I'm Selling Spiritual Roots Live! Immortal Emperors! Start Brushing!

I basically don't write reviews, but I still want to write something after reading it. The book is a good book, and you can see the growth of the author. From the beginning, it was all watery, and he couldn't grasp the rhythm, but later the rhythm became mature, and he even became more proficient in chapters (just kidding). Of course, there are reasons for the low rating. I can think of only four points. First, the author may have just started writing, and his early writing was indeed not that good. Second, the writing in the big dye vat of tomatoes is so profound that you may not be able to understand it without using your brain. However, looking at the author's introduction and the title of the book, you can't tell that this is a novel that requires using your brain. When I first read it, I thought it was just a simple novel for beginners, but it is not. Third, the title synopsis of the book does not match the actual content. It is said to be a live broadcast, but in fact it only has the shadow of a live broadcast in the beginning. The follow-up basically has nothing to do with the live broadcast, including the female protagonist making a nest at the beginning, the label of multiple female protagonists, etc. It is undeniable that the author's plot and writing are very good in the follow-up, but it is a fact that the product is not right, so there is nothing wrong with low scores from readers who were tricked into it. Fourth, it's a eunuch, but it's not quite an eunuch. At least the author has released the outline in the last three or four chapters, which can be considered a sloppy ending. In fact, it is understandable. The low rating, few readers, and even few comments in the text make it really difficult for a passionate author who has just entered the industry to persevere. According to the author's outline, if the book is truly completed, it will probably have to be five million words. Now that I've talked about the reasons for the low score, let's talk about my thoughts after actually reading this novel. This is a good book, if it had not been supervised, if the title of the book was more in line with the content of the novel, if someone could have given the author these suggestions at the time... Rather than talking about the live broadcast system reflected in the introduction of the book title, it is better to say that it is a book that starts from live broadcast and then turns to cultivating immortals, with occasional narration about the battles of wits and courage in immortality. Leaving aside the watery live broadcast plots in the early stage, the plots in the middle and later stages are really well written, and the characters in the book are all flesh and blood, including the design of some storylines and the description of some strategic battles, which are very good, although there are still some unreasonable things, at least for a novice author, it is good. It's a pity that the author used multiple female protagonists to create a nest, but in the end, he wrote a million-word eunuch. There were many so-called seedlings in the harem, but none of them had to eat. The author even used the protagonist's wife to create a nest at the beginning, but in the end, there were a million eunuchs. After rebirth, the serious boy only saw his wife once? ? ? Do you even have to pretend that you don't know each other? Okay, I don't know what to complain about. I can only say that the author has indeed stepped on many readers' faults, but the author's plot writing is really good. I hope the author will work harder on the next book.

Like a novice writing a book, I give four stars and hope to make progress in the future. The title is "Selling Spiritual Roots". Later, you can develop lower, middle, upper, extreme, god... Etc. To sell it. You can also write about the subsequent recovery of the Blue Star, or the changes in the Blue Star after rebirth.

When I saw Chapter 200, I couldn't help but read on. The author described the details very well, but the end of each stage was too vague. The first chapter was about the fight between urban families, and the next chapter was about fighting among immortals. It was too uncomfortable to watch. There is a lack of foreshadowing for the characters. The important characters appear first and then complete the settings. At first, I thought they were supporting characters, but in the end, they were suddenly written around this character. If you read the chapters separately, I think it is very well written, and I look forward to the author's subsequent works (this is my first time writing a review, so please forgive me for being clumsy).

It's good to watch, support it, update it quickly, don't listen to the nonsense of bad reviews, follow your own pace, come on, it may be a bit difficult to write with multiple female protagonists, and the brainless harem is different from the previous one, write it well, come on, come on

Nowadays, it's not easy to get me to read a book from the beginning. This book is good. The start is simple, direct without ink, and it is imaginative and close to life. The live broadcast is easy to imagine. The key is that the description is not stagnant and smooth, just like those people shouting "Mai" in the article. It does rhyme and is smooth. Recommended for fun people. Happy people. You can come and take a look.

After watching it, the early live broadcast was quite 1 star, but after the mid-term time travel started, it was very exciting and I gave it 5 stars. The story setting and logic are clear and the suspense is far higher than the tomato ranking. It is very good until the end of the game, but the three chapters of the ending are too hasty. The author clearly has a clear outline of the story line, but I don't know why the ending was rushed. The final outline explains the completeness of the story. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Like]

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but the pace may be a little slow. But more than 5.7 Points

It's not a pornographic game. The plot is indeed pretty good. I just don't understand why it's only 5.7. It's rare that I can read a book for an entire afternoon without playing games. It's okay.

Just be less self-pleasant

There will be a lot of fighting scenes later on, so I can focus on the live broadcast.

Not bad, the anchor's sentences rhyme and are not brainless. The most important thing is that the subject matter is novel.

Okay, okay, the rhythm is well controlled, and the subject matter is novel enough.

It's pretty good, you can take a look

The content is very attractive

Good-looking, love watching, very funny

Not bad and worth recommending

What is written on the back?

Fascinating, can't stop

Author It's been half a month since you updated this. I don't even remember what you said earlier. Can you get back to selling goods quickly?

It's pretty good, I don't know why it's only 5.7

It's not bad, but it's a bit slow to get to the main point at the beginning. It's about 10 chapters or so. Once you get through the first part, it's almost there. But the author seems to have just written it and is slowly getting into the mood.

It's so funny. The effect of this live broadcast is so much better than other novels. Why is the score so low? I've read Chapter 15. This novel can definitely get a score of 9.5. Is it because I didn't write it later?

It's very interesting and well written. After reading Chapter 8, I finally couldn't help but comment with my excited heart. Aren't you living in the sea? There is so much water

Come on! I don't know why the rating is so low, but don't give up! Baby

It's pretty funny so far.

Better-looking in urban literature

Xinyi is so funny and stunned

It's really good. Come on, author. Your book shouldn't have such a low rating.

This kind of funny novel is okay

Quite funny, worth watching