An extremely real rain of blood, the strange monster that devoured him in the "dream", the honorific name of the crow's servant, and the appearance of the mysterious girl, unfolded a lamentation song of God's weeping, tearing open the shabby wounds of the world, and witnessing the truth!
Reader comments
When I was in a book shortage, I was attracted by the title and cover of the book, and the introduction also really poked me. At present, most of the characters are quite three-dimensional and plump. Personally, I think the character Crow (should I say this?) Is very interesting. Most of the time, he is very serious in front of Shen Bai, even. . It is mature, but sometimes it makes people feel humorous and laughable. The prototype of the world view is also very good. When it is completed, it should be very grand (probably?). The plot advances quickly and naturally without delay. There is no simplification to make up the word count. Personally speaking, the viewing feeling is very good. Also, I am a little curious about whether Chen Baicrow's feathers grow directly from his body or are in his clothing when he is in human form. The picture is too beautiful to imagine, haha. I would also like to mention to the author here that there are too few punctuation marks in the book and there are many misuses of them. There are also problems with typos and inappropriate word order. If it can be improved, readers will have a better impression. Keep writing, author, and don't forget that you are still writing this book and waiting for updates. . .
When I was in a book shortage, I was attracted by the title and cover of the book, and the introduction also really poked me. At present, most of the characters are quite three-dimensional and plump. Personally, I think the character Crow (should I say this?) Is very interesting. Most of the time, he is very serious in front of Shen Bai, even. . It is mature, but sometimes it makes people feel humorous and laughable. The prototype of the world view is also very good. When it is completed, it should be very grand (probably?). The plot advances quickly and naturally without delay. There is no simplification to make up the word count. Personally speaking, the viewing feeling is very good. Also, I am a little curious about whether Chen Baicrow's feathers grow directly from his body or are in his clothing when he is in human form. The picture is too beautiful to imagine, haha. I would also like to mention to the author here that there are too few punctuation marks in the book and there are many misuses of them. There are also problems with typos and inappropriate word order. If it can be improved, readers will have a better impression. Keep writing, author, and don't forget that you are still writing this book and waiting for updates. . .
Very potential