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Okay, okay, it looks good. Please update it soon because I feel so strong. Now when I take my brain back and look at it, I feel like the problem is huge.

It's a very rare subject in the monthly calendar circle. I think it looks very good at the moment. My suggestion is to add double quotes to the dialogues of the characters, otherwise it will be difficult to read.

To be honest, I don't really like watching The Ancient Ones Awakening the Divine Equipment. Everyone comes to watch The Ancient Ones' adventures when they see Bus Sinner. I want to see the shock that the ancients felt when they saw those technologies and powers that were as powerful as gods. As well as the philosophical thoughts that everyone on the bus felt during the process of unraveling the heart, readers will feel happy when they are brought in. After all, it is one of the bus who is brought in, and when the perspective is turned to the ancients who awakened the divine equipment, there will be a feeling of seeing things they don't want to see, and feeling that what they want to see is occupied. Author, can you add the original Don Quixote? I like Don Quixote the most. Let me tell you what the readers want to see (probably right). Most readers bring themselves to the [city] side (probably). Most readers should want the ancients to see the technology and power that is comparable to the gods. When the ancients saw these emotions, they brought in the [urban] readers. There will be some sense of superiority. The author can write about the dark side of [city], some ancient people's views on the dark side of [city], and the most important bus party's adventure, focusing on describing some of the ancient people's insights when they saw the important moments of bus adventure. The direct love-hate relationship between Heathcliff and Catherine, the despair in the face of the wild hunting evil army, and Linton's crazy love for Catherine. Or Captain Ahab's crazy appearance and words when he awakens his divine equipment. At this time, the evaluation and insights of the ancients are very important. You can also write about the ancients who were still confused about Ishmael and getting a bunch of certificates, and were finally taken on board by Ahab. Saw Ahab being swallowed by a whale. In order to explore the belly of the whale, he sacrificed the crew without mercy, and the words he said to Ishmarie at the last moment, which were the words of the first mate under the captain, as well as the collision of dreams between Don Quixote and Little Don, the suffering of the Blood Demon and the betrayal of Old Tang. The comments or insights of these ancients must be added. The author can also add characters from the original work, which many people like to see. For example, the original work Baoyu saw Baoyu Baoyu, the original Don Quixote saw the story of Xiao Tang and Old Tang, and finally added a little bit of the original work to see the changes of the people in Bashi. It's simply perfect. I guarantee that many people will like to read it. After all, I have read this kind of novel so much that I know what the readers want to read. [Probably] [Okay, I admit these are what I want to see. Author, please write. Qiuli Paste

I think it's ok, but I have a few suggestions Write corresponding characters and corresponding plots. For example, for Gregor, don't write about China casually. When writing about Honglu, don't write about foreign countries. Only write the most core ones. In fact, the personality plot can be abbreviated. Readers already know what the plot is, and just write about the feelings of the ancients after reading it. The above can reduce the number of words that are not very necessary. Daozi can be saved, but the original plot can be shown first and the reaction of the ancients can be written to save Daozi. But it's okay not to save it. The death of the character reveals the main theme of the plot to a certain extent, plays a role of sublimation, and conforms to the theme of "watching movies". Moreover, only the plot of the bus is shown here. If the bus's knife is saved here, what about the knives before the bus (actually there are some, such as Enoch and Angelica)? Write a special article? So why not start with Lobotopia in the first place? The above are some of my personal opinions, which may not be accurate. Please bear with me.

It's so beautiful. I really want every author to see the ending of their characters, and also think about their deep thoughts on the changes and meanings of their characters on the prison bus, and how Confucius saw himself and his disciples in the city.

The monthly plan is obviously very suitable for inventory, but the inventory article is like a rare treasure

I hope the author can minimize words that should not appear and affect the reader's perception, as well as unnecessary or repetitive content as little as possible, otherwise these may become the poisonous points of this book. Overall, it's good, so I hope the author can make this novel better and better.

