Rising from the Common Folk in Douluo Dalu

I just read two chapters and I have some suggestions for the author. First, the protagonist's mother should be changed to have no soul power. The martial soul is a sickle, and there is also level 1 soul power. Among the farmers in the small village, it is a matter of honoring the ancestors. Marrying the protagonist's father, who has no soul power, is basically Impossible, most civilians have no soul power, and 99% of those with soul power are at level 1 to 2. If the protagonist's mother had no other children with soul power in her awakening, the work-study student would definitely have given it to her. She would have reached level 10 in half her life. I feel like I'm almost at level 10 when I'm a teenager, and at most I'm stuck at the soul master level, unable to break through level 20 in my life. In the original book, the graduation requirement for junior college is to obtain the first soul ring, and the junior soul master college is a 6-year system, because this kind of junior college basically has children with innate soul power of levels 1 to 3. The set number of years must be 6 years to reach level 10. Even if it is later, it will be more than 1 or 2 years, and you can almost reach level 10 around the age of 15. I read the reply in your comment about how the sickle has not been around for a long time, so I will post below what Su Yuntao said in the original work. The second is the problem of paragraphing. Some paragraphs are too long, and some sentences are cut to the next paragraph before they are finished, which is a bit uncomfortable to read @lonely traveler

What kind of experience is it like to come to Douluo Continent from the perspective of a poor ordinary person? It is closer to the current situation of our struggle in real life. In a society where we are all cattle and horses, we are all people with dreams. We are looking forward to the final heights he can reach with the dreams of most of us ordinary people. Come on, author, come on!

Why can't Zhou, who is over 30 levels, defeat a hundred-year-old spirit beast? Is his purple spirit ring fake?

Novels are a breath of fresh air in the literary world

This kind of Douluo literature is really rare. No matter what, support it first.

The writing is good, and it's pretty good among Douluo fans.

It's good to see Douluo Continent from the perspective of the people at the bottom, and the novel is still worth reading.

Not bad, much better than others

Come on, the author writes very well, come on

Very nice look.