I Made up the Ming Dynasty Cultivation, Chongzhen Hualong Town Jiuyou

The story is very good. This idea is really attractive. The only shortcoming is that it talks too much and is too wordy. Is it like the author wants readers to understand clearly and deeply? Or is it just too careful in choosing words and sentences? Every piece of information is cumbersome and makes reading very tiring. Often a long paragraph can be described in simple and direct words, but it is explained in a convoluted way. I don't know if the author wants to use this way to describe the government as being very official and formal, but this process makes people uncomfortable to read. Generally speaking, it's still very good-looking. Good luck, author👏

It's good to read. This kind of refining falsehoods into reality is more real and interesting than some powerful resurrections. Either Buddhism or Taoism people are resurrected at every turn, or it's too short. Only if you read it in one breath will you gain emotional depth. It's too short, and you will forget it as you read it. A short read will lower your evaluation of him in your heart.

It is undeniable that this book definitely uses AI for expansion, but the intentions of this book are very good. The disadvantage is that it uses AI after all, so it is tiring to read. It is suitable for accumulating a large number of chapters to read at once. It will be very tedious to follow up every day. Finally, the above is only my subjective opinion.

It's a pretty good behind-the-scenes story, and the events in the opening chapter are well introduced. It's a bit different from the regular fake-come-true stories, and it also played a certain role in shaping the image of the protagonist. At least it didn't make me feel heartbroken by the protagonist's actions like some other behind-the-scenes stories. In addition, I would like to give two suggestions to the author. One is to reduce descriptive descriptions. For example, the chapter describing the underground palace murals is too long. At best, it is a detailed description, but at worst, it is a meaningless pile of writing. It is completely unnecessary. The second is to increase the number of paragraphs. Although I personally don't like paragraphs and even some novels are more exaggerated, with half a sentence and a paragraph, which makes me physically disgusted when I read it. However, shorter paragraphs are indeed an overall trend in online articles. After all, the threshold for reading online articles is very low. Many people are not willing to use their brains to read (including myself, most of the time I just read it for fun), and the fewer words in each paragraph can indeed effectively reduce the reading pressure.

The subject matter is very good, the imagination is great, and there are no big holes in the logic. It would still be a masterpiece without AI expansion. As a book reader, there are so many "water words" and repeated adjectives and descriptions that I am bored to death. Secondly, regarding the system, I have an idea. The consciousness of the world wants to increase the dimension. However, since the initial development was purely technological, it is now difficult to modify the basic foundation and it is difficult to increase the dimension. So I learned from other worlds to finalize the world line, set the protagonist as the son of the world, and granted the golden hand as it should be. The finger is also a reality editor. Although the development of the world is purely technological, there is no restriction on the cheat finger, so it doesn't matter if it is outrageous. Then, based on the world line where the protagonist, the son of the world, walks, use the cheat to write the world on the pure technological side bit by bit into a high-magic world, and then successfully increase the dimension.

The writing is very good, but the subject matter is very dangerous. I hope it won't be as confusing as the main god's road. The author must remember not to involve politics and falsify history. Now Chongzhen's statement has a hypothesis, so it has not touched on sensitive topics. There will be additional historical information later, so be careful.

It's okay, the plot is not brainless, but the words are so dense that it gives me a headache to read.

It's pretty good in both the spiritual recovery and the behind-the-scenes flow. The writing style is not just a piece of chatty writing. The plot and description are also relatively good. Apart from a lot of ellipses that forcefully show off in the writing, there aren't any major flaws.

I think this book is well written. The author integrates spiritual practice into science and is very realistic and logical. I think this is a highlight of this book, but it is also a shortcoming. As of the latest chapter, there are many descriptions in the whole book that are official explorations into the early stages of spiritual recovery. The role of the pig's feet is weakened, and there is a lack of sense of substitution. The story pace is very slow, which is not suitable for a fast-paced platform like 🍅.

