Redemption Failed, the Saint's Apprentice Became a Witch

Although it is a bit short, the plot of Dihua can be so smooth and logical for such a weak protagonist, which shows the author's storytelling ability. Although the plot of the protagonist being charged a price was not able to be told in the end, it is a bit of a flaw, but I personally feel that it is much better than other novels that follow the routine to the end, the writing is good, and the eyes can be hurt when reading without using your brain, which is considered valuable [Sending Hearts]

The positioning is clear and it ends when it should end. It is indeed a quality short film. It's a pity that the readers of this platform prefer long-form articles. The low score is basically due to subjective influence. I think only ldx readers can understand the content of this book. The plot is not too bad, but it doesn't have many outstanding points. It is quite satisfactory. According to my personal evaluation of the book, it should have been given 4 stars, but the total score of 6.3 Is too low, so I gave it a perfect score.

It's quite interesting, and a lot of the content is well written. It feels like a lot of deliberate misunderstandings are a bit too much. In fact, we could add some actual confession plot.

I won't give low marks to the new book. It's a good book, but I didn't change the channels of these four unlucky things to be consistent before Chapter 40. Don't blame me [punch out][punch out][punch out]

Although it's not long, it tells the story very well~ It's great!

Accidentally fell into the female channel sadistic flow [eating melon], but it's okay

It's still quite interesting and pretty good. It would be nice if there were more post-marriage extra chapters. I really want to see the plot where the heroine understands the hero's bold personality and says she wants to protect him and live a sweet life with him [sneaky laugh]

The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that the single female + Shura field is a bit strange, isn't it?

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A masterpiece of soothing writing

It's really good. The foreshadowing is in place and the front and back are smooth. It's considered to be the best among short films.

Thirty is very good, there is no such boring education and training plot.

Not bad, just less

I finished reading it in one day, it's not enough

Good-looking, love to watch, enjoy watching

Feeling pretty good

A little problem, but nice

Martin is still not shady [face covering]

The plot is complete and there are no problems

The writing is sophisticated, and he is a big shot who came to Tomato to practice his skills.

It's a short article and I enjoyed reading it quite a lot. I'm glad I started reading it and wasn't held back by the low rating.

Although it is very short, fortunately the plot is not protracted and the main line of the story is very clear. In a sense, this ending is already very good.

Is a good book Because there are only more than 100,000 words In other places, this number of words is the good part in the early stage. So it looks good

Toshiki's true disciple makes people wonder if it's me (laughing while covering my face) I feel like I watched a fantasy-style Kamen Rider Faiz (laughing) Keep working! Love comes from the country in between!

Not bad, still good-looking, a qualified light novel

The author is really talented, and the interactions between the characters are very interesting. Very beautiful Laughing to death, the misunderstanding is very interesting.

The plot is quite interesting and the pacing is well controlled.

Although it's not much and is very short, I personally think it's worth watching.

It looks good, the main plot is very clear and not cluttered, and the description of the character's mind is also very interesting. I hope the author will continue to do so.

The low score may be due to the small number of people. It is a book that has the flavor of a Japanese light novel. It is crisp and clear. Although it is a pity that the male and female protagonists are not together, it is highly recommended.