Bursting in Tears: Bai Yueguang Ran Away After She Gained a Lot of Favor.

At present, the look and feel is good, and there are no shortcomings in the character creation and language dialogue. The only thing I am more worried about is whether the characters' emotions towards the heroine can be grasped in the later worlds. In other words, the unit length is the main one, and each world is an independent story. From now on, the plot starts to drag on. I have to write several chapters for one thing, and I have traveled to the comic book world. To have a complete world view, I still have to make a reincarnation.

After reading the length of One Piece, the writing is actually average, but the plot is self-consistent, the characters are relatively three-dimensional, the heroine's task is completed very well, Yi Nanping is saved, the heroine does not use cheats, exchanges injuries for injuries, and trades lives for lives, which is very courageous. I really like the One Piece anime. The characters in this book are not particularly strange. I have a strong sense of immersion. The author's original plot is also OK and the connection is very good. But the pace is fast, the details are few, the story is relatively complete, but there is not much that can be expanded, and the world view is weak. Overall, recommended to watch.

It's very interesting. I'm really looking forward to the Naruto interface in the second world. Naruto turns black. Neji doesn't know if he will regret it. He just loves to watch this kind of regretful, heart-wrenching and helpless moment hahahahaha

The beautiful and kind-hearted Yunqing [acting school] posted a group of knives online. Don't miss it if you pass by. Daodao will make you healthier physically and mentally, and your ability to withstand stress will be enhanced. Warmth and love accompany you every day, and laughter is in your ears. Walking in the world is like the sun, rewriting the chapters of characters, having entered the situation and observing the whole scene, and disappearing and disappearing. Explore the method of rebirth of the dead, just to recreate that light. It is said that after Yun Qing escapes, if she goes back later or is found by everyone, the scene will definitely be very interesting [Bad thoughts +1]

After reading a few chapters, I feel pretty good. I would like to make a few suggestions: The first is that Bai Yueguang's relationship does not need to be limited to the relationship between men and women, and Bai Yueguang can have many identities; the second is to appropriately increase the protagonist's combat power, and the impression will be much better; the third is to arrange the protagonist's posthumous affairs. Jie Jie Jie Jie I have begun to look forward to delicious little pearls... (If you think what I said is wrong, then I am wrong) [Salute][Salute]

I watched One Piece a long time ago, and the subsequent plot seems to be Drum Island (it should be called this, I just remember Chopper appearing) Alabasta (defeating the sand crocodile, Robin appearing) Sky Island (I skipped here to see the key plot clearly) Water City and Judiciary Island (Robin and Franky officially boarded the ship, and then the story of Moonlight Moria (Brooke boarding the ship) All the people were gathered in the early stage, and then the Shampoo Islands were filmed. In fact, I really want to see all the members single arrows and become all white moonlight [send my heart] [send my heart]

The first world is very beautiful. I especially like to see Yun Qing integrate into the adventures of the protagonist group. The characters are very full, full of personality, and very three-dimensional. And I like the characters of the second world very much. The first part is very good, but the second part is a bit off. The third world feels like it's a knife for the sake of the knife. It has many clones, each one dying for death, and going offline in order to get offline quickly. Instead, it is not as three-dimensional as before. I hope the world won't do this again in the future. The 4th world is the one-person world I'm looking forward to. I haven't started watching it yet. I hope it won't be as bad as the 3rd world again. [Sending my heart] I would like to add that the third Demon Slayer: Demon Slayer World, I was really looking forward to it, but the way it turned out was really, really disappointing, and I didn't even want to read it. I hope the fourth world can be written well

It's quite interesting. The protagonist is a boy who changes into a girl (the setting is very light and not obvious. The writing should have been changed a bit) Overall, it's very good. I'm always on the road to being stabbed. I'm not abusing for the sake of abuse, but because of some things and the person who was stabbed took a different path. The pirate world is the best partner and white moonlight, the Naruto world is the white moonlight that you want to catch but cannot get, and the alien world is also the white moonlight (the pirate group and the Naruto world travel across the world to rob people) The movie viewing body is a bit too long-winded. People from two worlds watch movies in other worlds with heroines. They are anxious in front of the fortune-telling ball, and then they always feel sorry for the heroine. There are too many such plots, and the movie viewing body is skipped. I'm not very interested in the heroine setting of Demon Slayer World, I haven't watched it👀 I've read quite a few comics, and I really like this one. I think its flaws outweigh its flaws, and it's a very interesting book.

