Zongbeng Tieyuanshen: My Mentor Is a Skirmisher

The character of the heroine in this book stood out to me [I learned]. She will not have difficulties with her original family. She is very confident, and her strength is her confidence, because she has this capital, and the heroine is also very straightforward. It's just casual. When can you be more direct? Please update it soon [Send Hearts], I want to see their sweet [Send Hearts] [Admiration]

Super awesome! It has a bit of the evil feeling of Genius Club, but because of Asan and Heita, they maintain a moral level similar to that of Heita. She is a very good heroine. It's a pity that she doesn't have more Xinghai parts, but Xumi is home! And, thanks Aha!

It's very interesting, but if the author sees my comment, I hope he can consider it. The heroine is very good, really very good. The genius Black Tower who was praised by La Dio was also praised by Na Kexia, who is a genius in the universe. If one day you stop updating, can you bring the heroine back to the universe? Don't stay in Teyvat. I really don't know how to put it. I just feel that Teyvat is too small compared to the world view of Star Railway. The heroine should not be buried like this, even if she is willing to take her lover back. I request that if one day I really stop updating, the end will not come. When the heroine returns to the universe, can you give her a chapter that allows her to return to the railway world? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I had this idea when I saw the story. The world is very big, the universe is also very big, there are countless planets, and the heroine is still very young. If the time comes, can we really give her an ending? Let him return to this universe

It's super cool. I just like the heroine's kind of genius who can do anything. It's super cool. That's great＼(^▽^)／! Yes, whether it's the love between the genius heroine and the wanderer in the main story or the tsundere love between the Masked Fool and the Ascendant in the extra story, it's great! So happy! Be happy! The heroine's words "I can do anything as long as I want" are so powerful.

My wife wrote it very well! Both kittens are so cute, I just like to see how they communicate with each other but are arrogant and awkward and refuse to tell the truth. Both kittens are well-shaped and really cute! ! ! [Adoration][Admiration] I want to follow my wife forever! ! ! ✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*.

This is a sweet cookie for a proud little couple. There are not many setbacks. Our lifelong search is just to accept the past, accept ourselves, and accept everything about our lover. It doesn't matter if we don't accept ourselves. It's good to let go. Healing system

It's really good-looking. It's a sweet story about CP Skirmishers. The overall tone is very relaxed. The story of the genius Flora and the little stray cat healing each other. The author's writing style is very good. It's great. Oh, by the way, remember to let Aha sit at the main table at the wedding [laughing evilly]

It's super good-looking, and you can see the ending at once. The setting is really great. The timeline and foreshadowing all form a closed loop. The emotional line is not stiff at all, it is very delicate. It's great. It's mutual redemption. We are saved! ! ! ! ! The pace of the article is just right, not too long, and it's super comfortable to read.

It's so good-looking, it's the first time I've seen such a piece of writing that matches the genius of the universe. It's so beautiful. I don't know why the rating is so low. It's the first time I've seen such a high-quality Genius Club fanfic.

I really like the heroine's baby, a little cat who is super confident and has a high sense of deservingness. Before reading it, I read the book reviews to see if there were any surprises about me. I read a book friend who said that he couldn't feel how much the heroine loved Asan, and looked down on Teyvat and the people of Teyvat, which was disrespectful, so he gave it a low score. I was immediately interested because I usually watch movies with big heroines without censorship. I can't see the heroine being wronged, so I like movies with a high sense of deservingness. Moreover, I came to watch the sweet romance to pass the time, not to watch the licking role as a nanny. I've read Chapter 100 now, and I feel like the heroine keeps saying she loves him and giving Ah San recognition, but Ah San is passively accepting to be redeemed. It's obvious that the heroine herself was a little bitter melon in her childhood. I'm not saying that breaking up is not a good idea, after all, he is just an insecure little pig, but is it wrong to say that the heroine doesn't like breaking up at all? After all, their love was completely forced by the heroine's invasion and robbery. If the heroine hadn't been chasing San, they wouldn't be together at all. Even if San had a crush on the heroine, he would never take that step. It is also said that the heroine looks down on Teyvat and the Little Grass God. She seems to look down on everyone, she just has such a personality, and if the heroine really looks down on everyone from the bottom of her heart, she will not have friends. At most, she will never have a deep friendship with superficial compliments. Since the heroine can be friends with a person who is difficult to get along with like Golddust Baby in the article, it proves that she is not that kind of person. We only see the surface of the heroine, but other people in the novel have really lived with the heroine for a long time. To judge a person, you cannot look at what she said, but what she did. (It's also possible that my filter is a little too big. After all, I'm a heroine who usually mixes with big heroines and has no CP.) (I'm also a solo pusher of San, but my solo push is that I don't take any of the CP that I gave him. I only like San himself, but I don't just like San. I push many) I have read almost all of the author's novels (there are a few that I didn't read because I didn't like them). I have really written a lot of protagonists who are indifferent and indifferent on the surface but are actually very gentle.

