When the Affectionate Travels to the Next Door Novel

Overtake! ! ! Good! ! ! Look! ! ! (Please read with caution as there are spoilers below) It's completely satisfying to watch the three units so far! The author's writing style is good, the plot is not too surprising, and the rhythm is very good. It can be read smoothly~ It can really be seen that the author loves each of his characters and has great ideas. In the first unit, Xiao Ji Xiaofu, even though he has an e-sports background, I can still understand it as a person who doesn't play games at all. The young couple is quite sweet, and both of them are very innocent. What impressed me most about this unit was the part about breaking prejudice and realizing Xiao Ji's championship dream. Although everything from the outside world showed that Xiao Fu was a love-minded person, Xiao Ji finally used his own eyes to truly get to know him and fall in love with him. I was quite touched when I saw the ending🥺🥺. In the second unit, I feel that the author's ideas are very novel! After reading it, I felt like my eyes were brightening. Beauty Gong and Sluggish Long Aotian Shou taste so good... On the surface, they are derivatives of the same work and are brought back to the original work. There are constant foreshadowings and foreshadowings in the middle. Finally, it is revealed that the fate of Yue Xi, a dragon and a phoenix, has been entangled for three generations. In the end, the young lovers have survived all the difficulties and are together! But the side story 🥺😭... Personally, I feel that the third unit is the best in terms of emotional description ~ The traditional and delicious Rough Han Gong and Jiao Jiao Shou are so difficult for us, Brother Shanzi, to travel from the countryside to the interstellar world, hahaha, I like Brother Shanzi very much! The little couple in the middle has a little twist, and it has a sweet and sour taste that I really like. I also saw the other side of the 100% matching pheromones, but true love has nothing to do with pheromones, but love with people. All in all, I highly recommend it. You won't lose money if you invest in it. The author is very nice and replies very positively! It is also very attentive. Each unit will have chapter reviews and character drafts, which is very enjoyable to read. There will be a little bit of a novice author's connection that is not smooth, but the flaws do not hide the advantages. (This is the first time Yang Persimmon has written a long review in 3 or 4 years. I can't stand this score anymore. It's going up fast!) Although I don't like following serials, it's so good! Support the author! Keep it up~🥰

After watching the second world, I really like fairy tales, and the setting where the main attacker and the sufferer is Long Aotian, hahaha, the ending is very happy, the affectionate young couple, the system is really his savior [Sending Hearts]

The e-sports part of World 1 is pretty well written. Anyway, I don't know much about e-sports, so I think it's OK. But the emotional line is actually relatively simple. The two protagonists fall in love with each other without much development. The setting is quite good. The second world does not fully reflect the elements of cultivating immortals and immortal heroes. I only mention a few words about cultivating occasionally. I don't know if it is a matter of length. It is understandable that Gong has a memory and naturally has a high opinion of Shou in this world, but there is not much space for Shou and Gong to get along with each other, and the characters are not well expressed. I feel like watching the two of them get along is a bit boring. The sum of the several episodes is not as engaging as the opening chapter. World 3 is longer, I don't know if it will be better.

The writing in World 1 feels very good. There is even a kind of author who is a professional gamer. As a non-game player, I was stunned for a while. When it comes to World 2, I feel that the pace is a bit too fast. Overall, the writing is very good [full]

Defined as a brainless sweet novel, the writing style is also good, some settings are quite interesting, and the protagonist setting is very interesting to me. So full marks Of course, if you have high requirements for plot and logic, you will be disappointed, so if you are watching the main drama, you can go out and turn left. There is no poisonous point, and the author's writing style is quite comfortable. It is a sweet love in the first place. If the writing style is not enough, I will omit the panoramic world view and focus on the aspects that I am good at. Moreover, the author has obviously made progress in the last two units. I look forward to the author continuing to improve himself! Bring better works to yourself and everyone. (*°∀°)=3❤️ Of course, I hope the author will not put too much pressure on himself, and I hope your book will be liked by more people!

Your plot is a bit noisy, but your writing style is very ancient and makes up for it. It has the same flavor as the old writings from the past. I haven't found an author like this in a long time who can make ordinary or even boring plots fascinating. Come on.

