[Transmigration, rebirth, multiple heroines, darkness, redemption, twists...]
After an earthquake, Cao Nian transmigrates into a brutal fantasy world where the strong prey on the weak. When he wakes, he is locked in an iron slave cage.
When the other buyers want to treat him as a plaything, the senior sister from the Hehuan Sect, a red cinnabar mark at the corner of her eye, reaches out gently:
“Come home with me, all right?”
Mo Sanniang treats him wonderfully:
She teaches him cultivation, buys him new clothes, and tucks him in late at night...
Until one day, Cao Nian finds a line of tiny cinnabar-red writing in the Qi-Nourishing Art:
“Unite the three origins, use a spirit body as the medium, draw blood at the hour of the tiger.”
And on his arm is a wound that appeared from nowhere
“Only one last step...” His senior sister's whisper echoes in the dead of night.
Only then does Cao Nian realize that something is hidden in this gentle haven...
This is my first time writing a book, and I want to write a story with a reversal of love and hate. Cao Nian is an ordinary person, not even an ordinary person. He is a young man whose parents died young. He was dependent on his sister and suffered cold treatment, which made him feel inferior and cowardly. He has to go through a lot before he can grow up. Every person he meets will bring meaning to his life. The hole buried in front of him will be filled slowly in a hundred thousand words. I don't know if the writing is good or not. If you like the book I wrote, that's great. But if it wastes your time, I'm sorry. I wish you happiness every day and all your wishes come true. The plot of Sanniang in the early stage has been changed. If you are interested, you can go back and watch it. The reason for the change is that I feel uncomfortable thinking about it, so I changed it to Sanniang seeing through it.
It's okay, I'm following a dark style, and digging into the story a little bit, it should be good. The golden finger of the protagonist should be the death reply like 486. Later, the heroines should be screened again and again, and finally one or a few are left. I have to say that the only female character written so far that is purely used is the fox. I really like the one in Frost Pavilion. The saint is also good, but I guess she will be a thunder in the future. Anyway, good luck, author
The book is very nice. The author uses his delicate and realistic writing style to create a gorgeous but unreal world. I saw the week end. The author has emphasized many times that this is a world where the jungle prevails, and indeed, when he meets four women, at least two of them want to murder the protagonist. Then it is set that spiritual roots can be taken away, and among the four people the protagonist meets, the two have the lowest cultivation level. It is conceivable how many people in the entire world can be taken away from the protagonist. It is also conceivable that true power does not need to be deceived. In this world view, no matter what the male protagonist does, it is meaningless. It is just a child showing off in the busy city. No matter how smart you are, why would Almighty compete with you? The problem in the first episode is not the male protagonist either. The female pavilion master who thinks she has everything under control is the problem. Her behavior was extremely confusing. If the male protagonist really plays a key role in her sister's condition, she should be optimistic about it. She even asked the hero to find a room by himself? She leaves everything to the fox, which shows that the male protagonist is not important, and the fox is absolutely trustworthy to her. She has been with the fox for several years, but she can't see the fox's problem. She has to ask the male protagonist to wake up after knowing her for a few days? Another problem with her is that she never makes any move to build trust with the male protagonist. Anyway, it's particularly fun when you're in Mystery, right? She really can't tell her purpose, can she? And the fox at least tried. The point where things got out of control was that she didn't even watch the training, the male protagonist went crazy, and she consciously took control of everything, forcing the little guy to fight back to death. Something happened, and she couldn't catch up with the fox, so she could only call the hero back with bare mouth. She couldn't say anything except the word "come back", it was strange that this was effective. According to this world view, she may not have any problems. Maybe the male protagonist is just an unripe fruit in her eyes, not yet ready to be picked. The same goes for female doctors. The only problem the male protagonist had was that he didn't let Mo Sanniang fish for people. This was something he could force him to do. If the author has studied Lu Rongyu, he should understand that without trust, things will develop in the worst direction.