Finished reading it in one day. To be fair, this is the one that suits me best among the many books I have read. . . . I have to read the rest bit by bit. This can really be read in one sitting and it's not enough. . . I didn't read it because I wasn't interested in the title. Oh my god, what a cool article. . . . . The protagonist is so arrogant and I really like it. . . . .

The writing is particularly beautiful. Unlike other prose, this book neither lacks a storyline, nor is it a short essay, nor is it a moderate one like Tiantian. It's very interesting. I'm looking forward to the sequel. I hope it will write a story about Ah San coming to the heroine's world. In fact, I feel that it can be published separately. Even if Ah San comes to the heroine's world, he can also start another story by traveling through time and space.

It seems a bit difficult to argue with Teacher Xia when it comes to logic... Let's start a Teacher Xia one!

Miracle, this is our best cook in Teyvat! He is the best cook on our train crew! The best cook in the entire universe! ! ! Fragrant! ! ! Teacher, I will pursue you forever! ! ! !

It's super beautiful [love][love]. Sansan just needs a straight-ball girl to love him. The author's characters are very well portrayed. Why is it that every time I find this kind of magical article, it is always unfinished [crying], please keep writing, ma'am, and don't stop updating it.

Super super super beautiful! I declare that there is no lover in this world who is more suitable to cure Beng-chan than little Flora! ! !

Beautiful! At first, I quit reading the first few chapters, thinking to myself, is this day really coming? ! It means that I actually don't like Yi Yu Xinzhi's article! Later I found out that I had thought too much, but I had no desire to read novels during that time. Later I found out that this book is also very good, very good! The interaction between Flora and Sansan is very interesting and cute!

Super good-looking, super good-looking, super perfect! ! !

It's good-looking, and I like the heroine's character. She has the kind of confidence and enthusiasm that I long for most. Of course, I also admire her superb IQ!

I'll just look at it and look at it and look at it and look at it and look at it and look at it and look at it.

Ahhhhh! ! ! ! So cool! So pretty! Teacher

The foreshadowing is really well done, it looks really good, and the emotional lines are really well written.

I finished reading it in one sitting... Oh my God, it looks so good. What a great foreshadowing! The young couple is also very sweet, and the characters have distinct personalities. Overall it's good!

I really like the heroine's character.

It's not OOC, and the heroine's tone and personality fit the character very well.

Good luck, good luck, it's so well written.

I hope that the heroine will never have to change her personality. She is in very good condition now, although she feels inhumane as if she stepped on someone's fault and choked them to death. I'll go. . Ms. Heita, you. . What a nice guy. Chapter 33 The young lovers are together! ! So awesome. The love affair with Skirmishers is a home invasion, and it's also delicious. Currently traveling through three time periods. Ladio is also a good adoptive father! He said he was the most annoying, but in fact he already regarded her as his daughter. Ahhhhh, their pasts clearly have shadows of each other. Two kittens save each other, eh. The two people in the parallel world episode are really arrogant, but fortunately both parties understand each other's intentions, they are just tough-talking, otherwise they might have become a loser. It's all he! ! There is no secondary CP, it looks good. So fragrant. It's not aggrieved at all, it's a very enjoyable article.

It's nice to have a look. The author is great, great, great, great [sending my heart]

The heroine's character description is very good, recommended

Great, great, great, your writing style and inspiration are beyond my reach [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]