HP: I Run a Bar in Knockturn Alley

Emm is indeed a dark story, I thought I was ready, but. . . If you came here to see Draco, you can leave now. It's really too bad. Draco is no longer the original Draco. Obscurus, who was trained as a house elf, has changed his appearance and other things, and his personality is definitely not the original one. If it is said to be the male protagonist, maybe I won't take this bite. I thought there should be some interactions from childhood or something, but in Chapter 26, thirteen years passed in a flash, and then there were people locked in cages, and ten-year-old children put together with a group of dementors and so on. Emm, if you want to say that the heroine is a pure evil, Selwyn who tricked her died happily, Moody also broke a leg, and then it was Malfoy's turn to torture other children for thirteen years and more. As for the female protagonist, the character design is quite interesting, but I came here because the male protagonist is pitiful (but I really didn't expect to be so pitiful), so I left a lightning protection post to warn future generations.

Watching the progress of Chapter 21, our heroine is a very unlucky little Muggle wizard who is struggling to survive in another world and do some black business without any friends... Abandoned…. I really can't bear to see Draco reduced to a person who has to live an ignoble existence under the hands of the heroine.

Very good killer black wizard heroine, cute and handsome. It's just a miserable baby that you have been hiding all the time. [Crying] Please increase your efforts on Xiaolong. This child-based husband is so cool, and the heroine is only about 40 [almost crying] Xiao Ai, we like mud. By the way, can Xiaolong's appearance be restored? Or do I like the golden-haired peacock (X Can little Barty be brought in to be brainwashed and used as a dog? (Tonic, can you abuse the heroine again? Okay, she has always been a baby who was forced to reach this point... Please hey, it's okay if something happens to the man. Don't abuse the heroine. It doesn't matter.

Don't think it's a good online novel. In fact, it's not strictly an online novel. It's obviously written as an if-line and OC-type. That's why some people say it's more like a biography. The difference between online articles and OC stories is that writing online articles is to serve readers and make readers enjoy reading it. OC stories are to serve the author and let the author have fun, because it is really cool and fun to create exclusive stories for OC. I have fun anyway. Hehehe, my OC is a pure saint, but I haven't written the story yet, only the setting.

It is in line with the character setting and plot direction. I hope you will continue to work hard. I hope those Holy Mothers and Fathers will not affect your creation. Come on💪 This setting is novel and logical, and it is a very fresh text.

It looks good, the heroine is a pure evil, Draco is really a bit pitiful [laughing and crying] and he must have Stockholm Syndrome [Thinking]

I stayed up all night and watched it. It was very interesting. The setting of the heroine really poked me. The heroine is not a good person. She is engaged in the underground business of the British wizarding world. She is the number one killer in Knockturn Alley, but she will not kill innocent people indiscriminately. She still retains a little bit of kindness and conscience. Her love with Draco is not passionate and twisted, like two poor people who were tricked by fate. PS. The heroine kidnapped Draco and turned him into an Obscurus, and his appearance also changed, in order to take revenge on Lucius. If you don't like it, be careful [laughing]

Although the CP of the whole book is very weird, maybe I am a little crazy. (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*I don't think it looks very good! The emotions in the article are very delicate and detailed. Although from a normal person's point of view, this cp should not exist, and the victim should not like the perpetrator. But I choose to accept it. There is both cruelty and sweetness in the article｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡The two protagonists are entangled, doubtful, and finally entangled with each other. May they be happy in the end. [Sending Hearts]

Training Sirius to escape, soaking chocolate powder in the Azkaban thug's cabin, being the director of the orphanage, describing the future to Barty Crouch, being influenced by his father to think about being watched and deciding not to see Draco (by the way, I'm curious why the narrator still calls him Draco) all left a deep impression on me! The twists are smooth, the plot is profound, and the characters are tense. Good. I look forward to what follows.

Very good-looking (♥∀♥), first time seeing this kind of character in HP

Although the heroine did do a lot of bad things and is not a good person, the story is indeed very exciting. It's different from the HP novels I've seen in the past. There's basically no plot, and Draco has absolutely nothing to do with Draco in the original book, but that doesn't stop me from thinking that this book is actually pretty good.

It's so beautiful. It's been a long time since I found a book that suits me so well [Like][Like][Like]

This is a great book, a story really created entirely by the author.

Jie Jie Jie, it's a bit hard to accept, but I still feel it, Jie Jie Jie Jie. . . . .

It's good-looking, with a novel perspective, the story is very real, the writing style is very good, and it feels immersive. I'm looking forward to the following plots.

It was tied at once, so cool!

Very nice, recommended.

How should I put it, I think the heroine is quite touching, and the relationship with Draco is full of taboo and tension. Anyway, I think the emotional changes of most of the characters are great.

So pretty, not enough

Super beautiful, looking forward to the follow-up

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking