Delta Force: I Became a God by Scavenging in the Delta

You can watch it, it's pretty good. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. It is said at the beginning that the protagonist has a girlfriend, but it is not mentioned in the middle. Why did you write it? If the protagonist is in a vegetative state in reality, wouldn't your boyfriend check it out? 2. There are too many typos and wrong sentences. 3. There are too many plots for the female supporting character, which is a bit annoying to watch, and the plot progress is also a bit slow. 4. Some plots can be more rigorous. The protagonist's roommates are dead. Why is the female supporting character still alive? It is better to write it to death (conventional dam). A minion has only 7 drops of blood or some super hero machine. It is better to just die and try again. 5. Some recurring data can be omitted. When I read it, I skipped a long list of data. Some important numerical control data and changed data can be written, and the data can be condensed. 6. If you don't know how to write, don't write the emotional drama. It's fine without a heroine. Summary: Overall, it's pretty good. Some mistakes are acceptable. It's a pitfall, but the word count is a bit short. Please update it soon.

Okay, you have your own ideas. The Asara here is different from those past delta novels, a little darker. But I do think this is more true. It has a bit of Black Star flavor. The protagonist is the moderator who was created. They are at the bottom of the delta world and don't regard them as human beings. It's just a tool to gain profit.

The first part was well written, but the second part is where you write the emotional drama.

It's pretty cool, mainly because everything in the delta has an effect. I'm curious if other items work.

The protagonist has a bit of Down syndrome

Although it's a bit naive, the world view design is pretty good, you can take a look.

Another great book.

It has its own outline and the main line is pretty good.

Nice book, very nice,

I love reading this book