I really don't understand, why is it only 7.5 Points? It's really beautiful! It's been a long time since I've been able to find a book that keeps me reading for 100 chapters. I've read almost all the male chapters. There's a serious shortage of books with two male protagonists. The first world appeals to me the most. This e-sports writing is so fun for me. I love this kind of ability to beat others. The scenes of people talking trash are really cool. I like this kind of crazier one, and almost all the hits are straight shots. This is even better. And almost every dungeon's attack has a jealousy flavor, which is really delicious. It can be said that those who focus on attack can read this book. I think it is still very friendly to attack. I'm currently reading the dungeon of Zombies, Red Hair, another one that's on my XP, and I like this kind of character who is gentle and polite on the surface, but actually holds a grudge in his heart. I will review it again when the score is higher. The logic of this book is still very smooth, and the writing is okay. Mainly because I am an I've finished reading the fifth world, and the if line feels very interesting, but it's a pity that it's not finished yet. You must watch it and keep going. My favorite now is the 5th world. The characters of both characters are very interesting and have a sense of redemption. When I saw the first part, I thought Huo was saving Xiao, but after watching it, I realized that it was supposed to be mutual redemption. No one understood the Zombie Emperor. Huo, but Xiao is willing to give it a go and become his "accomplice". Fortunately, the ending is good, but Xiao is sensitive and suspicious, and his childhood trauma makes him unwilling to believe in the unconditional goodness of others, but Huo is a firm and straightforward lover. It is best for young lovers to understand each other. And I think the plot reversal design is quite interesting. The system's favor is actually Xiao's, and it is also an opportunity for the two people left behind by him to meet again. It is really delicious and has a feeling that directly touches the heart. But why do I still see 7.5 Now? I really can't do it anymore. I beg you, please take good care of me. I personally feel that the writing style of the fifth world is better. Is it an improvement? I feel that the emotional line is particularly delicate, not so abrupt, and looks better! Looking forward to what the author writes next!

It's really, really beautiful!! "This heart is the place of peace, and the long journey will eventually lead to the end." One is the desert emperor who pursues the championship, and the other is the "Aquaman" singer who pursues being cared about. Both as a listener and as a spectator, they are very good. The image of Aquaman was really deeply shaped in the early stage, and it is really collapse when it comes to the perspective of fans. But what is the need for e-sports? What is needed is strength. I will explain it later. The feeling is cute. The only shortcoming may be that the emperor seems to need a little more paving the way for the relationship in the front. There are two small scenes of sudden feelings. But it is really good-looking, no brainstorming!! Who knows, it tells all his likes and shortcomings, and it feels like you can only get to know it carefully. It is really great, but after all, the description of fast travel is not enough, but it is really good. If you can accept the misunderstanding in the early stage, just read on. They are really two very good babies.

Hello, wife of the author, I originally wanted to read this book. I thought your writing was very good, and then I quickly read the lightning protection in each world. To be honest, I really didn't understand World 6. I really like what you said at the beginning, my wife, that love is equal. It is not nobler than anyone else, and no one should be used as a licker to others. But in my opinion, Madam, the setting of World 6 is really inconsistent with this passage. The term "virtuous competition" is really unequal, as if feeling has become a tool for fighting for attack, although I don't quite understand the definition of pseudo-slicing, but if two consciousnesses have hostile emotions towards themselves, then they are really no longer one person, but two completely independent individuals. In my opinion, this is pseudo-NP. Please put yourself in my shoes, can you accept being cut into two pieces and competing for the benefits? Either of these two situations is disgusting. If I can do either of them, I don't think there is any need to call myself an iron-blooded water bearer. In this setting, it is impossible to be a water bearer. There is nothing wrong with being omnivorous or partial and speaking openly. I also have personal opinions. You don't have to adopt them. I think lightning protection can be written in the copy? This time, I read through all the worlds first. If I saw the sixth world and liked the first few worlds, the sudden change in the style of the later worlds would be really frustrating, especially since this world is the finale. It basically sets the main tone of the book, and it is really difficult to adjust. It's a pity that I can't read this book because I haven't read it before so I can't give an objective rating. But because I'm very confused and puzzled, I can only leave some subjective thoughts and apologies.

In fact, from the perspective of these existing worlds, it is still more popular. This is a book that focuses on the perspective of the protagonist, but the protagonist controller will not be happy to read it. The author's writing is good, but some places are a bit awkward in the expressions. I am a protagonist controller and I am more aggressive, so I am not happy with it. CP sisters and those who are biased should be able to read it... Qianqian is a little bit of a surprise for readers who control or control the protagonist, but if you can accept it, you can read it...

The rating is really low. If you give it a try, the structure and narrative are relatively mature. It's not a serious drama. It's mainly about the emotional line. It's a good show. People who are addicted to it can watch it with confidence, and people who are sweethearts can watch it with confidence. Since it is a unit text, the tastes are quite varied (personally I feel there are pros and cons) In addition, I have to praise you, the author. You really care about the characters you write, and you are always carrying water. But I personally can't accept the angle of attack, so I can't continue reading this article. Unfortunately, my attempt at desensitization failed... All in all, the article is good. As for the author, I think he is a rising star. (Anyway, I am very grateful to the author for his creation. I wish the book a great success.)

