Strength**********

The protagonist is like the IF line imagined by Class D before they died. He is handsome, sunny, strong, reassuring, and reliable. He handles various conflicts perfectly, and ultimately leads everyone to overcome many difficulties and win.

There is one thing that is quite good. To be honest, I don't see many protagonists like this one with sunshine superpowers recently, but I quite like them. They have powerful abilities, but they don't make readers feel too pretentious or arrogant. They have a sunshine personality, which can make readers feel the feeling of sunshine. It makes their bodies warm and their spots are reduced a lot. It can be said to be some opinions or suggestions, that is, I hope to write more differences from the original work. Hehe, I am a little curious, who is the master of the protagonist? Or is there any prototype?

I would like to give the male protagonist a suggestion. Go to Notre Dame de Paris. In the transept that crosses the church and the lobby, there is a statue holding a child. Take her down and stand on it yourself [Like]

The character design of the main character in this book is quite good, and the characteristics of the character can be clearly understood at a glance. After reading most of it, I felt that the "master mode" has a bit too strong a presence, and it is a bit unbearable to super change the form in just one sentence (). I hope the author can continue to improve the personalities of each character in the future. The book is still very interesting, keep up the good work.

[Master] appears frequently in the article. As the protagonist's guide, he teaches the protagonist many principles and is also the source of the protagonist's strength. However, the author did not describe "Master" too much, but the article mentioned that "Master" can lift a tank, which is romantic, but the plot of the whole text is biased towards realism. Therefore, it can be imagined that the "Master" in the protagonist's mouth does not really exist. After the death of his parents, the protagonist is devastated. The "Master" and the various plots of "Master" and him are all imaginary. The purpose is to give himself a reason to become stronger. All the protagonist's abilities are exercised at home, but the protagonist's "subconscious mind" believes that they were taught by the "Master" in his imagination. (The author refers to Master Thailand Marumi, the above is purely unwarranted association)

[Smiling] So far, I think it's pretty good. What's good about it is that the protagonist handles interpersonal relationships in an orderly manner with her absolute strength and superb emotional intelligence. No matter who she's facing, her speech and communication are very smooth and smooth. Under the protagonist's sincere performance and occasional kindness, the thorny head of the drama has calmed down and the brain has grown. Even a certain Suzune who has a poisonous tongue and looks down on others has actually grown significantly. To sum up, (there is something about it, and it is currently the best in the fandom) By the way, is the author a girl? Her emotional descriptions are so delicate and silky.

This novel is awesome, I felt like I was watching a science fiction movie. But the undeniable fact is that this novel is really good. The character of the protagonist is also really good. [Like][Like][laugh]

Damn, the update is so fast O(≧口≦)O, this is a really outstanding article in practical teaching, especially the one about becoming friends with Brother Lu. I am really looking forward to the relationship between Brother Lu and Airi later. Is there a love line between Horikita and the protagonist? Others haven't noticed it yet, so they may have to wait for a long time. At first I thought it was an old book, the writing is so steady, I didn't expect to finish reading it.

Well, let's talk about the advantages first (what I also like to watch): the characters' emotions are very three-dimensional, the plot is very smooth, the logical chain is very complete, and the characters are not seriously OOC, only a small number of second creations that fit the setting, and the writing is also very good. Let's talk about the part that bothers me (of course many people should also like this place, I'm just reminding others who care about the place I care about): I saw the assistant part. This is a novel with a single female protagonist (well, at least for now, it is. I saw the part about Saori, and Saori and the original male protagonist are a couple, so it is certain at the moment). Well, it is not a classic cool novel. If you really mind, it has a tendency to give away the heroine. (Well, of course it is not to that extent. It's just that I saw a fan who liked her in the author's works before, so I can't accept it.)

First-person narration is rare in Tomato, and it is well written. The male protagonist is well portrayed, has his own characteristics, and is quite likable. The other characters are basically non-OOC. There are also other characters' perspectives that appear every few chapters, which are quite novel and eye-catching. Looking forward to the author's future performance, this should be the best practical fanfic I have ever seen. The last thing I want to ask is whether I can write about Hiyori Shiina in the back, I really like [Adoration]

Well, my review tentatively says that the score of this book should be between 7.2 And 8.0. Let me see it personally. The author's setting for the male protagonist is too perfect. If there is a problem, it can be found and corrected immediately. Too deliberate and perfect. It has the kind of anime perspective of the 1990s sword master coming down the mountain. But it was missing. The male protagonist's daily antics and inner growth after coming down from the mountain. If the author's writing style was better, this book could be written as a group portrait. The male protagonist, the butterfly, drives the development of the entire plot. If the male protagonist is invincible. Then it's best if his feelings are like those of Feng Baobao, who is smart and smart. Only in this way will it be as entertaining as watching anime. You can add a copy appropriately to become an exchange student, and enter the campus life of other animations for a month or two, and you can still live and grow like that. The hero's master can build a tank. Adding a slight time travel is no problem. Defects in the early stage lead to perfection in the later stage. This book has been written a lot. If the early stage is too perfect, there may be nothing to write about in the later stage. Of course, this is not absolute, it also depends on the individual's writing ability. I still want the author to write something that lasts a long time. This is a small piece of personal advice. I'd rather give it a five-star rating, I'll support it.

