[Traditional Immortal Cultivation] [No System] [Double Cultivation of Talisman and Puppet] [Act after making a decision]
Ye Qingping, a minor cultivator of the Three Spiritual Roots of Feng Lei Bing, was poisoned by cold poison. After ten years of body tempering, he refined it and revealed the physical talent of the Three Talents.
Starting with the ice stab technique, you can turn your hand and freeze it thousands of miles away!
Starting from the wind blade technique, the palms of my hands can be swept down by thousands of mountains!
Starting from the thunder summoning technique, one finger of thunder moves the sky!
He even started with talismans, forged the soul, condensed the talisman puppets, and finally formed a thousand-puppet formation!
"My dear, Ye Qingping, has some experience in the art of fighting."
"This fellow Taoist, we meet in the mountains and rivers, but I am unwilling to take action."
"Ye Zhenchuan's fighting skills are bottomless."
Ye Qingping shook her head and said: "This is not my intention..."
Reader comments
It's not bad, it's good among new authors, but I need to mention the updates, maybe increase it to three chapters a day! It would be good if it is not more stable, and I have wanted to read about his mutated wind and ice thunder spiritual root for a long time, but there has never been a similar novel. I found it recently. It is a good mortal novel and a small spiritual body has awakened. The protagonist's experience is also acceptable and not outrageous. It is okay. These three spiritual roots are the best to become a Talisman Master. After all, the special power is great and few people sell it. The earning power is not bad enough to meet the daily consumption of the protagonist, but he is not a rich man, and he is just richer than ordinary immortal cultivators.
The writing is quite stable. Still pretty good looking. Not too cool. Dong Jiawen worked hard at every step. There are also people and sophistication. It is said that immortal cultivators, even if they are immortals, still treat each other with courtesy. This is very well written. I hope the author will speed up the update.
I have read almost 60 chapters. The settings in all aspects are relatively reasonable and the prices are self-contained. It is a mortal novel. As someone who has read mortal novels for about 10 years, I am very optimistic about this book. So far, the writing has been very stable.
Apart from this book in Tomato 🍅, I feel that only "The Immortal Path of Alchemy" can be regarded as the same level of mortal flow as this one, and in terms of details, I feel that the details of this book can be better. However, I haven't read many chapters yet, so I can't make a complete conclusion that it can remain as stable as the Immortal Path of Alchemy. I will review it later.
I hope it can continue to be so stable. My best feeling is that the halo of the protagonist is not obvious, which makes me feel very involved in reading. I hope the author can work hard. Also, the price of goods must not collapse, as well as the combat power and the level of each realm. Writing about mortals is not like a cool novel. Stability in these is very important. But to be able to write it like this, I guess the author himself knew it well.
Come on
I have caught up with the latest chapter 228, and I feel that it is not as comfortable as before since there were more than 100 pictures. Although it is still reasonable, it does not feel so "detailed".
Here I will give you some examples that are not harmful. Because my expectations were too high before, I felt a little uncomfortable.
First, build the foundation. With the protagonist's qualifications and some secret methods to assist in foundation building, taking one foundation-building pill is enough, but you still have to eat two. Although it increases your mana, it is not necessary. Otherwise, even the protagonist's excellent qualifications will not be able to build the foundation, and most of his friends will fail.
Furthermore, there are more opportunities and coincidences than in the previous game, and the protagonist's halo is a bit heavier. Although the Qingyun Spirit Fox patch has been applied, it is still too much. In the early stage, the protagonist gave up on the injured ice bear that lost 30% of its strength in the late stage of Qi training, and went to find prey with suitable attributes. This seems more natural.
Although the author has slowed down the pace after foundation building, I think it is still a bit faster. Currently, after seeing the travel experience, I feel bad and a bit watered down. It is recommended that there be another purposeful branch line or it is better to go into retreat directly.
Finally, there are the prices, which are generally reasonable, but feel a bit inflated.
The main character is unreasonably bloated and slightly mediocre, and I'd rather choose the latter. . . .
It's okay, but why is the protagonist in the sect just like a casual cultivator? He even has to find people from other families to refine weapons. Isn't it available in the sect? There are only some first-level materials that the sect must have, but they are all obtained from outside.
Why does the protagonist have so many coincidences? He saves beauties every day, meets acquaintances when traveling, and then saves the girl from the chamber of commerce. Do you know how small the probability is? Then there are always robbers on the road. I saw four or five robbers in a row. They always use this kind of thing to advance the plot.
[Chigua] Generally speaking, the writing is pretty good. It would be great if a new author can reach this level.
Although it is a bit bland, there is nothing sinister about it. Looking at it further, although the plot is starting to become a bit cliché, you can still see progress. The outline is not very good, which is a common problem for new authors.