Suddenly I realized that I haven't rated it yet. It's a good-looking one. It's definitely in the top five of the fast-traveling stories I've read. It's a unit story. Every story is sweet, and the interactions are particularly loving. The current serialized unit "Date" is so sweet. I'm a native dog, and I'm a school bully. The mouth is still very annoying, who knows that the brain circuits are not on the same line at all, being controlled by Gong has become her boyfriend, and Gong considers himself his younger brother. The last unit is also good, the love brain man ghost Gong is still too authoritative, the second unit is also good, I especially like the plot of that one

I just read the first volume of E-Sports and the final volume of the end of the world. I really liked the love between the young lovers in the volume of the end of the world. I really like this volume and hope that I can write more [please update] When I'm reading books, I hope I won't end up like other books [face covering] (I'm the kind of person who picks out what I like and then doesn't read it if I don't like it. It's super easy to fail or never wait for the ones I like)_(´ཀ`‖ ∠) I wonder if there are any sisters like me.

Hara saw the third dimension. What can I say? My favorite has always been the first plane (I watched it three or four times). I memorized the plot for a long time, but after I came back from school for more than ten days, I forgot the name. It was super uncomfortable. But Ren remembered the plot of the first plane and liked it very much. Although I added the book to the bookshelf, I clicked on it and it showed the plot of the third dimension, so I felt that it was not. Fortunately, for the sake of memory, I clicked on it again and looked at the table of contents. I was so surprised when I found it! ! ! ! ✪ω✪

It's very interesting. I like this kind of unit novel. The author's conception of each world is very powerful. Especially the protagonist in the last world actually disbanded the royal family. This is very unexpected to me. It can be seen that the author has written better and better, and there are many outstanding female characters. I think this is very good. It can be seen that the author is a very good person and has a good structure.

I like it, love it. Except for the fact that the main character's attributes are truncated by the system, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch, I understand that, but other than that, everything else looks good. Attack and control can be seen

The last world was okay, a bit bland, but I could finish it and it was quite novel, but it didn't live up to expectations. Because the time between reading is too long, I can no longer remember what the world was like before, but this book is in the good column of my bookshelf, and I have read most of it except for the extra chapters. I believe in my own classification, so I gave it five stars. And I think the author is great, but I don't like writing. If you made me try writing for the first time and spent a whole day writing a few thousand words, I would give up immediately. What's more, this is the first completed book. It can be written like this. It may not be super good-looking yet, but it can make readers calm down and read their own stories and fall in love with the characters. This is already a very powerful thing. And this is still at Tomato. It is already better than many people. Anyway, it is better than me. Damn, I believe you will write better articles in the future (ง •̀_•́)ง.

It's good-looking. The author of the first world e-sports bureau has already written that I don't know what the world is. As for the emotional line, in short, it is about a puppy who lacks love and meets a sultry and cold-faced husband who wears books. I feel that the emotional changes are very confusing, but the writing is very interesting [laughing]

The idea is good, the writing is good, the emotional line, and the plot line are all slowly improving. The early stage is immature, and the end of the world chapter is more mature. The experience of following up is getting better and better. Generally speaking, the level is above average in the 🍅main article, and it is worth reading.

I think this article is really good! Every couple of CPs are very cute, and the author knows what the readers want to see. The extras are all sweet, which is fair to a certain extent. My favorite is the ABO world. To be honest, it is quite hard to put people from the 1960s into the interstellar world all at once, but it is precisely because of this that the attack that finally grows to that height is really awesome👍🏻

It's quite interesting, but to be honest, I don't really like the content of Shura Field and Slicing in the last story, so I skipped waiting for the end to read the last chapter. But overall it's good, the setting of each world is good, and the characters of the protagonists are also very good and I love it. If the author's next book is also the type I like, I will consider reading it.

Show them all to me! At present, the first world, except for the description of the game, the two protagonists are actually pretty good. Gong has his own pursuits and dreams, and Shou is not really a playboy like the character, but a child who lacks love. The two of them regard living a good life as more important than anything else, and the little one of the system is also a very cute baby.

Recommended, recommended, there are laughs and tears. I just finished reading The World 1. The plot is not draggy. The extra love diary at the end is also very touching. I will read the whole book and review it again. This book is not allowed to have a low rating. The author recommends it to me! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's super good-looking, a rare unit-focused novel, and it has a plot, setting, and writing style. Each world setting is very good and innovative. It's so rare. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I don't know why the rating is so low, it should be 9 points [Thinking]

I really like the first world [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] written by the author. Can the author write an online dating article?

Great author, after reading it all afternoon, I now feel that you are terrifyingly strong! ! There are no shortcomings at all. This is the first time that I don't read articles for learning, but feel that I can't reach your level. There is really basically no short version. The article is extremely smooth, which I cannot achieve! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Whether the author considers writing an e-sports article, I will follow the teacher's article to the death! Really, although I have only watched the first world, I strongly recommend it and trust the teacher!

In the first world, the protagonist's emotional line is very frustrating, and the description of e-sports is also good. It is very enjoyable and fun to watch [Learned]

It's very good-looking, the emotional lines are not stiff, more natural, and the main characters are both clean and sweet, so good-looking [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

No, every unit is really beautiful, it really boosted my XP, and the author's writing style is also very good, I'm going to eat all the fragrant rice! ! Young lovers should stay together for me! Has become the author's big dog ૮₍♡>𖥦<₎ა