Rebirth*****

The writing is very good. I give you 4 stars because I am afraid that you will be proud. Keep working hard and stick to your heart. Don't listen to the fans and don't write crookedly. The villain cannot die too early. It is best for the villain to come out and jump around from time to time. Because if he dies early, other people will think that the villain is dead and there is nothing interesting about it. Too bland. You should have some ups and downs from time to time. In order to make the original work interesting, the villains would be fine with it. Find a reason to find trouble.

The book I wrote, no matter how ugly it is, must be full. We are all working hard... [Eating Melon] It is recommended to start reading from Chapter 12! The one in front was warned [eating melon]

Does it look good? Love it. Love it.