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286,000 Words, 88 chapters, an average of 3,250 words per chapter, and the actual length of a chapter is 3,000 to 4,000 words, and the writing style is always improving. Even if there are references, it is still very interesting. Come on!

Give yourself a five-star to encourage yourself, hey hey hey [eat melon], and then work hard to code [currently working on the manuscript] [currently working on the manuscript] The front is a bit unsightly, there are too many similarities, and I really don't have time to revise 8,000 words a day. I hope you can take a look at the back. I followed my own ideas completely! It will be more comfortable! Trust me!

That's a bit too modest. The average quality of Tomato's novels is not high. Yours is definitely above passing grade. In other words, you can read it slowly without getting bored, which is good. The author said that the plot was borrowed from the classic, so it is naturally good-looking. Moreover, the borrowed parts are written very quickly and the rhythm is very good, followed by the original plot. After all, the time and space system can do so much. I feel very enthusiastic and optimistic. The rest is all original. I really like the plot. He is a very gentle author.

Come on, come on, as a reader, there is no problem with the logic. It smells a little like an abandoned house, but I can accept it. The pace is a bit slow, but the character design still stands.

When I clicked in, I saw 100 chapters. I thought for a moment that it was quite short, and then I saw the number of words... Firstly, it was 100 chapters, and secondly, it was 300,000 words... Then let's get down to the serious review. Author, you can write one chapter shorter and then add a few more chapters, because the emotional core of the same chapter should not change. For example, this chapter is for MVP settlement. This does not mean that it cannot be written, but it means that there should not be too many daily parts. If you really don't know how to write, just cut off this chapter and start a new one. At most, you can just think of another title.

It can be seen that he is a newcomer. The first few chapters are difficult to follow, but it gets much better in the later chapters. It's also a good idea to use this book as a writing practice. There really needs to be an outline. At least clarify the direction of the main line. Without a plan, it will easily collapse. My suggestion is: first outline the necessary main plot, and then intersperse other plots that come to mind between the main plots. Every time you think of a new idea, you can write it in the outline, and then consider where to write it. In this way, a usable outline can be gradually produced. Anyway, cheers for the author

The writing is a bit greener than Laoman's, but the author is a novice, and Xiao Luo is already a writing veteran. The author's writing is getting better and better in the current chapters, come on! I sincerely wish the author can write better and have more and more fans.

Well, it's a very old-fashioned plot, and it's like this... Brother → Mahou Shaju → Retirement/leave + XX reason → Protect sister → Win the resurrection match → Drop vest → [laughing], sister → Mahou Shaju, brother → Sister → [laughing], old friend → [laughing], villain (Tiantiantian Hell Kingdom). Anyway, whoever writes well will look good, and our author is already very good as a newcomer (hi)

The writer did a great job, keep up the good work! [Blowing kiss]

The author writes well. Mainly because it updates quickly. Loved by Kyubey. /★∩‿‿∩★\/★∩‿‿∩★\/★∩‿‿∩★\/★∩‿‿∩★\ The routine is too similar to the former. Now, I will give you the correct comment.

Not bad, the rhythm is well controlled and not too draggy ----Beets

Overall, it's relatively light and encouraging. 👍Laoman himself crashed next door. I hope more and more people will understand Laoman with their heart.

As a new author, it is still very good. In the early stage, the smell of prison is very strong, but it gets better later. The pace is too fast. The trouble caused by the witch that appeared when the protagonist killed the first king is solved in one chapter. There is no reaction time at all. I can only say that it is too fast. In addition, the early stage was really awkward. When I was watching it, I wanted to do something else after reading chapters 2 and 3. It was so awkward. Others are still okay, I wish the author will write better and better. Come on! [Praise]

Come on, author, seamlessly switch between girlish heart and passion. The character growth line is very exciting, with warm daily life and mysterious foreshadowing. The more you read, the more you get hooked! You won't lose money if you invest in the stock, magic girl themed fans rush to invest ~

Yes, this book is quite good. Since I approve it, it must be five stars!

It's pretty cool, come on!

I'm going crazy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! So pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The author can take the Lily route, and can also write the previous small foreshadowing of Shi Yu's parents, so that the parents are guarding this world in another world, and the virtual world is the center point.

Don't worry about anything else, just support the newcomers first The front looks fine, but the back gradually becomes unbearable.

It's very in line with my hobbies. The key is to recognize each other quickly enough and not keep your appetite up all the time, so you can post more posts later.

It's okay. Generally speaking, the back part looks better. The front part draws a little too much from it, but I'm a newcomer after all, so I can understand it.

🍍It gives you the sense of seeing a certain novel, but your progress is too fast [Thinking]

A rare good novel.

It's great, the settings are OK

Give a good review to encourage the author.

Big cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

The author writes very well⊙▽⊙

It can be red but not stone

It's okay. I see it's not poisonous now.

That Suifenhe City VB brother