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I haven't finished it yet, but I want to review it. It's super good-looking. I say it's a great novel, but it's not cliché at all. There's no bloody face-slapping plot. Although I personally feel that the first 1/3 contains a bit too much background description about the male protagonist's system, but it's still pretty good-looking. The point! The relationship between the two male protagonists is very good! Very delicate! Very cute! And the concept of love is healthy and normal! It's really rare! In addition, I would like to praise the author's writing, which is very detailed and childlike. I feel that the author is also a very cute person. But for people who like crazy stories about spending money to pretend to be sexy, this book is very unfriendly [laughter] The latter part is a bit indifferent. The two male protagonists are short in space, and even the main protagonist has less appearances. Instead, a lot of ink is devoted to the daughter of the Zhou family who was assigned. If you write an outstanding supporting role, like Zong Fuli, then it is okay. After all, it doesn't look aggrieved. However, the female supporting character described by the author is in such a state that she can't even think clearly. If it's a long article, you can write it as two men + a group portrait, but you only have a few hundred thousand words, ugh :-(. I still commented too early, and I want to give up and only have a tail. It's too bad [smile]

It's quite good. It's not the kind of high-profile novel that spreads money. The description is very interesting, especially the original plot of the novel given by the system. When I see it, I feel embarrassed and my toes are shaking [face covering]

The setting is very novel, and the plot is also very cute and heartwarming. There are no brainless villains, and there are no terrible plots that are particularly violent. The author is also very cute. Can you please stop emphasizing that it is for rent? The main character is too rich to let it slip. I would like to see a little bit of pretense. In fact, it's okay, but it's not that satisfying. It just doesn't feel like it's pretending to be x at all. It still feels good if it has a little bit of pretense. Too much pretense is not good, and too little is not good.

It's great. It's been a long time since I've seen such a powerful novel with a protagonist with a lot of brains [Adoration]. Although some details of the writing were not handled well [laughing], the author also listened to the advice and worked hard to change [Adoration], and Jin Shao and Zhizhi get along very comfortably, and they are also very good [Adoration] [Shy] So based on the above and my encouragement, I give it five stars [Shy]

This novel is very well written. It is different from the fast-paced, assembly-line novels I have read before. The author's writing style is very good, and it is very humorous. It is a slow pace, which is really good.

It's very, very, very beautiful. Different from the previous great articles, I really feel that the author put a lot of effort into this article. The whole thing looks very warm, as one person grows up, and then becomes two people together, both developing towards a better, higher and healthier relationship and life. The male protagonists all have a restrained and healthy relationship. They are not frivolous and seriously put each other in their own life plans. Reading the full text is like soaking in warm water. It is very warm and happy. It does not have the squandering that ordinary people do when they suddenly become rich. It is a process of truly growing up step by step, becoming a better person, and realizing the dreams of others. I like it very much, it's very unique, the author is great ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧I also hope that the book friends here will have a bright future, pursue themselves in bright places, and meet better people˙ᗜ˙

It's a very heartwarming and everyday story, because the existence of the system at the beginning is very interesting and not dull. The system's sense of existence is getting lower and lower, and the focus has completed a transition from funny (or weird) hero to relaxed love. The writing rhythm is very good, I like meow (＾▽＾)

Although it is a great novel, it does not have the same slap-in-the-face and simple coolness as ordinary great novels. I can see many little ingenuities of the author, and I feel that the author will be a very lovable person in life. There is a touch of warmth flowing throughout the text, making it very comfortable to read.

The relationship scenes are sweet. In the first volume, the relationship line progressed slowly (not without progress, but slowly, every time we meet!), Mainly focused on the career line. But in the second volume, it is different. There is great progress in the relationship line, the relationship is very sweet, and the career development is also good. It's all about feelings. As long as you get through the first volume, you can enter the aunt's laughter period [shy]

Although it is a novel, it is not the ordinary feeling of spending money freely and being happy. The protagonist also has his own business, and it also has a bit of fantasy (Jin Xidong's part) feeling [Love] The relationship between the young couple is very pure and natural, they have a good outlook on life, Shou is very enterprising, and the characters and plots are full [Sending Hearts] Confess to my wife [shy]

A very well written book. Although it is a male channel series, it has the unique perspective of a female channel. The protagonist's family, love, and friendship are all well balanced. Everyone has their own personality, no background. Every plot is handled very well. The career line is written very smoothly and is very enjoyable. But I am following the serialization, and I feel it would be better if I read it from beginning to end in one go. In the past few days, I have been reading other Tomato novels, and I can say that this one has the best plot in this genre, and there is nothing unpleasant about it.

It's okay^ ^ The young couple is sweet, but a lot of business stuff actually looks a bit bad, but most of them are still good-looking. I originally wanted to read it for a bit more fun, but although this article is light, it's quite smooth. Good luck, author^ ^

I think it's a very interesting article. I've read so many great novels, and the setting of this one is more interesting. You can read it and recommend it! I don't know why the score is so low. Not to mention perfect, 8.5 Points are at least acceptable. The main reason is that there are too few scenes of squandering. The descriptions are relatively obscure and old-money style, and there is no sense of squandering of the poor suddenly getting rich. The male protagonist must be too calm, hehe

The early stage is very interesting, the setting is quite interesting, the emotional scenes are a bit abrupt, but the character design in the later stage is pretty good. Personally, I don't like the setting where the system finds a real source, but it's not a big problem. It only involves personal preferences. I usually don't deduct points. In the later stage, the system disappeared and the early stage basically stopped being an article. It is not as distinctive as the early stage. It's either not good-looking or mediocre, but the two protagonists are quite likable and I can continue to read it. I gave it five stars.

It's well written and has very upright views. It's really rare to see such upright views in novels, especially in divine works! It can be seen that the author is a very well-educated and good boy! ! ! [Love][love][love]

It's really, really beautiful.

I've read more than a dozen chapters, and they're pretty good.

It's okay, I hope there's more interaction between young couples

It's so funny to read a novel in a novel [laughing][laughing]

The writing is very good, it doesn't look like a first-time author.

This book is really beautiful! ! ! I've read a lot of these two-male protagonist novels before, but I didn't stick with them. This one is really heartwarming. Baby Jin Shao and baby Zhi Zhi will be happy forever [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Very warm, very interesting, and a daily joy! Hey hey hey hey it's so fun, I watched it while I was working and my colleagues said I laughed like I was losing my breath hahahahahaha

A good article worthy of full marks

Warm little sweet article

It's beautiful, and it's really well written.

I've seen it before, it's great

Very nice, real review

Okay, pretty good

Like, when will they get together [Adoration]

It's good-looking, but it's a bit lacking. Not enough to look at.