioned may have also considered it, so I will stop here. Of course, the author also needs to keep his own thinking. After all, I am just a reader who doesn't know the outline, so I just want to talk about it. Now that I see it, I think it is well written. The writing is not too dramatic. The mount Goldfinger is also very ingenious and the character logic is smooth (∩▽∩)

This book is really good, but the main character is not too decisive, just let them die. You have to collect faith. Anyway, it doesn't matter if you direct or act, anything is fine. The most important thing is to be self-strong. You can be a villain or anything. Anyway, as long as everything is under my control. From the other side, this is a behind-the-scenes article.

It's pretty good in this type of novel, but it feels a bit too coincidental. Dead people are nothing, but it would be strange if demons were born every time but no dead people were born. Smart people would become suspicious. The ancients were just limited by their times, they were not stupid people.

Although the behind-the-scenes subject matter is relatively bad, the writing style is okay, just don't drag it out too much. After all, no one likes to read stinky and long novels like ordinary people. The emphasis in the fast food era is on fastness and pleasure.

I have read quite a few in the same genre, but this one is quite satisfactory. Although it has some poisonous points, it is still a masterpiece. The most important thing about pretending to be gods and ghosts is to reduce the dimensionality. You can't let the indigenous forces catch up with you or get close to you, let alone let the indigenous people expose the protagonist. This is very poisonous. For ideas, I suggest you read the early stage of Lan Ke Qi Yuan. The early stage of Lan Ke Qi Yuan is very good.

@LikeTheFoxofcilantro Five-star review, well, I saw a comment and I think it's quite right. It doesn't matter how many people die, as long as the righteous party resurrects the dead in the end. This is the real top level. As soon as the nectar is sprinkled on the willow branches, the bones of the thousands of miles of bare ground immediately glow with life, and the dead things are reborn [Like]

It's very interesting. The author should update it soon. You can also add other characters into it. It can't just be Buddhism and Taoism. You can add ghost Taoism (not the underworld kind), Confucianism, Taoism, etc., And the strength must be similar to that of Zhenjun and Zhenwu Emperor. All kinds of balance can be achieved. You can make a devil's cave in the human world, suitable for ghost Taoism practice. Other characters can also leave Taoist traditions and accept mortals as disciples. Then after entering the path of cultivating immortals, you can get extraterrestrial evil spirits and practice them later, and you can also create opportunities in secret realms. For example, a young fishing boy catches a young mythical beast, a girl encounters a loose immortal while collecting medicine and is accepted as a disciple, or accidentally eats a magical medicine and gets an opportunity, etc. The protagonist does not necessarily have to create and play a role to give them opportunities. In this way, wouldn't the battle between different paths be more exciting [laughing][laughing]

How shameless! I have read few books, but I think this one is really good. One of the shortcomings is that the god will come and resurrect all the people killed by Yaksha. Being able to heal the injuries is an absolute bonus, but resurrecting the dead is a bit poisonous. Although the protagonist killed himself, it is recommended not to resurrect. When there is an underworld, those who were killed by the protagonist will be given a job of ghost or something.

I feel like the writing was mediocre at the beginning, but it got better and better in the middle and later stages, and it's even, I hope there will be more. The plot writing is getting better and better, it's worth following! This type of male channel is much more enjoyable than female channel. Most female channels are worldly. The mysterious mystery and structure of this book gave me a new look. There is no vulgar plot in male channels where all the women fall in love with it. It is very annoying. It is best not to have a female protagonist and the male protagonist is beautiful alone. It seems that this is my favorite male novel so far. I like the male protagonist who is dedicated to his career the most. The man who works hard is the most handsome [Blow Kiss]

The writing is also pretty good. The writing and story are good, but the character of the protagonist is a bit unpleasant. It would be bad if he pretends to be a monster and hurts people's lives in order to get incense.

The novel is very good, but there are not many words. I want to read it but I can't help but read it. Only this kind of novel can be read. At least the thinking logic is clear and reasonable, and it makes people want to read it again. I can't read other types of novels. I can't even understand the basic common sense and thinking logic. I really like the author's novels. Not giving it full marks is not enough to express my excitement. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you. If you write at this level, you will definitely be able to do it. Thank you to the author for bringing you such a wonderful work. You must update it more frequently. The number of words in the whole book should not be too small. It must be enough to fill it up. There are not many good novels nowadays, and this one is even rarer. Everyone should cherish it. I wish the author better results in each section of this book, and I also wish the author's income will get better and better, so that he will have the motivation to present wonderful stories to readers. Come on, Ollie

Recently I have seen some high-quality works, with stylish writing and reasonable logic. I read the comment section and found that some people couldn't understand the progress of certain events. This can only mean that they have too little social experience and a narrow perspective. The author has rich social experience, and the characters in the article have reasonable motives and corresponding measures, and may have been severely beaten by society. I hope the author perseveres and if the quality remains online, he will have a chance to enter the tomato masterpiece echelon, come on!

