Tsundere Slime and His Headless Horseman

Very good Give some advice to the author 1. Overall, the writing is very good, but the actions lack coherence, the entire article is blank, and the description of the environment is not specific enough. This does not mean that the description is not good. 2. There are too many language descriptions. You can add some adjectives and phrases to make it more vivid. ×The author is great As a reader who has read many, many fanfics, my evaluation of this book is fair. Still very good

To be honest, although it feels a bit low-quality, it has the feel of a light novel. I happened to watch Slime again recently, and it feels a bit like anime, and there is no plot that steals the limelight of the cute king. It feels good.

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It's very good, but at present, I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and the cute king is progressing a bit too fast. There may be little foreshadowing. After all, the cute king was an uncle in his previous life. Even if he accepts his mutation and likes another man, it feels a bit insufficient. But it still looks good in everyday life

I hope this book will have a single female protagonist, I want to watch the training

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In fact, the writing is not bad, and there are no big problems with the writing style, but, oh, but, there are really a lot of typos... This is really a big deduction [smile], but other than that, it is still good, so the author hurriedly updated it [eating melon]

This is the first time I saw a story about the King of Cuteness. I originally didn't want to give it five stars because it contained a lot of random comments from the author and completely unnecessary emojis. But if the new author can give me more support, please support me. At present, the only things that affect my perception are those too many random comments from the author and some unnecessary emoticons. Kaomoji, well used kaomoji can reflect the mood of the character at that time and make the character more vivid. However, the author relies too much on kaomoji, which makes it self-defeating. Many sentences are not broken properly. Overall, because he is a newcomer, the book written by the author is not bad. If there is anything else, I will add a book review

The typos need to be corrected, but other problems are not big [eating melon] Also, the protagonist's head image feels weird, I prefer Captain Yantou [laughing evilly]

Okay, um, the perspective is not all about the protagonist, there is a little group portrait? Well, although I haven't watched this anime, I think it's quite good. Well, the author has completely immersed himself in his art. Well, if you want to live through this novel, it will probably be difficult. Let's use it to practice writing. I hope it won't stop updating. Well, author, can you write a supporting role using my name?

The first few chapters are really okay, and the plot in the original work is not overdone (for example, it is only for readers who have watched anime or comics, and the original plot is watered down, and only new plots are rewritten). It is still very considerate of newcomers who have not read the original work (maybe because I have read the original work, in this regard, I feel that the "attracting readers' interest in reading" can be strengthened). Looking forward to [sending heart]

Overall, the genre is quite novel. But his content is not well refined. There are either missing words or typos, or there are abrupt places, poor connection, and a bit incoherence. If the author can refine it from scratch, it will be worth five stars⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐I just want to tell the author, if you don't refine it, how can you attract readers? How can you retain readers? But the book is pretty good, so the author doesn't have to rush it. I hope the book can get a rating of nine.

There are very few Mengwang fans to complain about. This book is quite good. Apart from a few typos, there are no bad points. At present, the future is promising.

I would like to support the newcomer with five stars. By the way, does the protagonist have CP?

I always feel that there will be a sword in the back. After all, there is no king. A country does not allow two leaders. I feel that the male protagonist will have a duel with a slime later.

Come on (it always feels like a very classic human-machine speech)

Very good, very good, very good, very good, very good-looking The author's writing style made me feel like I had traveled back to the Republic of China period when articles were filled with fake characters.

Except for the strange emotional line, Rimuru is surprisingly consistent with the anime image. Many fan fiction writers are a bit OOC. The actions I can figure out in this book are consistent with the anime [Like]

I love Rimuru. I am Rimuru's dog. It's so beautiful. I like the author's style very much.

Okay, Rimuru should be the heroine, right?

Good looking. Love to see more. [Sending Hearts]

There are a lot of typos, but so far it's still pretty good. I'll give it five stars for a new author.

Has it dropped to 6.6, Hajiro?

It's good to read, but it's so lazy. It's getting lazier and lazier. It used to be two chapters, but now it's just one. 😒

You have a few typos, but your attitude makes up for it. Your timeline and perspective are a little confusing, but your setting makes up for it. When you can sort out the priorities clearly, you will truly deserve the five stars given to the Logic King. You can watch it, but don't be too competitive. As a newbie, I think the logic king who will never make typos has already figured it out.

It looks good, but there are a lot of missing words [face covering]

Very impressive, it made my mouth spin

Yysy, if slime becomes your wife, doesn't it mean you have all kinds of wives?()

Apart from typos and missing words, everything else feels pretty good, especially the interaction between the protagonist and Rimuru!

It's ok, there's nothing poisonous about it. The author will also change the poisonous points.