It's been a long time since I've seen such an excellent traditional immortality novel. The overall plot of the article is not cliche and rigid, but very attractive. The protagonist's three views are decisive and decisive, showing readers a complete and real world of immortality. The most important thing is that the author does not only show the cruelty of immortality like other immortality novels, but has emotions. The proportion and connection between the main plot and daily life are well controlled. I hope the author can diligently add more.
A very good article on cultivating immortals. The opening of the eighth level of Qi Refining with Ice Wind Thunder Spirit Root is eye-catching. The writing style is also good, there are no poisonous points, and the data is not messy, but it seems that there are not many people reading it? Come on, author, the article is good, gold will always shine, keep up the steady updating and quality, and the data will definitely come up.
It's not bad, at least it's not the boring routines of genius or waste systems. It has its own ideas, but the description of the battle is too detailed. I still want to skip it and don't want to waste my brain [face covering]
The follow-up writing is not very good. I guess I have run out of ideas. The previous writing was good.
It's good to read. I've read a lot of system-flowing articles. This kind of thing is quite good. [Thoughts]
It is a very good book, with smooth logic, and the plot design is basically non-toxic and very immersive. Especially the protagonist comes from a large sect with a long heritage, and the disciples of the sect behave like ancient monks. It is very comfortable to read.
Personally, I think it's okay. It's a truly upright sect. It's not some peddler who claims to be upright but does evil things. The elders and disciples of the sect are also normal people and won't embarrass others for no reason. The protagonist is also smart and cautious, and is not portrayed as if the other characters are supporting roles. Apart from the protagonist, the other characters are also out-and-out geniuses, and they are not presented to the protagonist with achievements.
Great writing, cheers author
It looks pretty good
Among the traditional cultivators of Tomato, it is quite interesting. Why isn't it popular?
The reasonable plot that is neither hasty nor slow, and the protagonist's cautious yet courageous character are exactly what I want to read. I'm lucky to have come across this book. Good luck to the author!
The writing is quite good. It is not an invincible pretentious novice novel, nor is it a useless counterattack novel. Book lovers who like to read fantasy and immortality novels and want to change their tastes can give it a try.
Hao Chi😋, but are there any boundaries or something like that?
It looks good, the settings are rigorous and quite creative.
Not poisonous, nice looking
Relatively compact and eye-catching!
Very solid and detailed writing.
Resurrection, my author [crying]
You can see, there are no logical problems at the moment
This book is not bad
Personally I think it's good,
Click [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]!
Very good, but not enough
It's pretty good-looking, very stable, five stars for encouragement.
It's still good. It's much better than many that advertise high scores. Why is the rating so low?
Is anyone maliciously posting bad reviews? Then I'll give it 5 stars.
It's a very good book, with a compact plot, reasonable logic, and no major flaws. I recommend it! !
It's very good, the plot is well detailed, the prices are reasonable, and it's very comfortable to watch.
A very good book, the logic is clear and there are no loopholes
It's not bad, it's good among new authors, but I need to mention the updates, maybe increase it to three chapters a day! It would be good if it is not more stable, and I have wanted to read about his mutated wind and ice thunder spiritual root for a long time, but there has never been a similar novel. I found it recently. It is a good mortal novel and a small spiritual body has awakened. The protagonist's experience is also acceptable and not outrageous. It is okay. These three spiritual roots are the best to become a Talisman Master. After all, the special power is great and few people sell it. The earning power is not bad enough to meet the daily consumption of the protagonist, but he is not a rich man, and he is just richer than ordinary immortal cultivators.
The writing is quite stable. Still pretty good looking. Not too cool. Dong Jiawen worked hard at every step. There are also people and sophistication. It is said that immortal cultivators, even if they are immortals, still treat each other with courtesy. This is very well written. I hope the author will speed up the update.