The overall writing style is classy, ​​but it is a pity that the three golden chapters were not written well. Even so, it is a high-quality fairy grass among such articles in Tomato. I hope the author will persevere and write this book well. With a peaceful ending, it will surely become popular as word of mouth gradually increases.

Pretty good Although the plot has logical loopholes, it is still within the acceptable range. Then there is the common problem with the writing of the mastermind: whether the protagonist kills people or not. The author was obviously hesitant in the early stage whether to let the protagonist kill passers-by. After all, some readers said that not killing seemed petty, and how could one establish prestige by not killing passers-by; but if one did, some readers, like me, are morally obsessive and felt that innocent people should not be killed. So the author tried a few times, and then he was more of a chicken thief, killing him first and then helping to resurrect him. Later, he probably thought that the readers should not continue to struggle with these issues, so he changed the perspective and chose to let the indigenous people kill people, such as demons and cults, and then let his subordinates deal with the indigenous killings. This successfully allowed the readers to shift their perspective from the unanswerable proposition of "should the protagonist kill someone?" The current rhythm is that of Buddhism, Taoism and dynasties, which were very classic ten years ago. They restrain each other and develop each other. It is still relatively comfortable to read now. If the update is discontinued, one star will be deducted. Do you have any similar recommendations? Playing or creating something similar to a Chinese-style heaven, I wanted to watch some Chinese-style fantasy, but the ones I found were either original worldviews or Western fantasy, and there was nothing Chinese-style fantasy.

So far it seems to be really good, the rhythm is very tight, and some people in the comment section said that there are some imitations of this book, but this one is more to my liking, and the secondary characters are also very vivid. It is the kind of book that gets better and better the more you read it. As a refreshing novel, it is very good. One thing to note after reading so many chapters is that at the end, the author likes to make some short sentences and spread out the sentence patterns. Of course, doing so will make the article more powerful and passionate, but if almost every chapter is like this for a period of time, it will also destroy the coherence of the article.

So far, it doesn't seem to have too many poisonous points. Although there is a scene in the middle where ordinary people are killed as if they were chopping melons and watching vegetables for the sake of acting, which is a bit abstract, but it is okay that they come back to life in the end. I hope there won't be a female protagonist popping up out of nowhere in the end and forcefully cooperating with CP. After all, I no longer have any expectations for the emotional line in male videos. The brotherhood is better portrayed than the female protagonist.

This book is really good. At present, there is either insufficient traffic or insufficient push force, for a ten-year-old bookworm. It definitely doesn't look like it was written by a novice, this level can make a living even at the starting point. It should be at least eight points upward.

I would like to give you five stars first, and I would like to give some suggestions to the author. It's just that some of the things people say in the comments are not very nice, but please be sure to listen. Some of the suggestions are really good. Since the male protagonist is pretending to be a god, he should be more sophisticated. Think of the immortals in the 1986 version of Journey to the West and the immortals in Eight Immortals Crossing the Sea. If the author wants to get ideas, he can read the book Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio, come on, come on, come on! ! !

Very satisfied. The protagonist has clear rewards and punishments. There is no underworld or underworld Buddhism. I like it.

It's a good-looking, rare and well-written piece of writing, but it's not good when it comes to Nie Xiaoqian and Yan Chixia at the end. There's no originality from the author, and besides, it's still some very familiar and cliche stories.

The article is very new and very interesting. It's a good book.

I see that there are only a dozen chapters left, and so far there are no surprises, and the description is really in line with the psychology of ordinary people! The sense of immersion is super strong! The protagonist has a lively mentality. When watching the movie, I couldn't help but be shocked by the protagonist's novel script and ideas, which opened up my imagination. It can be said that if it doesn't collapse later and can fill in all the foreshadowing, it will be really nb! A super cool book! I just can't get enough! I have to wait for the serialization again QAQ

There are not too many poisonous points, and it has many similarities with "I Am an Immortal". I read another novel called "12 Spells and I Became an Immortal in the Late Ming Dynasty" which has a lot of poisonous points, but its rating is higher than yours, maybe because you haven't updated it enough.

It's well written, and it's relatively good among other books of the same type as Tomato [Eating Melon], but I don't know why not as many people read it as the other books [Thinking], please give it a try, author [Like]

The writing is good, but it's a pity that it's gone astray. Anyone who writes this kind of book will either write about Jackie Chan Aotian, or it's me who proves it, and I am the evil one. It creates panic while harvesting faith. Generally speaking, it's not bad.

Don't read the reviews in the early stage, keep reading, and you will find it more interesting as you go to the end. It is not the kind of templated cool article. The theme is very unique, with role-playing and simulation construction elements.

Just read Chapter 21. I feel like this book is quite good, and it shouldn't be given an eight rating. I think it's at least 9. It looks pretty good and supports a lot of updates. I should have finished reading it in a day or two. Update soon, anchor, anchor. Only by practicing your pen more can you write good works. Just think of it as training and gain experience for the next excellent work.

It has a very immersive feeling, and describes the hesitation and panic of an ordinary person traveling through time and space. Very creative. Lots of beautiful clothes and baby mounts.