Xuan Gu Fandazzling Fire

The character design of Xuan Gu is really realistic, and the relationship development with the heroine is very smooth! There is no such thing as falling in love at first sight, and Xuan Gu's character of not giving up trust easily and his self-interest are perfectly blended! ! Why did I meet Wuwu so early🥺I have to start catching up again [I'm about to cry]

I stayed up all night to read it, it was so good! I have never read Mortal, so I read it as a fairy tale. There is no awkward plot where the heroine pretends to surrender and then runs away. Sure enough, feeling sorry for someone is the highest level of love literature. I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very pure. If you like it, you like it and you can't help it. And after you make it clear, there is no bloody "she runs away and he chases" plot. It is very sweet and has a very sweet feeling. It is good-looking! There are two things that I don't like (both in the later stage): one is the apprenticeship, three apprentices, one male apprentice likes the female protagonist, and one female apprentice likes the male protagonist. To be honest, it's like a piece of shit. Although it didn't cause any trouble in the end, it's still quite annoying; the second one is that the female protagonist insists on returning to modern times, and then the male protagonist has been idle for seven thousand years. It's also a piece of shit. Apart from these two points, everything else is good.

It's a great setting. It's difficult for Xuan Gu to calm down. This time, I hope he can get over the male protagonist's cheating and being a child of fate, and he can once again fly across the stars and live freely in the world.

I fell in love with the anime after watching it! I was scratching my head and wanted to find some fan food to eat, but the old Ford sweet potato was full of bl ૮₍◞‸◟₎ა. Just when I was disappointed, my wife's article was like a ray of light for the dream girl! After reading the whole story, the writing style is guaranteed. Xuan Gu is not OOC at all. The portrayal of Ning Ning was also very careful. Except for the ending, which was a bit rushed, everything else was very good. I was particularly touched.

It looks great. The characters follow the anime and are not OOC at all. The content accurately captures the hearts of our dream girls. I really like the portrayal of the male and female protagonists. It is a fanfic worth ranking first.

Super well written! Xuan Gu is so dedicated, he even feels more dedicated than the heroine, I'm so touched... He is so calm and rational to the outside, but he unfolds his soul to Ning Ning so gently, and the love is so deep that he forms a soul contract... I feel particularly sorry for him to love someone so domineeringly and tenderly, the part about the space of consciousness is really touching... I still want to watch it after watching it [crying] [crying] [crying] Please start a new chapter, the story of Xuan Gu is so good!

The plot is very interesting and the heroine's character is very real. Keep up the good work!

I haven't finished the anime of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality yet. I just happened to see Xuan Gu. I was attracted by his personality charm. I felt that it was really a pity that he was gone. I wanted to come to Yangshizi to see if there were any articles by him. I happened to see the author's article. I personally think it was very well written. It did not make the heroine into a very powerful and awesome person or have system cheats. Yes, she feels like an ordinary little girl with her own kindness, sincerity and gentleness. Of course, she is not a blind Madonna. She and Xuan Gu have gone through many things together before they gradually trusted each other and came together. Xuan Gu's character has not changed much, but with the companionship of the heroine, it seems that he has regained a bit of the lively and wanton Xiao Zui before. In the end, it also made up for the regrets of the heroine's family. Han Laomo is still the son of destiny in that world, and Xuan Gu is no longer a stepping stone on the protagonist's growth path, but grows up with the heroine and blossoms along the way.

I beg the author to update the book again. We can eat Xuan Gu's food for a lifetime [crying] [crying] [crying] The writing is very beautiful, and the development of the emotional line is also very consistent with Xuan Gu's character, but it's just not good enough [crying] Please update Xuan Gu's new book [sending heartfelt thanks] Thank you to my dear author.

This is my first time reading a Mysterious Bones fanfic. To be honest, I have never read Mortals' Cultivation of Immortality. I browsed the homepage and came in to read it when I was interested. I also searched and learned about it. Since I haven't read it, I can't comment on it. I can only say that this book is more suitable for my taste. I like it🥰

The characters are not OC, the plot design is compact, and it looks very smooth. There are no surprises, the emotional line is clear and not too stretched, and the overall feeling is very comfortable [Like][Like][Like] The main thing about Yume Girl is to save the anime. I regret it, so she is somewhat love-minded. The heroine is not silly and sweet in the early stage, but she is still within the acceptable range. Is the heroine not the strong female type, but more of a tough and loving wife? [I learned] It doesn't matter, I'm a local dog and I like to watch it. The male protagonist Xuan Gu is gentle (bushi) with a hint of darkness, and it is really good to fall in love with him day and night. Han Laomo is really a bit of a thief, and you really need to be embarrassed if you go against him [face covering] Recommended Recommended [full] [full] [full]

I give it a five-star rating. The male and female protagonists are not bad at all, and they are not awkward at all. Xuan Gu's personality is so charming.

