Azur Lane: Here We Come

It's okay, but the sense of immersion mentioned at the beginning is actually average. The appearance of some original NPCs with names will weaken the sense of immersion, but it is not as comfortable to watch as the protagonist with a name and surname. Perhaps apart from talking, it would be better to use the commander instead of the protagonist at other times. This kind of first-person perspective is actually more suitable to be arranged directly in the port area. This is just my personal impression, you can directly read the final summary The character design is a bit OOC, forget about the others. What I am most dissatisfied with is Fushun, he is just lively and active, not a fool. Regarding the self-designed modern ship girls, it is difficult to evaluate the combat effectiveness. After all, the ship girls are not really products of the last century. The main limitation in the plot's combat effectiveness is that certain equipment cannot be equipped on ships. Therefore, the self-designed ships are directly constructed with modern equipment. The initial strength is a little stronger, but the equipment problems can be solved quickly through technology. However, considering this is daily writing, combat effectiveness is the least important. This aspect is too controversial. I'm the kind of person who likes to consider the original combat power background when reading fan fiction, and the rarity in the game has little to do with the strength of the plot. There is a lot of military content involved, and the protagonist is like a professional commentator (the sense of immersion is even lower, and it would be strange for the protagonist not to be separated from the readers if the immersion is not good), especially the second speech in the second paragraph. Although it is not a real World War II ship, it will be recorded in the Mental Rubik's Cube. The experience of this ship, a people and ship in a peaceful era, you can say that they have not kept up with the times, but you cannot say that they do not understand the cruelty of war. This whole section has a sense of humor in living in the prosperity of future generations, telling the predecessors that the hell of hardship is just like that. Finally, to summarize: 1. It would be good as a separate short story, but it is almost uninteresting to integrate into a novel. 2. It seems that it is not so much a fan of Azur Lane, but rather that it only borrows the setting of the ship girl, with at most a siren. So in fact, by changing the character design, it can be used as a fan of other Kanji games. 3. Problems with the plot and sense of immersion. The transition is too fast, and the protagonist is like a fool (the sense of immersion is completely eliminated). Knowing that the ship girl has become a reality, he still treats her differently in front of the yandere five, just to draw out Fujian's words. It is completely unnecessary. 4. Among the fan fiction I have read, it is considered to be average, but after all, there are few fan fictions in Bilan, so overall I still support it, and the support is divided into two stars. 5. Reading suggestions: It is not recommended to be a substitute. It would be much better to read the protagonist as a person named "I"

Can the author change all the names of Harmony back?

Please note that if you have not played Azur Lane, reading this novel will be a bit awkward. If you have played Azur Lane, "I" will automatically be included in your name or game name.

As I read on, there are too few books like Blue in Tomato. Look and cherish.

What is the daily life of you book friends? It's a bit interesting😎

Give me more education and training! [Anger]

I hope the author can continue writing

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good

Did it follow my daily routine? Interesting [thinking]

I've already seen it at station B, now let's make up for it

Good looking for daily use

Daily writing is very good

Good looking. Love to see more.