[The text has been completed] [Extras are being produced] [Two male protagonists] [Double cleansing] [HE] [New Year's Eve] [Two-way redemption]
Gentle on the surface but harboring paranoia inside
This is a healing short sweet article, there are no big storms, only the small blessings in the ordinary.
Reader comments
OMG, it's beautiful... It can definitely hit the hearts of people who like novels about happiness in the ordinary ദ്ദി ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ )
Xiaoyu and Xiaochu's emotional line is pure and sweet without any sense of cruelty. Just as the introduction says, it is a small blessing in ordinary life. There is no bloody plot, just the beauty of two people being together, as soft as water, a trickling of daily life, and the emotions are very delicate ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧
The text is short and can be read as a bedtime story. It makes people happy... (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)
The characters involved in the story are also quite kind-hearted people, whether it is Xiao Chu's neighbor's grandma, or Xiao Yu's adoptive parents and adoptive sister... It makes people's hearts warm. After suffering the torment of life, it is really pleasant to write a chapter or two like this... ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾
But I still feel there are some minor shortcomings, such as the description of Xiao Chu's life experience.
It may also be influenced by other novels. I always feel that Xiao Chu still wants to pay homage to Xiao Yu's parents?
These are not reflected in the main text. Could it be that the author will talk about it in the extra chapter?
But since these are not the main plot and do not affect the content of the text, they are harmless.
But according to my experience, if we are not going to talk about Xiao Chu's life experience in detail, we might be able to reduce the side mentions of Xiao Chu's father in the text. Repeated mentions will always give people a sense of mystery and make people wonder if Xiao Chu has any special identity. However, in fact, Xiao Chu's father does not appear in the text, which will inevitably give people a sense of gap.
Of course, this is just my personal experience. Overall, the novel is super nice! ᐡɞ̴̶̷⌁⚇⌁ɞ̴̶̷ᐡ
OMG, it's beautiful... It can definitely hit the hearts of people who like novels about happiness in the ordinary ദ്ദി ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ ) Xiaoyu and Xiaochu's emotional line is pure and sweet without any sense of cruelty. Just as the introduction says, it is a small blessing in ordinary life. There is no bloody plot, just the beauty of two people being together, as soft as water, a trickling of daily life, and the emotions are very delicate ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ The text is short and can be read as a bedtime story. It makes people happy... (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) The characters involved in the story are also quite kind-hearted people, whether it is Xiao Chu's neighbor's grandma, or Xiao Yu's adoptive parents and adoptive sister... It makes people's hearts warm. After suffering the torment of life, it is really pleasant to write a chapter or two like this... ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾ But I still feel there are some minor shortcomings, such as the description of Xiao Chu's life experience. It may also be influenced by other novels. I always feel that Xiao Chu still wants to pay homage to Xiao Yu's parents? These are not reflected in the main text. Could it be that the author will talk about it in the extra chapter? But since these are not the main plot and do not affect the content of the text, they are harmless. But according to my experience, if we are not going to talk about Xiao Chu's life experience in detail, we might be able to reduce the side mentions of Xiao Chu's father in the text. Repeated mentions will always give people a sense of mystery and make people wonder if Xiao Chu has any special identity. However, in fact, Xiao Chu's father does not appear in the text, which will inevitably give people a sense of gap. Of course, this is just my personal experience. Overall, the novel is super nice! ᐡɞ̴̶̷⌁⚇⌁ɞ̴̶̷ᐡ