The senses are very good. This is a very good fan novel that I have read in the past few years. The male protagonist is very distinct and distinctive. But it seems that the progress is too fast? All in all, I give you five-star praise [Love][Love][Love]

Haokang, sincerity is a must-win, and nature overcomes all things. It seems that all the characters in this novel are not as cold and hostile as in the original work. It feels like they can fall in love with the protagonist, haha ​​(≧ω≦)

It pays attention to emotional changes and plot advancement, avoiding many poisonous points. It is thoughtful and beautiful.

The protagonist has a good personality and has made friends with Ayanokouji. Who is the heroine? If you are in love, your gender doesn't have to be too tight.

Practical teaching fan fiction is often blocked on Tomato. I guess some god reported it.

Why is this book gone?

The author's writing is very good. I think the male protagonist is very charming and charming [laughs]

The rhythm is very good, and the protagonist setting is interesting and strong, but there is obvious room for improvement. In other words, the characters in this novel are all growing up, so it is very comfortable to deal with it. I like that the initial settings are based on the original work, but the plot slowly improves by writing my own, and it feels like it has come alive. (Some novels like to study in depth based on the original work and then add characters, but without writing the plot, it is very fragmented and abrupt, which I personally don't like) It's good, but the previous There are a lot of "master" teachings in the articles. As a reader, I feel a little annoyed sometimes, but it can't be considered bad, because most of what the author writes is narration or the protagonist's psychological activities. He doesn't say much about how the "master" teaches. In the middle, he advises people to dream about immature love dreams. It has the awkward feeling of being a middle school student looking at Japan's youth, but overall it is still a very good article (based on the chapters I have read now). If you don't mind the first person, you can read it.

The writing from the first-person perspective is very interesting [like it] and the sense of immersion is good. The plot is interesting and comfortable. The male protagonist's dream of becoming a partner of justice is great, silly, and admirable, but he does have the ability to persevere. It should be the harem. Is the main palace Horikita or Setsuda? I can't tell this clearly, because both of them have more scenes than ordinary girls, but not more. As for the remaining Itayagi, Kamuro, Ichinose, Hasebe, Ibuki, Tachibana Akane, Asahina, and Oniryuin, I don't know. I hope the author can handle these emotions and the final ending better. The character's perspective monologue is very creative and thoughtful, good [like] Come on⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽⛽

This is really well written. I hope the updates won't be interrupted, and the updates must be completed! [Crying] But it's a bit boring now. I hope that in the second grade, there will be a yandere junior brother or junior sister who is a year or two younger than the protagonist and admires the protagonist and enters the first grade to duel. [Laugh]

Shijiao has only watched three seasons of the anime, but it doesn't seem to affect the viewing of this fanfic. I feel good about it so far. The male protagonist and Brother Lu are very interesting in how they grow up with each other. However, the relationship between the male protagonist and several female characters is almost uninteresting. The setting of the male protagonist is more suitable for the development of the harem, but the background setting of Shijiao feels like it can only lead to party fighting. If it is not handled well, it will feel like a lightning point. Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves? ? ?

Currently cwm, qd, this is one of the best fanfics that I have read. The writing is good, at least it doesn't make people uncomfortable. The plot is not completely based on the original, but the changes are quite good, especially the part about how to conquer Sudou. It is different from other fanfics in using violence [cool]

How can this be taken off the shelves...

There are only a few practical teaching articles that I can read. Many practical teaching articles are harem or mindless slaps in the face. I have always wanted to find a book that can walk side by side with Brother Lu. I finally found it today 555. Please be sure to write it down🥹❤️

It's quite interesting. The main character Ayanokouji Horikita is very emotional. It's just that the plot seems to be moving a little too fast

Personally, I think it's pretty good, and the writing is okay to read. I didn't give full marks because I was afraid that the author would run away that day (bushi), but fellow Tomato Practitioners die pretty quickly, so I hope the author can finish it.

This is the first time I have read about the possibility that Ayanokouji, an individual, can become a human being

It's amazing, it can be so smooth that all the poisonous spots in the early stage of practical teaching disappear, giving people a very comfortable feeling. The only thing that is illogical is that the male protagonist is too good. Even the reasons given before can hardly support the fact that the male protagonist is assigned to Class D.

Top of the line, currently giving a T0 rating in practical teaching novels, but it's a bit far away from the next-door cat station, Hikigaya.