Demon Lord: Transmigrating, Starting with the Spider

I feel that the author can allocate more plots when Ciel comes out, competing with Xiaobai and so on. I really like watching this, as well as the costumes of the cute king. I recommend the author to take a look at the game "The Founding of the Demon King and the Dragon". There are many clothes of the cute king in it, and most of them are very good-looking.

The author likes "private settings" very much. Once the author makes a mistake and a reader corrects it, the author will say that it is a private setting. Even if it is something that the original work clearly stated, the author would rather label the part that conflicts with the original work as a "private setting" rather than a correction. The so-called private design means that when there are some situations in the original work that are not mentioned, clearly explained, or contradictory, in order to facilitate the smooth development of the creative activities of fan works, an appropriate standard is selected for these controversial areas in the fan works, instead of what the fan author says is what it is, and it cannot be used as an unlimited shield for the author! Originally, the author's "private design" in this book were all small and innocuous details, but the author's reply made me very unhappy. If you like private settings so much and like to use private settings as a shield, then you "privately design" a Tiga who can't beat Golzan and see if readers will buy it? It's better to have fewer such things. Deduct one star!

Baby, try to divide the work in words as much as possible. Uh... How should I put it? I found that your actions, statements, and narration were mixed together, and the verbal sparring was too obvious. The effect was that you could see it, but you couldn't read it. If you don't know exactly what the problem is, I suggest you throw the three paragraphs into AI and let AI read it (face covering). In fact, I quite like your work, but the reading fluency needs to be improved. By the way, one more thing, pay attention to the order of the article. (Full cause and effect is always good.)

Regardless of playability or anything else, it is more interesting than other novels, and it can be read again and again. Some novels are really embarrassing to read repeatedly. No matter how good they are in the later stage, if there are any embarrassing parts in the early stage, it will be very inconvenient to read again.

Two of the three kings gather together, and two of my favorite characters interact with each other.

A spider book. The plot is well written. The transition is also very good. The plot of the protagonist and Spider-Man getting along is very good.

It is very rare that it is the same as the early stage of "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality".

Personally I feel good. You can pick it up and read it slowly, I hope the author won't finish it so soon.

The content is innovative, but the world of Spiderman ends too hastily. The class meeting, the life span of the devil, and the control of the world are handed over to the pig's feet, but who can fill in the missing energy?

Came from the previous book