Although I am an orphan
But I know I have a twin brother
Even though I've never met him...
Maybe I heard his voice, maybe he never left me.
Reader comments
It's pretty good, but it feels like the main character is being suppressed all the time. The world is too dark and chaotic. The eyes are a little full of water elements
It's even, I personally think it's still pretty good.
But the writing style is very good, and you can see what the author wants to write.
You can add some transitions in the description of some special details, otherwise it will feel a bit abrupt.
The part about Forbidden Sea and Starfish was quite good.
We can also add some to the character creation
It's pretty good, but it feels like the main character is being suppressed all the time. The world is too dark and chaotic. The eyes are a little full of water elements
It's even, I personally think it's still pretty good. But the writing style is very good, and you can see what the author wants to write. You can add some transitions in the description of some special details, otherwise it will feel a bit abrupt. The part about Forbidden Sea and Starfish was quite good. We can also add some to the character creation
Very novel supernatural power text