Rebirth**********

I have just written a novel, so I am not sure what readers will like. For this type of novel, readers may want to see a male protagonist who plays with emotions between the female protagonists. At that time, I was portraying an ordinary male protagonist who only dares to gain emotional rewards by giving emotionally. The data of this book can show that it is indeed as the baby in the comment area said that the male protagonist is not lovable in Tomato. I also have the search traffic and can't bear the urging of several babies to continue writing. I thought it would be good if I could finish the book. The process of writing is to try out poisons, read feedback from readers, and avoid poisonous points. In the further process, from the initial reading of 0.3 Of 100,000 words to the current three, from the first one or two yuan a day to the current ten yuan, I always feel that I understand something, but it is still not meaningful. Maybe you really need to write for one, two, or three years to find the feeling, to think about how to create a character that readers will like, and to create a plot that readers will like. Finally, I would like to sincerely thank the babies who have been following the update and all the babies who took the time to read my work [Thoughts]

I only read the first few chapters, but what I saw was that a man suddenly came out and wanted to have sex with the protagonist. The male protagonist has no memory, so it can be understood, but the reader also has no memory and can't understand what happened in the past life. There is an effect but not a cause. The writing is really good, but the details can be polished. I have touched on the past life in a few strokes. The key point of the rebirth story is not captured. The male and female protagonists have strong fighting skills I haven't read the question further, so it's not clear, but it is acceptable. The male protagonist is a growth story. If it is a simple sweet story, it is still recommended. The rebirth story is still a lot worse. In the early stage, I may have written too much about the daily life of the male and female protagonists, and did not explain the male protagonist's abilities well (or maybe I didn't read carefully). I still hope that the author will work hard and continue to work hard to get better and better.

The author's writing skills are very good, and the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are also very good. I just hope that the author can speed up the growth process of the male protagonist and retrieve his memory. In Tomatoes, which is generally a cool novel, this male protagonist is actually not lovable. The coquettish character of the male protagonist in the early stage is really not popular in Tomatoes. I understand that the author wants to write about the growth path of the male protagonist, but the male protagonist's initial character design is not a good one for readers who are used to the fast-paced cool novels Tomatoes.

Have you changed a lot? [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Very interesting, good luck to the author

[Grgrievance] [Grief] [Grief] I don't know what to say

Now it can be read as a cool article

It's still okay, but the hero is a child, Xiao Chunan I originally thought it would be a relaxing and everyday Shura Field. When I read around Chapter 90, I felt extremely uncomfortable. The more I read, the more I wanted to watch it.

Anchor, you need to update 4,000 people a day to stabilize people. There are too few now. Many people don't even take a look. You need to update more.