I have read almost 60 chapters. The settings in all aspects are relatively reasonable and the prices are self-contained. It is a mortal novel. As someone who has read mortal novels for about 10 years, I am very optimistic about this book. So far, the writing has been very stable. Apart from this book in Tomato 🍅, I feel that only "The Immortal Path of Alchemy" can be regarded as the same level of mortal flow as this one, and in terms of details, I feel that the details of this book can be better. However, I haven't read many chapters yet, so I can't make a complete conclusion that it can remain as stable as the Immortal Path of Alchemy. I will review it later. I hope it can continue to be so stable. My best feeling is that the halo of the protagonist is not obvious, which makes me feel very involved in reading. I hope the author can work hard. Also, the price of goods must not collapse, as well as the combat power and the level of each realm. Writing about mortals is not like a cool novel. Stability in these is very important. But to be able to write it like this, I guess the author himself knew it well. Come on I have caught up with the latest chapter 228, and I feel that it is not as comfortable as before since there were more than 100 pictures. Although it is still reasonable, it does not feel so "detailed". Here I will give you some examples that are not harmful. Because my expectations were too high before, I felt a little uncomfortable. First, build the foundation. With the protagonist's qualifications and some secret methods to assist in foundation building, taking one foundation-building pill is enough, but you still have to eat two. Although it increases your mana, it is not necessary. Otherwise, even the protagonist's excellent qualifications will not be able to build the foundation, and most of his friends will fail. Furthermore, there are more opportunities and coincidences than in the previous game, and the protagonist's halo is a bit heavier. Although the Qingyun Spirit Fox patch has been applied, it is still too much. In the early stage, the protagonist gave up on the injured ice bear that lost 30% of its strength in the late stage of Qi training, and went to find prey with suitable attributes. This seems more natural. Although the author has slowed down the pace after foundation building, I think it is still a bit faster. Currently, after seeing the travel experience, I feel bad and a bit watered down. It is recommended that there be another purposeful branch line or it is better to go into retreat directly. Finally, there are the prices, which are generally reasonable, but feel a bit inflated. The main character is unreasonably bloated and slightly mediocre, and I'd rather choose the latter. . . .
It's okay, but why is the protagonist in the sect just like a casual cultivator? He even has to find people from other families to refine weapons. Isn't it available in the sect? There are only some first-level materials that the sect must have, but they are all obtained from outside. Why does the protagonist have so many coincidences? He saves beauties every day, meets acquaintances when traveling, and then saves the girl from the chamber of commerce. Do you know how small the probability is? Then there are always robbers on the road. I saw four or five robbers in a row. They always use this kind of thing to advance the plot.
[Chigua] Generally speaking, the writing is pretty good. It would be great if a new author can reach this level. Although it is a bit bland, there is nothing sinister about it. Looking at it further, although the plot is starting to become a bit cliché, you can still see progress. The outline is not very good, which is a common problem for new authors.
It's been a long time since I've seen such an excellent traditional immortality novel. The overall plot of the article is not cliche and rigid, but very attractive. The protagonist's three views are decisive and decisive, showing readers a complete and real world of immortality. The most important thing is that the author does not only show the cruelty of immortality like other immortality novels, but has emotions. The proportion and connection between the main plot and daily life are well controlled. I hope the author can diligently add more.
A very good article on cultivating immortals. The opening of the eighth level of Qi Refining with Ice Wind Thunder Spirit Root is eye-catching. The writing style is also good, there are no poisonous points, and the data is not messy, but it seems that there are not many people reading it? Come on, author, the article is good, gold will always shine, keep up the steady updating and quality, and the data will definitely come up.
It's not bad, at least it's not the boring routines of genius or waste systems. It has its own ideas, but the description of the battle is too detailed. I still want to skip it and don't want to waste my brain [face covering] The follow-up writing is not very good. I guess I have run out of ideas. The previous writing was good.
It's good to read. I've read a lot of system-flowing articles. This kind of thing is quite good. [Thoughts]
It is a very good book, with smooth logic, and the plot design is basically non-toxic and very immersive. Especially the protagonist comes from a large sect with a long heritage, and the disciples of the sect behave like ancient monks. It is very comfortable to read.
Personally, I think it's okay. It's a truly upright sect. It's not some peddler who claims to be upright but does evil things. The elders and disciples of the sect are also normal people and won't embarrass others for no reason. The protagonist is also smart and cautious, and is not portrayed as if the other characters are supporting roles. Apart from the protagonist, the other characters are also out-and-out geniuses, and they are not presented to the protagonist with achievements.
Great writing, cheers author
It looks pretty good
Among the traditional cultivators of Tomato, it is quite interesting. Why isn't it popular?
The reasonable plot that is neither hasty nor slow, and the protagonist's cautious yet courageous character are exactly what I want to read. I'm lucky to have come across this book. Good luck to the author!
The writing is quite good. It is not an invincible pretentious novice novel, nor is it a useless counterattack novel. Book lovers who like to read fantasy and immortality novels and want to change their tastes can give it a try.
Hao Chi😋, but are there any boundaries or something like that?
It looks good, the settings are rigorous and quite creative.
Not poisonous, nice looking
Relatively compact and eye-catching!
Very solid and detailed writing.
Resurrection, my author [crying]
You can see, there are no logical problems at the moment This book is not bad
Personally I think it's good, Click [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]!
Very good, but not enough
It's pretty good-looking, very stable, five stars for encouragement.
It's still good. It's much better than many that advertise high scores. Why is the rating so low? Is anyone maliciously posting bad reviews? Then I'll give it 5 stars.
It's a very good book, with a compact plot, reasonable logic, and no major flaws. I recommend it! !
It's very good, the plot is well detailed, the prices are reasonable, and it's very comfortable to watch.
A very good book, the logic is clear and there are no loopholes