Pirate******

Let's give a brief review. Let's start with Zefa's apprentice. He is the naval line and the beginning of the Rocks era. It is written in a prose style and is quite comfortable to read. However, some dialogues make it difficult to tell who is who, but you can ignore it. It is quite artistic. At the beginning, some of the emotions of the massacre of the village are a bit lacking, making the protagonist's collapse less resonant. Overall, it feels like a light novel.

The beginning is toxic, but the rest is okay. But after all, the protagonist is the Rain Man who ate the Sneak Attack Fruit. I don't expect the protagonist to be invincible. I just hope that he can use the Sneak Attack Fruit to the extreme and do sneak attacks well. Don't always think about getting stronger and fighting the front. It's fun to sneak attack others. Using sneak attacks while carrying justice, the contrast is definitely much better than others.

Everything else is fine, but I feel like the protagonist sometimes likes to say things that are inappropriate for his age, and then he is suspected, so he is just pretending.

The author looks at me. No one said rain must be water, right? The rain of swords is also rain, the rain of fire is also rain, and the thunderstorm is also rain. As long as you have a big imagination, what can't happen?

Both the character setting and fruit development are very interesting, and the plot does not follow the original plot completely step by step, but adds some original plots. It is very interesting. It is just that the previous Riddler plot has long and long dialogues that are a bit confusing, but overall it is pretty good so far.

It's logical, resourceful, and rational. It's much better than most pirate novels.

It is estimated that if you want to achieve results, it will take some time to settle.

I would like to make some suggestions. If you want to increase your power, you can win over Dragon when he defectes and develop the revolutionary army. Then Dragon will have a general's combat power, the old three generals, the old three generals, and the new world will laugh one by one. Then Magellan will be a general. Ace can also add naval talent to be a general. Chapter B0SS Enero's talent is also good, and then collect the Golden Emperor to gain underground power. At the same time, the protagonist can also rely on Magellan's poison to increase combat power. Not many people can resist it without an antidote.

It's pretty cool, but I don't know if those meteor showers and the like will come true.

The writing is just okay and I feel it's on point.

The scene I wrote is very big.

Not bad, hahahahahaha

Fortunately, although it was a bit confusing at the beginning, the more I write, the better.

The author's writing is great. Each character has his or her own reasons and is very human.

The plot is okay, the characterization is okay, the meaning of the plot is expressed, but I feel like it would be better if it could be described in a longer length.

The description is very good. The navy is no longer an idiot. The wise generals of the Warring States period have also stood up. They are not following the mainstream. I feel relieved because the protagonist is a child.

Does the author have a female protagonist? Can the heroine give it to Lao Sha? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Come on, come on, it looks good

Very real Super pretty

It's interesting to see

Bogart appears too early. At this time, it feels more reasonable for you to write Aoki as the adjutant.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

After looking at it, I suddenly realized, isn't the Baihai on Kongdao also a cloud? From now on, when fighting with people, Baihai will come.

Come on, author. I hope you won't go astray and you can still write One Piece in the future. It might be good if you change the subject.

Yes, although I couldn't stand it when I first read it, after reading a few more chapters, I can see the author's care and good writing style.

What can I say, it's a different One Piece. If you like watching the hot-blooded series, please leave it!

Yes, the perspective is correct

It's simply not enough to watch, my God

It's pretty good, but the rating is a bit low.

The plot is not bad. It is recommended to add names in front of the dialogue, such as Garp: "You brat! If you don't add my name next time, I'll let you taste the iron fist I love!" Like this [like]