Advantages: It's an okay read, interspersed with comments from some famous people. I can still write more now, so it's a good monthly article. Disadvantages: Some of the bad stuff (Zhang Liaogeng) is terrible, and updates are extremely slow, but apart from the above, it can still be played a lot. When can we fast forward to the plot behind Heathcliff?

It's very beautiful. I don't know what will happen next, especially when I see Confucius seeing himself in another world [laughing evilly]

When I think of my ancestors seeing Yuri beheaded, I can't help but hum [laughing evilly]

A very new subject matter (for Yueji) is this little article about watching movies😋 But one problem I have to admit is that the first three chapters of the Bus server were too bland. It can be said that if I was not a fan of Yueji Crystal when the server was launched, I would not have been able to watch it (although there are also reasons why the server was not Chineseized and I could only chew it hard). Even the performance was far inferior to that after the fourth chapter. The most obvious thing is: everyone was baking cold noodles at the end. Mili's song is nice, the boss battle is interesting, and other settings are introduced. Very few people praise Demian's rescue at the end as the highlight (I think Chunchun is Deus ex machina). This problem is the same in the novel, or even amplified. After all, the monthly server is released in three chapters at a time, and the novel depends on the author to complete each chapter. But it's not unsolvable. The main plot of the first three chapters should be sped up appropriately. The extra spaces can be filled in with personality plots or abnormality analysis, worldview introduction, etc.

It is a good novel among similar novels, but I feel that too many comments from ancient people have caused the progress of the main plot to be too slow. For Bus, Chapter 1.2 Can only be an appetizer, and the explosive point has not yet come. I feel that it will be interesting to see the author's reaction to the magical transformation of the characters in the future.

It looks great, but updating it is like squeezing out toothpaste. It's a bit too slow to write the highlights at this pace. I feel like the plot of the bus is about to begin in Chapter 4. Also, try to write the main plot first, and then write the main plot clearly before rewriting the personal plot, otherwise the overall plot will appear to be fragmented. If the ancients couldn't even understand it, let alone give an evaluation.

Hao Kan, in the book of thousands of moon plans, it can also be called fine chaff.

Author, please update quickly, otherwise, otherwise, otherwise, otherwise, I'm going to kneel down and beg you [crying]

It looks good, I want to watch it again! Ahhhhhhhhhh! Want! I want to see the Master, see the Master!

Let's take a look at what we did before? How come buses are associated with ancient times? I eat it if it tastes good.

Monthly calculation's unique traffic lock [laughter]

Come on, you are the only horoscope book in my bookshelf. In other monthly plan books, the starting color is the same, or when you enter Company L and become a Ares employee [face covering], there are also a lot of YY stuff. If you really enter the city without a system, you will be killed by a rat knife on the first day. As for the other natives in the city who are of color, think carefully about whether they have worked hard enough.

It's pretty good, just hurry up and write it. I only finished the second chapter when I reached 80 chapters.

The author is extremely prolific, sometimes even updating five times a day. And the writing style is also very good, unlike some novels that don't even have punctuation marks and are written in kindergarten style. The writing is very good, but the pace is too slow. It takes 100 chapters to get to the second chapter of the gambling with the golden branch.

It's quite interesting, but updates are a bit slow and some of the jokes are a bit boring. By the way, will there be any reaction to Mili's music at the end of each chapter? Expect

Okay, well written

The first time I saw Yueji Tonggu

There are very few people who write monthly calculations, and there are even fewer people who write inventory. Let's give some urban shock to some country bumpkins.

Come on! By the way, something suddenly occurred to me. It seemed like this year's April Fool's Day, at the beginning of that chapter?

Look, I want to know the expressions of the ancestors when they saw the immortals [laughing]

I want to see Siegfried kill 46.5 Seconds and wear 12 idiots

It's very interesting, and the original author even reacted to the characters he wrote.

I thought the next one would be FGO, but I didn't expect it to be a prison bus. This one must be protected.