Jobless Reincarnation: Demon Banner

The taste is quite unique, even Kiriath slaves would [palm]

I think this fanfic is really well written. There is no discomfort like the invincible template. The protagonist Goldfinger is really strong and has reached a better limit. The interaction between the protagonist and the female character is very interesting. She is cold on the surface but hot on the inside. There is nothing poisonous about it. , Keep reading patiently, the protagonist will fill up the pits ahead, and there will be a happy ending (✪▽✪). The story is very long, I have only read more than 400 chapters, and I will definitely read the rest, because I think it is really good (´∀｀*), come on!

It's really okay, the entry point doesn't seem abrupt, especially the protagonist's power system is different from the original world, which brings a new sense of experience. At the same time, it's not the kind of script written by Long Aotian. The protagonist gradually becomes stronger, so I feel that this work is okay.

Some places in the early stage are very toxic, and the protagonist is a big problem. But overall it looks good. Anyway, I will skip the content I don't like [laughing evilly]. Maybe I haven't read enough Wu-Ji fans, but I think this novel is still worth reading. Well, there are a lot of poison points. If you fight with the Dragon God, you will really die from the poison. I have to fight against what I can say with my mouth, but in the end I can't fight.

Here's a suggestion for optimizing the look and feel: When switching between first-person characters, you can start a separate paragraph to indicate whose perspective it is. For example: # Male protagonist's perspective# Text #Elise's perspective# Text

I've finished reading the first volume and let's talk about my feelings. Generally speaking, it's okay. It's just that the emotional aspect is too slow and annoying for people watching it. Also, the protagonist is the kind of person who doesn't take the initiative or reject the emotional aspect. Another volume is over and Sylphy hasn't shown up yet. By the way, the introduction says there are multiple female protagonists + three primary colors. Does that mean other than the three primary colors? Who are they? Anyone who has seen the back can tell you? I want to know which heroines there are and whether the ones I like are among them, such as Cyrenus and Paul's maid [laughing]. The author writes that Paul likes Jufeng. Who doesn't like this? [Laughing] I remember that the maid was very nice, but after so long, I'm afraid not all of them have become Paul's. After all, we are truly worthy of Boss Cao! Furthermore, it is said that people in other worlds get married and have children relatively early, and they are actually only in their twenties when they are all together. Isn't this the most beautiful age? [Sinister smile]

Tomato is a rare jobless reincarnation high-quality fanfic. I feel like the reason why no one has read it is because the early writing was weird [face covering] [face covering] with too many explanations and settings of inner thoughts, which gave people a feeling of being in the fog. I almost gave up [covering face], but it got a lot better in the later period. I hope I won't stop updating [face covering]

I read more than 100 chapters in one go. The writing is really great. I just want to ask the author what his plans are for the heroine? Are there only three primary colors, or are there others? Because I have read a lot of harem genres, I personally hope that some of the charming characters in the original novels can be included [shy] or some original characters can be written. Regarding Kyrenu, I think some book friends like it, and some book friends dislike it, but based on the progress I am reading now , I personally think it's acceptable. After all, the male protagonist is a ray of light in her despair, and she also vows to become the male protagonist's sword (somewhat similar to a shield hero). Later on, let the male protagonist take her back to the tribe to untie her knot. Of course, it's just my personal suggestion [laughing]. In short, I haven't seen such an eye-catching fanfic on Tomato for a long time. I hope the author can talk about the arrangements for the heroine after seeing it [Blow kiss]

After reading Chapter 25, I would like to make some small suggestions. If the author just likes to write casually, there is no need to read it. First of all, I have to say that this is a very thoughtful book, and it's obvious at chapter 25. I also like it very much (I've read the anime and the original book). Let's reduce the number of first-person perspectives. Most people's reading habits are actually third-person. Frequent first-person perspective really creates a strong sense of tearing. I basically skim it or skip to the next chapter as soon as I see the first-person perspective. In fact, most of the first-person perspectives that occasionally appear can be used to psychologically describe the word "I". In actual testing, it does not affect reading and makes it more enjoyable. Then it's gone for the time being. I'll keep reading if I have any ideas. To put it another way, this is not to teach the author how to write a book, but to give suggestions for a book that I find interesting as an online article author with a jobless hobby.

There is still room for improvement. First-person light novels are difficult to master. The author tries to change the perspective as little as possible. In jobless reincarnations, it is usually described from the perspective of the protagonist. It may only take dozens of chapters to have an important character perspective that brings the plot closer. It is recommended that the author should be more careful to depict the inner changes of the protagonist and the details of his behavior...

It can be seen that the author is really attentive and writes well.

The descriptions are very delicate in all aspects, and it can be seen that the author is serious about this book. I have just read the end of the third volume, and also read the miscellaneous talks at the end of the volume. The author thought a lot but was afraid that the plot would be delayed and the reader's perception would be worse, so many small details were removed (the protagonist has a scar behind his ear, the water god's background is stacked), but I feel good about it. In the end, if you haven't read Jobless, you may still be a little bit behind it, but the author has also interspersed a lot of background into the plot. If you look carefully, I guess it won't be a big problem.