Five stars Very good, a novel with excellent logic. It may use AI expansion, but it is well meshed and makes the plot seem logically tight. At present, it seems that we are going to take the path of inverting the history of mythology, although I have not seen any completion of this genre.

It's pretty good to watch (and listen to). ①A bit like AI? ②The author likes long paragraphs? ③Is it really a bit long-winded?

The subject matter is quite good, it is how to explain the mysterious power of the world and how China was stolen by the Manchus.

Update quickly. With all due respect, there is really no need to read the review that took less than half an hour to read. It has little reference value. Readers who comment for more than two hours are the real Shennong

Unlike other novels, the plot is advanced through character creation, dialogue and other methods. This novel doesn't have much description, it's basically all about design, describing something by unfolding the setting. Quite to my liking

There are no big problems with the content, logic, and writing overall. The subject matter and imagination are well received, and the logic is very smooth. However, the protagonist's arrogant attitude in the game world and some plot settings made me uncomfortable. In addition, it is too complicated (read the comments that it was expanded with AI). It is so complicated that it makes people tired to watch, and it makes people feel that the plot is moving too slowly.

It's good-looking. It's always behind the scenes. There's no poison. It's okay to write less about the data and be a little more vague. After all, it's not easy to calculate. Come on, author. The only drawback is that there are too few updates. I hope there will be two updates every day. Woohoo. It's getting more and more watery. It's estimated that it will take 300 chapters before the spiritual energy can be revived and I can start practicing. After saving for two months, there is still no progress in spiritual recovery.

The subject matter is good, but the AI ​​expansion is not segmented and makes it uncomfortable to read.

Apart from being very verbose, it is a detailed novel about how to revive spiritual energy.

This is the best article that I have read so far that makes false stories come true and makes up the era of spiritual energy resurgence. The verification of historical authenticity is in all aspects. The author has written more richly than his predecessors, but it would be better if the progress was slower. The protagonist has nothing major. It is more normal to excavate archaeological things and live broadcast for a year and a half.

Great book, from a learning perspective, about how to instill opinions in the masses by manipulating the fishing boat of society. People who are interested in studying journalism and joining the public relations/maritime industry can read more of this book. Many of the protagonists can be reproduced in today's online behaviors to manipulate online fishing boats and change the orientation of online speech (from a non-normative perspective)

It's very interesting to watch. I like this way of transforming history without demons into demonic ones. Moreover, the author has a good background in history. The plot progresses step by step and doesn't have a huge span like some others. The protagonist is very smart.

This book is written very carefully. Everything tends to be reasonable. Unlike other novels of the same type. That's called roughness. Write it down slowly and polish it carefully. You should write at least 1,000 pieces.

It's so good that I can't stop reading. There are a few chapters.

Full marks, this book in this category is the best one I've read so far in Tomato!

It's okay. Updates are slow because the author is working. At first, the paragraphs were not very long, and the impression was not good. Later, sometimes the plot was repeated. Although it could express more strongly, it was a bit boring.

I just finished reading this story today. It is quite good. Although some parts have been expanded by AI and it seems very watery, it is this strict logic that makes it more realistic. The intertwining of truth and emotion echoes in history, which is beautiful to watch

Just reading the first few chapters, you can see the author's skills from the fragments and text. The plot and character settings are very reasonable. It's also a more interesting extraordinary system, with a nice behind-the-scenes flow➕the flow of lies coming true.

Yes, yes, it is difficult to write a shocking article that pays attention to logic and details. Is the protagonist's strength too much? It's true that there's such a big fuss online and only tens of thousands of dollars is needed

There is a section in the middle that is quite boring, but the flaws do not hide the flaws and the overall quality is very good. I don't know what will happen when the network is activated later. The author must not be a eunuch. If you don't update this writing style and setting, where can I find meal replacements? Of course, work and rest need to be balanced. Ten updates a day is not too much! The style of the back part is different from that of the front part, and it's very watery. Others are half watery, but you mix a little plot into the water.

Not bad, from shallow to deep, very beautiful. Awesome, foreshadowing is good, but too much foreshadowing is bad.