Variety Comic: Evil Store Manager? Encourage People to Find Their Way Back!

I have opened a new book again. It seems to be similar to the one on the exchange. Although I have only read one chapter, it is too small after all. But out of trust in the author, I will give it a rating. After reading more than 10 chapters, I feel that this book is not very in line with my ideals. I am looking forward to the next one.

It's nice to watch, but the main character's appearance doesn't have to be average, just comely. 🤓

This is an old book. At first I thought someone was imitating it, but it turned out that it was actually the reincarnation of the dirty land. The original book was obviously quite good. What a pity. But luckily I still have it on my bookshelf [laughs evilly] This book should last longer. In addition, there are too few chapters at present, less than fifty, so it is not interesting at all.

OK, new book, old acquaintances, the grocery store is closed and the store manager is fighting. Children, will this book crash?

It's still very good. The protagonists have good personalities and don't have all kinds of emotions just because they have someone they like. Didn't rush there either. Mostly chat. Take your time. You can write more female characters interacting with each other. Others will naturally come closer to you after a series of comparisons. Because they all have a desire to compare, especially women. Isn't this better than you guiding them every day to help them and putting you on guard? Everyone's method is different and some can be said to be the same. See if you can. Overall it's pretty good

In fact, it has improved a lot compared to the previous book. Both the description of the environment and the grasp of the emotions of the characters are very good. I like it very much. Don't believe what the so-called Shen Nong says. You can only know if it is suitable for you by reading it. There are also those who say licking, but you can't say that after watching one or two episodes of anime. Here are some suggestions for the author. Don't follow the same book as the previous one, in which case all the women will be too stereotyped, which is not good. Finally, the author's writing is really good, so I give it five stars. (Ooc does not exist in this article)

Come on, big brother who writes about Little Liu Bei! ! ! !

Five-star praise, it's so normal, but I like it, it's Monster Girl Saigao

Now I know what kind of author is who is good at writing but still doesn't follow the right path [laughs] Awesome, love watching, I want more😋

I really like this kind of protagonist. Nayuta has seen it before and liked it. Anyway, I just like it very much [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Sorry, I forgot to score.

Author, did you add anything to the work? Why am I so excited when I read it🥵

You are the one who won't change software after watching this [Like]

My skills have weakened a bit [laughing evilly]

Great, no need to say more

Do you like leftovers so much? ? ? Licking to the end, everything is there [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] The plot is really good, those who pass by must read it.

"How difficult is it for straight men to chase girls"

Shen He was stunned and was manipulated by Author Capital

The book is fine, but where is the evil? There is no mystery other than pretending to be B. . .

Although it's a bit more restrained, it still has the same flavor as the original one.

I like you. I must try my best to survive this book! [Adoration]

Let's give some real and objective evaluation. The rhythm in the early stage is tight, but the emotional line is flat in the middle and later stages, and some character scenes cannot be balanced. This is also the disadvantage of writing more than ten more female protagonists. There are some inconsistencies in the characters' personalities in the middle and later stages, but it is slightly better than the explosion in the early stage. It can be seen that the author will still read the comments. As a fanfic, it can be considered average, and if it is a YY novel, it can be considered good. So far, most of the characters are slightly different from the original work.

Good news, I feel like I can only watch it if I pay.

Let's take a look and cherish it, I don't know if I can survive until the end of the summer vacation [eating melon]

Not bad, keep up the good work

It's very beautiful and well written 👍

It's beautiful, so beautiful [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]! ! ! When I was reading in the morning, I thought I couldn't read it anymore because the book was gone.

Many anime are too niche

It looks great, can that Devil's Deal be released again?

Not bad, but it feels weird [thinking]

Promise me, the author is great. This book must not be sanctioned again! Oh my god, netizens will do anything. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]