I have been following this book from more than 60 chapters to now. In my opinion, the subject matter is very good, and the character of the protagonist is also very three-dimensional and distinct. He is indeed gentle Bai Yueguang. The plot design is quite reasonable. Most of the characters have no OOC, and the plot progress is well controlled. It is slow-paced, so it is relatively long. The characters shown by the protagonists of the two planes are slightly different. The protagonist of the first plane has weaker abilities and is usually protected behind him. The protagonist in the second plane has the ability to protect himself. He is very powerful and belongs to the gentle and powerful Bai Yueguang.

Ok, this book, from 2013 to now, is probably one of the few that I have read normally. I was surprised. Many books were very exciting at first and were good in the middle, but the end made it difficult for me to continue reading because I have read too many of the same books. Those books either collapsed in the later stage, or they were dug into a pile without filling or they no longer have the writing power, so I have not finished it. This book, I can only say, is really good. , The subject matter is quite unique, it doesn't feel like an assembly line, the author has really put in the effort, and I shed a lot of tears after staying up all night. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit too hasty, but it is very good, because if it continues, it is easy for people to feel fatigued by similar content. It is the only book that has been reviewed so far. It is really good. Coming from someone who has stayed up all night many times, I highly recommend it! ! !

I am very optimistic about this book. It is one of the best in this genre. It respects the original work and pays the price for changing the fate. The portrayal of the attitude of the dying person and the inadvertent revelation of the future whet the appetite of readers. The most satisfying thing is the atmosphere. It really has the friendly atmosphere of the original work. It fits well. It reminds me of when I first read the original work. I didn't want many books with the same theme to be full of strong industrial female characters. They just copied the blackened male mainstream of the fast-moving novel and put a layer of anime skin on it. Reading this book really makes people twist. Come on, update. I want to see everyone's regrets. I can't imagine how delicious it tastes. (Hey, this is it, this is it, this is what I want to see. Jpg.)

It's so beautiful. I just like this kind of fragrant knife. Hehe. It is really possible to watch movies at the moment of death, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha (Samsung) There is a point. In Chapter 4, the protagonist talks about being a man. Well, is it a man wearing a woman? Many people are surprised by this. If so, I hope the author's introduction will be marked. If not, I hope the wording will be changed. I'm really shocked. Of course, be aesthetics is still great [like] Second change, the author seems to have changed it

It looks good, and the most important thing is that the characters are in line with the original setting and not too OOC, and the character of the protagonist is quite likable and has fun-loving attributes without making people feel too cold and heartless.

A very amazing setting, which perfectly combines the advantages of Daoziwen and Leziwen. Those who like to watch the fun can enjoy it, and those who like to eat the knife can eat the knife. And because of the foundation of Leziwen + the bones of Daoziwen, it will not turn into an abusive main article. The author's writing style has also steadily improved. It was a bit green at the beginning, but it became more and more mature later on, and the sense of the plot became better and better. Personally speaking, the impression of Demon Slayer's chapter is obviously higher than that of the previous two chapters. Unfortunately, the results are not very good. I think the main reason is that Demon Slayer is relatively unpopular. There is currently no meal replacement in this genre. I hope the author will update it soon.

It's a great novel. The characters in each world are well described. There is fun and knives in it, but I have to say that the author's writing style is really great, and he doesn't hold back at all when it comes to knives. The characters are well developed, the plot is rich, and the characters are distinct. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into this aspect, but the stamina seems to be a bit small. Well, generally speaking, the characters in the three worlds of Naruto, Pirates and Demon Slayer are richer. I personally don't think the content of one person is very good (maybe the author doesn't know how to continue it) At the end, the ending was left open. The author also said that the continuation may be a new pit, not a new book, and I am looking forward to it. But I wonder if they will enter her world again, it's worth thinking about🤔 No, no, brothers, please read this novel. This novel is extremely sweet and ruthless. The long comment above was posted by my brother without permission. It's a great novel, very sweet, and the experiences in each world are rich and interesting. Come read it.