It's very beautiful and the writing is very good. I suggest the author change the title of the book and improve the quality of the work. I have a hunch that if you keep writing it, it will definitely become popular. [Laughing] Can the author say more? Not enough [adoration][adoration][adoration]

I read it twice and it was very interesting. It's a pity that the story is too short and I didn't read enough. Xiao Wei's character is described in such detail that I can't even follow the plot now. I said those who took Xiao Wei to fly are a bit arrogant. Xiao Wei is a genius and he was taken flying by others. It's just a matter of luck.

It's great that the fanfic can be written so appropriately and the original characters don't have OOC.

Really well written. The character design is not broken, the original heroine is also very three-dimensional, the plot is not bloody, it is really great, I can't find a meal replacement

I finished reading it in one go. I really liked it. Xiao Wei was so handsome. It's such a pity that he died. I hope the author can update it soon! ! ! I don't ask for the length of my writing, I just ask that it doesn't stop updating! ! Come on, come on, come on

I continue to watch it after such a long time. It is really well written. Apart from Xuan Gu's love story, everything else is very similar to the anime. The more I watch it, the more I fall in love with it. The female protagonist is also very likable, and she completely understands that the male protagonist will like her. I don't like the part where the apprentice has a secret love. I feel like the author hates the relationship between master and apprentice, so he deliberately wrote about these two people, and there is also a villain in the story about master-apprentice love.

Taken together. It's really good and worth watching. I originally wanted to write a long article. But I didn't have time at work, so I watched it for a long time, about a month. I've been following it, and the novel is quite faithful to the original work. I haven't seen any unexplained poisonous points so far.

It's really good. I thought it was some kind of Mary Sue at the beginning, and I was persuaded to quit it several times in the first few pages. But after reading one chapter, I really enjoyed it, and then I started reading it, and I finished it in one day. The author's writing is really good and very interesting. If you like Mysterious Bones, you can't miss it.

I finished watching it in one day. It's super beautiful and sweet. The story of the heroine's mutilation and the ending where the hero waits for seven thousand years made me cry. [Crying] I still like sweet relationships and can't stand a little abuse.

This novel about a mortal cultivating immortality character, Xiao Wei, is really good. The heroine is not particularly stupid and keeps her bottom line. The hero is pretending to be obedient in front of the heroine. I'll go, you two should continue to be sticky! This sour love! Envious

Come and read! I really like Xuan Gu, the character is very realistic! ! It's so pretty. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] There's just not enough food for 555. This meal is not finished again [Cry] [Cry] [Cry]

Points are deducted because you drag down Xuan Gu. Your progress in cultivating immortality is so slow. You will know how to play every day.

It's quite good-looking, more logical, and the emotional scenes are more delicately written. Thank you for the good meal! It's too long to wait for seven thousand years. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] I can't accept it. It's been too long. I'm crying. I'm going to make a fuss, I'm going to make a fuss! Ahhhhhhh why haven't you published a new book yet [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Why does it have such a low score when it's so beautiful? It shouldn't be, no one likes Xuan Gu?

The heroine is in love, the two are sweet and abuse each other, the author is really cruel, it's so cruel.

Xuan Gu is really well written, very similar to the character of the anime. Thank you very much to the author [sending my heart]

Great writing. I'm a bit at a loss for words, but the characterization is really good. I haven't read the original work, but I really like Brother Tanzi after watching the anime. Create your own sect, you have the scheming and the means, but you just lack a bit of luck. The plan that had been planned for so many years failed because the protagonist failed. Although I also know that as the dungeon boss of a male video, he is just a stepping stone for the protagonist to ascend to immortality, I still feel sorry for him.

It's a good read. Even those who haven't read Mortal Cultivation of Immortality can understand it. The plot is very exciting. In fact, when Ning Ning and Xuan Gu entered the secret realm later, I was a little worried about how the author would come back. I didn't expect it to be so well written.