As Mao Lilan, I Can Really Go All Out!

Commentary on Chapter 13, I read the article slowly. Background: The middle-aged uncle's soul transformed into Mao Lilan, and he has the abilities in Baldur's Gate. The two people who rescued Belmode and treated each other frankly became lovers three years after the scene was skipped in the background. He cooperated with the winery to develop pharmaceuticals and set up a police department, and this is where the story begins. Writing style: The uncle's writing style does not have the youthful acerbity or the greasiness of youth, but a kind of calmness that comes from the words. This image is also reflected in the protagonist's personality. At the beginning, Belmode confessed his identity as a time traveler, and the words "calm" were not out of the ordinary. Comment: Just like the title of the book "Unparalleled Orchid", this is the story of Xiaolan's unparalleled journey through the world of Conan. For me personally, these ten chapters so far lack some sense of expectation. It feels okay when placed at the starting point, but it feels better when placed on the tomato lack setting. But if you want to see Ran in front of Kudo Shinichi, hugging Belmod and saying words that make him desperate (persecution). I think it's going to be an awesome ride.

It's a very cool invincible novel. It's a bit frustrating that the original protagonist group is too big to lose at all times and they still spy on the heroine. But after all, they are at different levels of life. There is no need to say more about the heroine's victory or defeat. I look forward to the follow-up!

Full marks for encouragement, the writing style and knowledge are well placed in Te Pier's head. It is similar to that historical book, in that real workers with experience and knowledge come to write novels, and this one is even better, because the fan fiction can structure the story better than the original, and it also saves some unnecessary exploration of cool articles/character templates. It can be seen that the writing is not as solid as the thinking, but the humor is not lacking, which is quite sufficient. Two female protagonists can be considered a cp option that can please most readers, although most authors who plan this way may eventually develop the character relationship into a strong male protagonist and a background female protagonist 2; according to the structure of this book, both can play a role in the plot and character relationship, and complementing each other is the first step to not collapse. I haven't seen the part that is being serialized yet, but the writing, plot setting, character creation, and thinking model are already worthy of a score of 9.3 (500 Comments) or above. The aspects that I hope to improve and expand are the solidity and randomness of the language, as well as some background descriptions that are easier to understand or more sequential and logical.

[You taste it] How nice the garden is, and it looks beautiful even after taking off the hairband. The second-hand nature of the company will also change when it is taken over [you taste it]. If Xiaolan takes over the garden and Liangzi, the heirs of the two major groups, plus the winery, this power cannot be imagined [you tastes it] [Taste it carefully] Sharon can't withstand Xiaolan's attack by herself, so she ropes in Ryoko Yuanzi to share the firepower [Taste it carefully]

The plot is novel and interesting. Although the background is the world of Conan, the development of the plot jumps out of the original plot. It is novel and interesting. Every chapter looks forward to the development of the next chapter, and it is not cliche. The female protagonists are Mao Lilan and Belmod, both of whom have very interesting characters. The plot in it is also very good, with online logic. Every plot node promotes the development of the main plot in unexpected places. Every chapter is not to be missed. This is not a mindless and enjoyable article, and it is not just a cool read. Although the plot is written clearly, it is not a straightforward narrative that follows the plot without thinking. Although I don't understand why the score is not up to 8 points, I think 10 points is acceptable! Looking forward to the author's other works [Like]

It's a very interesting book. It punishes those men who love to show off. The plot is reasonable. I hope to work harder in the future.

There are too many Mingko harem books. It's the first time I've seen such a naughty operation. I didn't have much expectations at first. I fell in love with it when I read it. The author's ideas are very good and the world view is quite big. It should be more difficult to write about the Kudo family. I wish I could give Conan two big mouths to laugh at him. Also, did Kuroba Toichi die a little too quickly? There are a lot of secrets that have not yet been discovered, and there are a lot of bizarre ideas that are very good. I am very grateful to the author for his hard work and non-stop coding. I look forward to more exciting follow-up [like] (please give the author a good ending and not a bad ending) First of all, I would like to thank the author. Secondly, I would like to thank the author for creating such a good work. Nowadays, AI has been rampant, and there are very few good books. Come on, I look forward to your next book [Like][Like][Like]

Damn, I still like a one-to-one relationship with two female protagonists, and don't do one-to-many ones.

This is indeed possible, at least it is the only Conan fanfic that I have read so far, where a man wears a female body and transforms into a man. It combines elements of Baldur's Gate, the American TV series The Blacklist, NCIS, and also mentioned a really good fanfic from the Prism Gate Project. Kudos to the author.

I really think this book is good-looking. He may have left Conan's line more open. Of course Conan will still appear, but it cannot be denied that his plot is a bit inexplicably enjoyable. I don't know where it hits people, I think. Nice.

Good-looking, not aggrieved, emotional scenes are natural

I haven't played the game before, so it doesn't affect my reading, which is pretty good. There are quite a few people watching it. Let's not talk about the superficial data. How many people actually see it? Even this superficial data is a bit understated. There are more than 9,000 people. This is not right. From a quality perspective, there shouldn't be more than 9,000 people.

It's very interesting. I like the various settings in the book. There are some words that I would like to introduce to those who don't understand them. It's also nice to have some watercolor characters. People like me who don't know much about them can't understand some of them.

It's my favorite idea. Seeing the imaginative part at the back makes me feel like the story is coming full circle.

Transform into Bailan and travel through Maolilan, chaotic and kind-hearted Blacklan, with supermodel strength. The main CP is Belmode, who has a chaotic relationship, and has many pairs of Lily CPs. Using a magic perspective to explain time chaos, death halo, etc., It turns out to be quite reasonable.

Unexpected developments also lead to different interpretations and thoughts on the main plot of Conan. It raises the issue of time flow that other fan fiction ignores, and truly connects the world of Conan. A very good piece of work, a truly high-quality work in fan fiction.

The author writes very well. The plot is logical and fascinating. The protagonist is very charming. The supporting characters are also well written. From helplessness to redemption, five stars for my support.

Finally, there is a fanfic in which the main character does not follow the plot. I hope it won't be too boring later [eating melon]

It's very interesting. It's good if you can keep it sticking. It's whitening. Good reviews. As for the protagonist couple, everything else is romance, bg, Mariko still insists on being with Kyogoku Makoto, because abandoning it is not a matter of stud or not. If the protagonist doesn't want it, he can create a female partner. It's all an excuse. Romance is too heavy.

The writing is very good, and the author is really detailed. Although he is writing about a Conan fan, he has made his own way, and the writing is very interesting. The main character is many events in Japan and the world, and it does not follow the plot like many fan fictions. It is very interesting (I am curious about how old the author is? I seem to have never heard of the songs he wrote).

It's okay, but I personally don't like the plot of joining the police. It makes me feel uncomfortable even though I'm invincible.

Recommended by a friend and just watched it. It's great that Xiaolan can live her own life! Let go of Ke Ai and Xin Lan. There is no seat for Kudo Shinichi here

It's very good-looking. It's my type. He doesn't serve Conan like a nanny. He has his own actions and thoughts.

It's beautiful. Did you find this book?

He's quite cool in the officialdom, but he doesn't know much about the Kudo Miyano Kuroba family...

It's pretty cool, but I've never played the game, so I can't understand what these games are about.

The most beautiful Xiaolan

Beautiful, the subject matter is very novel

Absolutely amazing! ! An unexpected perspective, I couldn't stop watching it, [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Not bad, really beautiful