After I Quit Being a Substitute, My Ex Couldn’t Take It

Last night I fell asleep watching it In terms of writing style, Tomato is really strong in terms of single theory, but many people are used to those cool, assembly-line fill-in-the-box articles, so it is probably difficult to adapt to them, and they may find them wordy. In terms of plot, it can only be said that it must be a male author. Now the male channel on Tomato has been invaded by female authors. The articles written have more or less cuckold or 🐢 elements. This simple and neat plot looks really comfortable. Although there are still some flaws, it is still worth five stars.

The characters are all lovable, and the plot design is also very good, especially the plot design of Shen Ruge's final trip to the hotel to Qin, which is the pinnacle of this type of regretful pursuit of a husband. It is almost the most satisfying revenge ending I have ever seen. It's just that the handling of the harem is a little simple, and there are almost no Shura scenes. In addition, the handling of some characters' emotional transitions is a bit weak, and it can be seen that the writing is a bit hasty. The setting of this outline is really the best among this type of novels.

In fact, this book is still very well written, except for the fact that it is suppressed for the sake of plot. Everyone has their own behavior and logic, and the heroine didn't really become brainless just because Bai Yueguang appeared. The author also uses another way to portray her feelings and care for the male protagonist. This slow-down feeling will be more interesting. It may not be flattering enough, but I like it. I don't know why so few are reading it. Recommend. The author writes very well, and although not many people read it, he still works hard to update it. Come on, why are so few people watching?

What a clean flow in the stand-in text. There are no poisonous points at the moment. Keep it up 👍

Very good writing style, more than enough for writing cool articles

The writing is very good, and the emotions and personalities of the heroines are not separated. Especially the description of Shen killing Queen Qin is very good. The only drawback is that the story is too short and ends quickly. I feel like the book written by the author is going to be a big hit at any time, so go for it.

It's so sweet to see and have another sister at the moment, and it seems that there will be misunderstandings in this relationship after starting a harem. After all, there is currently my first love, Xiaolu, the school beauty waiting in line to be hired, and there is also Ruge, although the possibility of her entering the harem is not high.

Receive them all? The author is very accurate

If you want to watch something fresh and refined, then you will be disappointed, but if you want to have a good time, this is the right place to watch [smile]

It's so good, come on, author [laughs evilly]