This is my first time writing. I am also a fan of novels. The factory is in recession and wages have been cut. I have read more novels and feel that I am good at it. I will try to write! See if you can earn some cigarette money! I usually watch all the second-generation novels. To be honest, I have never watched the original novel or the original TV series! Therefore, this book is adapted from the second creation of the great masters. Don't use your brain when reading the book. I just made it up randomly. I don't even have an outline for the composition. I just write whatever comes to my mind! So please bear with me if everything in the book is reasonable or unreasonable! We don't understand either! If you like it, please give it a like! If you don't like it, feel free to scold me! You are all masters! We also want to entertain everyone for the sake of life. If you don't like it, feel free to scold me! I know my writing is not good, please criticize me more!
Reader comments
Laughing like crazy
The system gives the protagonist a Hunyuan Sutra, the first step is to practice Qi, and the second step is to develop internal strength. . . Is this technique a retrograde technique? The first step is to cultivate immortality and the second step is to be a martial artist?
I came to the Siheyuan and became a steward, but the system came and told me not to interfere too much with the main characters? Where to do it.
The plot is very good, but there are a lot of problems, so I blame the author and let readers point out the shortcomings. The author is a good author. It is normal to have problems when you first start writing. Come on, author!
There are currently three time travellers. In order to prevent the book from collapsing, the author keeps them alive like puppets.
You should pay attention to your punctuation marks.
Laughing like crazy The system gives the protagonist a Hunyuan Sutra, the first step is to practice Qi, and the second step is to develop internal strength. . . Is this technique a retrograde technique? The first step is to cultivate immortality and the second step is to be a martial artist?
I came to the Siheyuan and became a steward, but the system came and told me not to interfere too much with the main characters? Where to do it.
The plot is very good, but there are a lot of problems, so I blame the author and let readers point out the shortcomings. The author is a good author. It is normal to have problems when you first start writing. Come on, author!
There are currently three time travellers. In order to prevent the book from collapsing, the author keeps them alive like puppets.
You should pay attention to your punctuation marks.