One Piece: The Torrential Rain

Let's give a brief review. Let's start with Zefa's apprentice. He is the naval line and the beginning of the Rocks era. It is written in a prose style and is quite comfortable to read. However, some dialogues make it difficult to tell who is who, but you can ignore it. It is quite artistic. At the beginning, some of the emotions of the massacre of the village are a bit lacking, making the protagonist's collapse less resonant. Overall, it feels like a light novel.

The beginning is toxic, but the rest is okay. But after all, the protagonist is the Rain Man who ate the Sneak Attack Fruit. I don't expect the protagonist to be invincible. I just hope that he can use the Sneak Attack Fruit to the extreme and do sneak attacks well. Don't always think about getting stronger and fighting the front. It's fun to sneak attack others. Using sneak attacks while carrying justice, the contrast is definitely much better than others.

Everything else is fine, but I feel like the protagonist sometimes likes to say things that are inappropriate for his age, and then he is suspected, so he is just pretending.

The author looks at me. No one said rain must be water, right? The rain of swords is also rain, the rain of fire is also rain, and the thunderstorm is also rain. As long as you have a big imagination, what can't happen?

Both the character setting and fruit development are very interesting, and the plot does not follow the original plot completely step by step, but adds some original plots. It is very interesting. It is just that the previous Riddler plot has long and long dialogues that are a bit confusing, but overall it is pretty good so far.

It's logical, resourceful, and rational. It's much better than most pirate novels.

I would like to make some suggestions. If you want to increase your power, you can win over Dragon when he defectes and develop the revolutionary army. Then Dragon will have a general's combat power, the old three generals, the old three generals, and the new world will laugh one by one. Then Magellan will be a general. Ace can also add naval talent to be a general. Chapter B0SS Enero's talent is also good, and then collect the Golden Emperor to gain underground power. At the same time, the protagonist can also rely on Magellan's poison to increase combat power. Not many people can resist it without an antidote.

It is estimated that if you want to achieve results, it will take some time to settle.

The writing is just okay and I feel it's on point.

It's pretty cool, but I don't know if those meteor showers and the like will come true.