It's great to watch, but the ending is a bit unsatisfactory, because I want to see the heroine being locked up in a small dark room, or those few competing for favor in front of the heroine. If the author writes like this, it will definitely get a lot more traffic. To be honest, what we want to see is the entanglement of love and hate. Many people watched the first two worlds because they wanted to see Shura Field. Unfortunately, the characters written in Demon Slayer are not very deep and a bit messy. I want to see the small dark room. Or the heroine was caught by them, but the author just didn't write it. . . How abominable. I'm going to write a fanfic of a fanfic I'm not very satisfied with this ending. I wanted to see Naruto turn black and fight for his love like crazy, and I wanted to see Luffy turn black and change his face to express his love for the heroine. Instead, the female group was written and the men's Shura field was not written. It's a pity. It's really super invincible. It's a pity. My Luffy, my Naruto, my Sasuke, my Zoro, and Garp's affection for each other. Sad. . . The writing about Demon Slayer was really scattered, and there wasn't enough emotion, so the traffic dropped. It might have been better if it was connected to one person at the time, but in the end, it ended up being connected to Demon Slayer, and there wasn't much of a relationship line or a career line. It's a pity. Does anyone understand my desire to see the Shura Field?

It's a very good novel. The plot and text are exquisite. The pirate chapter is quite satisfactory. In the Naruto chapter, although there are some bugs and contradictions in the settings, the plot is definitely delicate and exciting. The author's routines in the Naruto chapter are novel and make people guess the follow-up. The Naruto chapter is tear-jerking and very interesting. I just hope that the author can write about the world that the previous protagonist has experienced when he is older. How can I put it, the more I write this novel, the more I feel the author's weakness in writing and details. From the well-written Pirates chapter, to the Naruto chapter which I think is the best, to the okay Demon Slayer chapter, to the completely collapsed Under One Man chapter, the Under One Man chapter has many logical loopholes. Because of the intervention of Naruto and One Piece World, the combat power is not good. The most important thing is that the one-man chapter is very stiff, just for the sake of the knife, without any tears, unlike the previous worlds. The idea of Pirates and Naruto traveling to a one-person world is good, but the writing style is not perfect. It can be seen that the author is writing well, but there are big loopholes in the logic. The first two chapters are very well written. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

How to put it this way, I just read the pirate chapter of this book, and I feel that it could be more detailed. For example, let the protagonist go to the navy headquarters with Caputo to form a bond when he was young, and he met Akainu and became familiar with Akainu. When he was older, he bumped fists with Akainu and said with a smile that Akainu must be firm in his justice and go forward courageously. No matter who blocks his path, he must go on and then die at the hands of Akainu. In the end, Akainu, holding the guilt of killing the protagonist or other emotions, looked at the world again and decided that it would be more interesting to go against him.

It's pretty good. I hope the chapter names of One Piece will be marked in the future. I'll wait and see!

Not bad, worth watching. I've watched One Piece and Naruto, so I think the first two worlds are okay. I haven't watched Demon Slayer and Ichibo, but I've finished watching it. It did become a bit long-winded in the later period, and it was obvious that fewer people were watching it. The author still can't beat the late game, he is a strong hero in the early game. But overall there's nothing toxic about it, and it's worth a look.

The author has great knife skills! The first two worlds are wonderful! Demon Slayer World may not have as much feeling as the previous two worlds due to the multiple character descriptions. But it still looks good. Looking forward to the author updating soon! ! !

It's beautiful, the emotions are delicate, the writing is sincere, and I was moved.

It looks good. The protagonist is Bai Yueguang. You give her the feeling of being at home and she hands you a big knife. She looks a bit looking forward to Yun Qing being caught.

Apart from Demon Slayer and Movie Watching, everything else is pretty good.

I haven't watched Demon Slayer, but I watched Pirates and Naruto a long time ago. Pirates saw Sanji's fiancee, and Naruto saw Madara's reincarnation. I can't remember a lot of the plot, so I can't tell if there are bugs or OOCs, so overall it looks okay. I like Pirates and look forward to the fourth world. I hope it's something I've watched.

The author's previous work on One Piece was quite good, but the Naruto timeline was not fully understood, and some character settings were made to stand out for the sake of prominence, which is far from the original work. But it's just for fun, so it's not a big problem. I like the author's writing style very much, and the main character is very unique, and I am very happy to watch it.

It is recommended to start when you see one person Personally, I feel that the later plot is not as good as the previous one.

The Pirates chapter is good, but not very complete. The Naruto chapter seems to be poorly written so far... But overall it's great.

Jujuju is beautiful, but it's a pity that he's still a little baby [crying] [crying]

Very good, the language is very smooth, the logic is also very good, and... Online update reminder [Chigua]