It is one of the two best books I have read for non-vocational college students, and it is barely comparable to The Succubus Sword God next door. Many of the characters and background settings in the book are meticulous, and the original work is restored instead of just the animation. It can be said that the author has carefully prepared it, and it is really a masterpiece for readers who like non-professional college students.

It's a good book. The protagonist is so strong that he feels like a rural person but has no IQ and relies on his recklessness. But it's not bad. I hope the author can collect more female protagonists, such as Demon Eye, Kirianu, etc. I'll give you five stars when I collect it [sneaky laugh][sneaky smile][sneaky smile]

After surviving the author's mild illness and poor writing skills in emotional dramas (which are inevitable for new authors), it can be seen that the author is getting better and better at writing, and his writing style and plot control have become more proficient and stable.

The author's writing is very good. I personally feel that it is quite high among the no-job reincarnation fans. It would be better if it were faster, but if the quality is not up to par, it would be better to just update it once. Don't delete the chapter if you're criticized. Just change the writing later. I hope this book will continue to be good and will not be targeted by Shen He, causing the author to open a new book

I quite like it. It has changed some things that should be changed. The writing, story, and the character of the protagonist are very suitable to my liking. Unfortunately, the number of readers of the book is a bit low. In my eyes, this should be a hit for me. Finally, cheers to the author!

Highly productive, and the content quality is stable, which is rare. I just like big cars like Cyrenus

After seeing that this book had been restored and updated, I just started reading it from the beginning. As I looked at it, I found that I had not commented yet, and I had almost forgotten the previous plot. I am currently at chapter 173. Apart from not changing the plot, there are no shortcomings. The fight against the Dragon God was a bit toxic, so I deducted one star. The rational protagonist created in the early stage turned into a super hero. I admit that it was the anger after the companion was attacked, but this does not mean that it should be so anti-character. The protagonist's physique is obviously a forbidden demon, and it was also clearly mentioned before that the fight is It's useless to be angry, but why is it still affected when I fight the Dragon God? I changed the settings and lost another star. This is the second time I've changed my comment. Why is it that after hearing that Kirianu was insulted, the protagonist can suppress the desire to attack with the so-called last trace of reason? Why can't it be done when fighting the Dragon God? So minus one star

I think it's okay, it's quite entertaining, but there are still some minor flaws. Sometimes sentences are repeated, but not too much. The biggest flaws are that sometimes the protagonist is an outsider. Don't forget that the Dragon God has not had Rudy in countless reincarnations, and Rudy is also an outsider.

Pros: It looks good, the emotional part is well written, there are no poisonous points, and the writing style is also good. It feels very comfortable to read, which is something I rarely feel like among so many novels I have read on Tomato. Disadvantages: One update a day is not enough to watch [almost crying] Excellent product, good looking, love to watch

It has delicate and slightly immature emotions, a little impulsive, and a plot that doesn't think about the overall situation. It also adds its own understanding of the world and its unique power development concept. The whole story is already very good. No OOC, no obvious poisonous points. It's a rare companion

Is there a lot missing in the transfer chapter? Why do I feel like I picked a lot of chapters and transferred them in a confused way? How did I meet Hilfie and the conversation with the God of Man? I feel like I missed a lot of chapters. The novel is still a good novel. I hope the author will continue writing. Come on, I hope the author will reply after reading it!

Skip the setting and writing style of Wenqing in the early stage, the writing style and story will become better and better in the later stage You can clearly feel the growth of the author, come on My suggestion is to jump directly to more than 30 pictures, then this is a five-star work

The writing is pretty good, but it's in the first person. If you can't accept it, don't judge it. I couldn't accept it at first, but after reading 10 chapters, I slowly accepted it. The author's writing is pretty good.

Daily life is indeed good, but the first part is basically based on daily life. I think emotional drama is indispensable when writing about daily life, and it can increase emotional drama. I haven't seen the battle scenes yet, but the daily scenes are pretty good.

For me, it's good to read. The first few chapters are not divided into sections and it's easy to get discouraged. The rest of the chapters are very well written. The relationships between the characters are well handled. The explanations of science and knowledge are also good. The author is really productive. One chapter is nearly 8,000 words. Come on [laughing]

I am really writing it seriously, but the description is too detailed. Some of the things that can be mentioned in one stroke are also detailed. It is not impossible to write about the protagonist's survival in the wilderness first. The worst thing is when I hear traces of other people's activities, my God, I keep analyzing and thinking. It is quite a scene of Xiao Huang in the hilarious movie when facing 1+1 and making calculations.

It's okay, four stars because sometimes there's a little too much nonsense. (It is also possible that the author coded too many words and was confused, resulting in repetition of words and semantics) In addition, some people have mentioned that there are many inner dramas. Personally, I feel that this is not a deduction but it is not a plus. The original Rudy has a lot of inner dramas. I also think Rudy is quite verbose, but it does not prevent it from being very interesting. As for the first person, this is just a small classification. Not all novels are in the third person, so this cannot be counted as a deduction.

I hope the author won't feel that the first-person perspective writing is not good because of being criticized. Your work is already top-notch on Tomato. Keep up the good work and we will always be watching you.