Although the beginning may not be in line with the preferences of some male readers, the protagonist is relatively silly (no sugar), but it gradually changes in the second week, and the reversal is okay, but the combat power may be a bit broken? The protagonist upgrades too quickly, and the subsequent battles may be difficult to write. I suggest that a patch may be better (just suggestion, mainly depends on the author's overall layout). It doesn't matter if the protagonist has more hardships 🤔. Just don't make a mistake and fall down more than twice, and don't stab the people around you. Generally speaking, it's not toxic to me. The author's writing is very good, and I don't feel any discomfort. There are not many people following the update now, probably because the word count is relatively small. The occurrence and handling of conflicts are still possible. When the word count reaches hundreds of thousands, there will be more people. Come on, author!!
On the Tomato platform, this book is definitely considered a good work. As a new author, being able to write such words has shown a good talent. It is rare to have such concepts and ideas in a debut novel. In particular, the emotional portrayal is quite delicate, which is relatively rare in male videos, but this is what I appreciate most. If there is a shortcoming, it may be that the difference in the protagonist's personality before and after rebirth is too abrupt, but overall it is still a masterpiece worth pursuing. I hope the author will continue to write, after all, every great god starts from a young and transparent background. I'm really looking forward to seeing the ending of this book, so don't stop updating it!
The writing is very detailed and beautiful. After reading it, I found that most of the negative reviews were about Sanniang being deceived in the first episode. He is also a treasured author. Not only will he reply to every comment, but he will also change so many chapters for readers who follow him. I have never seen an author who values readers so much. I hope it will become popular. I also hope that the author can continue writing and not be affected by negative reviews and stop updating or end it casually. I really like this book. In addition, I have to say that the changes are very good. I definitely mind it, even though I had some grudges in my heart before, and I feel a little uncomfortable when I think about it. I wish this book will get better and better, keep up the good work.
It's okay, it's quite a selection of readers. My evaluation of Sanniang is average. I don't understand where the protagonist's feelings for Sanniang come from. I understand the attachment after being saved by Sanniang, but Sanniang later took advantage of him and even took the male protagonist's life. After the male protagonist is reborn, he should have complex emotions towards her, instead of emmmmming her from the beginning? I don't know if anyone has played the game The Love between You and His Girl and His Girl. In it, Aoi is pitiable, but Sanniang, I just think she is stupid and deceived. As for what she was deceived, you will know by yourself. In order to save the younger brother who is addicted to gambling, the setting of the younger brother makes people even more unhappy, but after thinking about it, if the younger brother is good, there will be some substitute literature in it, which is understandable. Yu Qinghan is quite good, he has never done anything to the male protagonist, he is kind to the male protagonist, and his senses towards her are much better than those towards Sanniang. Ying'er has nothing to say, and Zhou Zhoumu can only say that it seems like it. Let's go. I don't like Sanniang. What I didn't expect was that the protagonist's sister excused Sanniang's gambling brother. The whole story just made me feel depressed and confused. I also hate the setting of the second episode. In my opinion, this so-called second episode is the same as Huangliang Yimeng. Of course, I also hate the ending of the dream. I don't like Sanniang very much, and I didn't think highly of my sister when she persuaded her to play the main character. What I hate the most is the main character. To put it bluntly, I don't really approve of the second episode, so I always watch the two episodes separately. All in all, it's a good screening of readers. After that, the readers are generally quite fixed. The popularity of this book in Tomato should not be very high. After all, it is Tomato. Anyway, the author keeps working hard and is gone🌹
I'll give it 5 stars for my support. Although I don't like the plot very much. It was too sadistic and depressing in the early stage. The main reason is that the fox demon has a small head controlling a big head, so I was a little angry after watching it. Moreover, the ambiguous plot content in the article is a bit high (this depends on personal preference). The advantage is that the characters are well-developed, and it can be seen that the author wrote it with great care.
Hey, I saw Chapter 44. I read the comments and then read the text. I came with a question, so I said someone was asking. Wouldn't that fox be cleared? I lost it. After looking at it, I thought this fox really deserves to die. It's time to wash the hammer! I haven't felt such a depressing feeling for a long time, and now I'm in a bad mood! I hope the male protagonist Er Zhoumu will torture that fox when he grows up!!! It must be the author, otherwise I wouldn't be able to swallow this breath 😠😠😠
I just finished reading the latest chapter and can't stop. I like the plot and characters [blowing kisses]. I just hope that I can continue to describe love, hate, and emotional entanglements with such emphasis, and not switch to a refreshing style of killing decisively and killing everyone [shocked].