In a Low-Martial World, I Play the True Immortal

I have finished reading all the current ones. Surprisingly, they are pretty good. Unfortunately, the previous title is still very poisonous and too few people died [eating melon] What the protagonist needs most is influence, not so-called belief. It's just that belief is better and easier to influence. If the protagonist becomes the emperor, it will definitely come faster and be unlocked faster. It is a full-level account, but it is blocked. What a talent. In this latest chapter, after experiencing so many things, no one died [eating melon], and there were even corpses that were ready to be buried because the evil spirits had lost their lives. Suddenly he opened his eyes, took a deep breath, and sat up. What is the use of the protagonist's faith? Why does he need incense? In essence, it is not to increase his influence with the world, so as to unlock the krypton gold max-level account. Playing a myth or something is just a better intervention, both good and bad, increasing the influence. Confirmed to be a nanny

The writing is pretty good, and the protagonist has a lot of brains. I stayed up late to catch up on the latest chapter, and here are a few small comments: 1. The behind-the-scenes flow has always been difficult to control, and the room for performance is endless, but it is often difficult to write like this. 2. What attracts me most about this work is the similar temperament to "Lan Ke Qi Yuan", that is, the solemn and ethereal "fairy spirit" and the "chivalrous spirit" of exorcising demons. This kind of refreshing feeling is unique and pleasant. I hope the author can explore and consolidate it more and give full play to his strengths in this area. 3. The protagonist's strength in Roland Curry is also in a process of improvement. Although this book also limits the strength by unlocking props, it seems that the protagonist is already invincible and lacks opponents and a sense of urgency to improve his strength, which will reduce the appeal to readers. But this involves the core setting of this article - low martial arts, it is difficult for the protagonist to find an opponent, and the thought of this can't help but make people feel uninterested. 4. The protagonist wants to subdue the demon first and then eliminate the demon, but the monster inevitably hurts mortals. This seems to be a flaw, does not match the protagonist's image of a true fairy, and makes people feel a bit poisonous. In addition, the author also needs to consider whether the protagonist is a loser inside and a fairy outside, or whether he is the same inside and outside. After all, this is different from other behind-the-scenes characters. If it is the former, readers will feel very uncomfortable. But in the latter case, it is impossible to let the monster do evil. How to choose between these is indeed difficult to weigh. 5. The Mahayaksha section is too delayed, it should be shortened by at least half. If it is a follow-up update, this section will probably lose a lot of readers. I hope it can improve the rhythm and make the contradictions denser. 6. The current world view of North Fernando Road is not rich, even boring (because no one can beat the protagonist). I hope that more world views will be gradually revealed in the follow-up, and the best ones are dark and subversive. For example, there are gods and Buddhas in this world, and the protagonist's words come true. Maybe the author doesn't have to insist on a low-level martial arts setting, so that there can be more conflict points, and it is logical for the protagonist to want to improve his strength. 7. The main character should release the monster once or twice at most, otherwise it will be boring if you keep repeating this routine. How to replace this practice, the author needs to consider. But without demons, there would be no basic points of conflict. It would be difficult to arrange the plot. After all, the manifestation of the true immortal is the core interesting aspect. But this core conflict point is actually very fragile. After all, the author can release the demon if he wants to, which is subjective. 8. What are the advantages of Lanke? The author needs to think carefully about it. In addition, this book is a behind-the-scenes flow, which can also open up other more interesting points. I'm usually too lazy to type when reading a book, so I've been looking for this one on Tomato for a long time, so I commented on it.

Finished reading it in one sitting! So far, the logic is smooth and the characters are vivid. The protagonist has a brain and knows how to plan, and Shuangwen's mood improved hahaha. In the early stage, in order to get the end of the game, the protagonist sent flying yakshas to do evil, causing many innocent people and the officers and soldiers who came to catch the monsters to be injured or even beaten. I almost couldn't watch it anymore, thinking that the protagonist was careless about human life, treating people in this world as NPCs, and people who would do anything to achieve their goals. But the author's writing is good, and I liked the subject matter very much, so I endured and read another paragraph. Unexpectedly, the circle will come back soon. In order to make the identity of the god more real, the protagonist changes his vest and goes into battle. After "killing" Yaksha, a golden rain falls, which recovers the injured and resurrects the former common people. Miao Miao Miao! Later, in order to collect more faith, more vests should appear. I hope the theme will not change. To collect faith and incense, the core of the protagonist must be kind. Update soon! Come on come on! !

Seeing that the logic is still smooth and the writing is very good, I would like to give some suggestions to readers from the perspective of readers! It may be due to the current situation of the protagonist. In fact, it is still a bit impatient for the arrival of the true king and the appearance of the demon. From the perspective of onlookers, they may not doubt the connection between the true king and the demon. They may not doubt the power of the gods and demons, but they will doubt the true position of the gods and demons. After all, the ancients also had brains, so if possible, they can go to something similar to the current situation. " "The gods and demons are playing a big game of chess" to hint at the supporting characters. Of course, the author I mentioned may have also considered it, so I will stop here. Of course, the author also needs to keep his own thinking. After all, I am just a reader who doesn't know the outline, so I just want to talk about it. Now that I see it, I think it is well written. The writing is not too dramatic. The mount Goldfinger is also very ingenious and the character logic is smooth (∩▽∩)

This book is really good, but the main character is not too decisive, just let them die. You have to collect faith. Anyway, it doesn't matter if you direct or act, anything is fine. The most important thing is to be self-strong. You can be a villain or anything. Anyway, as long as everything is under my control. From the other side, this is a behind-the-scenes article.

It's pretty good in this type of novel, but it feels a bit too coincidental. Dead people are nothing, but it would be strange if demons were born every time but no dead people were born. Smart people would become suspicious. The ancients were just limited by their times, they were not stupid people.

Although the behind-the-scenes subject matter is relatively bad, the writing style is okay, just don't drag it out too much. After all, no one likes to read stinky and long novels like ordinary people. The emphasis in the fast food era is on fastness and pleasure.

I have read quite a few in the same genre, but this one is quite satisfactory. Although it has some poisonous points, it is still a masterpiece. The most important thing about pretending to be gods and ghosts is to reduce the dimensionality. You can't let the indigenous forces catch up with you or get close to you, let alone let the indigenous people expose the protagonist. This is very poisonous. For ideas, I suggest you read the early stage of Lan Ke Qi Yuan. The early stage of Lan Ke Qi Yuan is very good.

@LikeTheFoxofcilantro Five-star review, well, I saw a comment and I think it's quite right. It doesn't matter how many people die, as long as the righteous party resurrects the dead in the end. This is the real top level. As soon as the nectar is sprinkled on the willow branches, the bones of the thousands of miles of bare ground immediately glow with life, and the dead things are reborn [Like]

It's very interesting. The author should update it soon. You can also add other characters into it. It can't just be Buddhism and Taoism. You can add ghost Taoism (not the underworld kind), Confucianism, Taoism, etc., And the strength must be similar to that of Zhenjun and Zhenwu Emperor. All kinds of balance can be achieved. You can make a devil's cave in the human world, suitable for ghost Taoism practice. Other characters can also leave Taoist traditions and accept mortals as disciples. Then after entering the path of cultivating immortals, you can get extraterrestrial evil spirits and practice them later, and you can also create opportunities in secret realms. For example, a young fishing boy catches a young mythical beast, a girl encounters a loose immortal while collecting medicine and is accepted as a disciple, or accidentally eats a magical medicine and gets an opportunity, etc. The protagonist does not necessarily have to create and play a role to give them opportunities. In this way, wouldn't the battle between different paths be more exciting [laughing][laughing]