The Great Jin Dynasty's Number One Fool: I Use Superpowers to See Through People's Hearts

Hello readers, this is the first time the author has written a book, and I am a noob in many places. Please forgive me if there are any mistakes. This book is modeled after the fictional history written during the Tang Dynasty. After all, the Tang Dynasty is too famous, and there are many things I don't understand, so I am afraid that writing them down will have a bad impact. Please bear with me, and if you can, please help me rate it. Because I have a job and writing is my hobby, I will post two chapters every day. I will try my best to keep writing. Once again, please forgive me. I wish all readers good luck and safety. Be more tolerant and leave a message if something is wrong. The author will definitely reply and correct it in time. Thanks again 🙏

The writing was okay, but Chapter 10 and Chapter 11 were a little bit toxic. I went to the kitchen with the protagonist to cook at the beginning. I wrote it in a hurry. Later, I went to Jiangnan to Blackwater Island and wrote more than 100 chapters. It was a bit procrastinating and could be streamlined. The final part of Blackwater Island was quite good, but the foreshadowing of the search for evidence was too long and redundant. Then there was a lot less sense of urgency in the section about slicing the dragon's veins. There was also a lot of repetitive words and some words in other places. The book is a bit long-winded, but the writing style is pretty good. Generally, historical novels are about repeated investigation of crimes and development of science and technology. This book has a bit of fantasy adventure, which is quite good. There is also a point where the prince clearly has a good relationship with the protagonist. In the middle, the protagonist shows that he will not help anyone, and then he accepts the emperor's grandson as his apprentice not long after. It looks very strange. Anyway, it is overall good. I haven't read hundreds of chapters in one novel in a long time. I just don't know how long it will take to finish it. I want to wait until it is finished and finish it in one go.

Yes, it's good. The new second prince is now at the end of the current situation where the other two princes are at odds with each other. Although according to the previous foreshadowing. The eldest prince will definitely win in the end, but it will be interesting to see what kind of plot there will be.

Good-looking, good, humorous and funny

Good-looking, deep, layer by layer

What about the system? Such a big system is missing?

It's really good. It's very beautiful. The author will continue to work hard and update it soon.

Very good, I like this type very much

A bit like a grandson-in-law

The front is okay, but I don't know how it will be at the back.